Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3901
Read Count: 1735
The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.
Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.
Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.
This one was cute. :)
Author's Response:
You should see where I got the idea for this one. :)
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
This was one of the first TP fan fics I read and I fell in love with it. I've read this story so many times and each time I do, I'm reminded of why I love it so much.
I always thought your stories were some of the best and you have always been a inspiration to me.
It's been a long time since I've rea this one. Nice to see it again and as always I enjoy your writing.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedWhat a interesting twist to Jacob and Sydney's relationship. Nicely done and thoughtful.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedAnother great one! :) Love MP and am a 'shipper but this is so funny! Having been silly stringed recently I can symphatize with MP.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedAs always, a Hoot and a Half! :)
Reviewer: RaChell SignedChris said it all so all I can say is Ditto here! Love these stories! A joy to read.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedThis is so cute! Love it and it really put a smile on my face. :) I'll have to watch out for 'X's" from now on.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedAlways loved your stories and this one is no exception. Perfect and well done.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedThis is so sweet and touching. Very tender and I love it. Nice job. And of course I'm a Winnie the Pooh fan too. ;)
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery nice and sweet. I love Sam's character and you did a wonderful job of keeping him in character in this story. Love the secert hidden side of him too. You did a terrific job of a difficult subject. You deserve more then 10 stars!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedWow! This is so...powerful! I am speechless, it is so prefect and well done. I love how it is like a hidden slice of Miss Parker's and Sam's personalities that we never see but know must exist. Great Job!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedOnce again, you just astound me with a story line that gives the reader a brief glimpse of the human side of these two characters. And so keeping in character too, you didn't miss a beat and if I didn't know better, I'd think this was part of a Pretender script that hadn't aired. Job well done, and a delight to read.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedWow! Excellant as always! You really had me going there, I was completely un-prepared for who was getting the father's day card! Like I said "WOW!"
Reviewer: RaChell SignedCJ, your stories are still as fresh today as they were when you wrote them.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedVery appropriate! So very Miss Parker.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedOh this is very sweet and delightful. Such a tender side of Miss parker and you can almost picture her with Thomas. Nicely done!
Reviewer: RaChell SignedReally interesting story with a twist. Love the way you played with the lyrics and wove them into the story. Very nice, very tender, took me a minute to realize just who you were writing about.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedNice and intense, quite a interesting 'look' into Miss Parker's mind and some how you wonder how she gets up every morning knowing what she will face. Love the part about Jarod rescuing her.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedInteresting story! You can only imgaine what would have happened if they had grown up together.
Hey Thunderchild, you can pick your jaw up off the ground now.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedIntense! Nicely done and a bit sad.
Different, dangerous and mysterious. Perfect Centre story.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedInteresting story. Liked the color and feeling you wrote into it. You can almost smell the smoke and taste the air.
Reviewer: RaChell SignedJarod thinks that Miss Parker is dead, but what happens when he finds out the truth?
I like this story. It's nicely constructed and well done, not rushed or hurried. You could use a beta reader, but then couldn't we all???? But you are getting better and I'm happy to see you've taken more time with the last two stories I've read by you. Good job!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed