Penname: RaChell [Contact]

Real name: wouldn't you like to know!

Member Since: 08/05/05

Membership status: Administrator

Bio:

The Pretender was/is my favorite show. I've never been involved in another fandom. I started writing FF because Jonathan Yip asked me to write a story and woudn't take 'No' for a answer. So I wrote Melons. That's when I discovered how much fun writing fan fic really was! After that I was hooked! I haven't written anything for a long time but who knows! ;) There's always tomorrow.

Update: OK, well 'Tomorrow' came in Sept '06. Had to write something for the 10th year annversay of the Pretender. And I'll be damned! I'm back to writing again.

Reading suggestions: Fire! End of Pursuit are 2 of my best. Retribution if you're feeling dark. Love Is Blind and Writer's Block if you need a laugh.

 

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Beta-reader: No
Affiliation: Centre

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Silent Auction by gbarton
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod and Miss Parker end up at the same Silent Auction. See what happens.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3901
Read Count: 1735
[Report This] Published: 30/05/05 Updated: 30/05/05


Title: Chapter 2: chapter 2

This one was cute.  :)

Author's Response:

You should see where I got the idea for this one. :)

 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/05/07
Summary: The battle between the Parkers has come to an end

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1240
Read Count: 472
[Report This] Published: 04/06/05 Updated: 04/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: The end

Well done!  Scary and intense. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
Bodyheat by Terri
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Trapped in a blizzard, Jarod and Miss Parker find themselves warming up to each other. SEQUEL: Propositions



Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Sam
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12606
Read Count: 7184
[Report This] Published: 05/06/05 Updated: 05/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was one of the first TP fan fics I read and I fell in love with it. I've read this story so many times and each time I do, I'm reminded of why I love it so much.
I always thought your stories were some of the best and you have always been a inspiration to me.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/06
Unlikely allies by Terri
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Jarod receives help from an unusual place and tries to flee the Centre. This is a sequel to Welcome Home, Jarod

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 12617
Read Count: 3033
[Report This] Published: 05/06/05 Updated: 05/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It's been a long time since I've rea this one.  Nice to see it again and as always I enjoy your writing.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Similitude by Eveylin
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jacob always let you win.

Categories: Prequel
Characters: Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 330
Read Count: 1028
[Report This] Published: 06/06/05 Updated: 06/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Similitude

What a interesting twist to Jacob and Sydney's relationship.  Nicely done and thoughtful. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Summary: A little *trap* for Miss Parker

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1004
Read Count: 2510
[Report This] Published: 07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Never stand on the X

Another great one!  :) Love MP and am a 'shipper but this is so funny!  Having been silly stringed recently I can symphatize with MP.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
X Marks The Spot by Gables
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Another practical joke on Miss Parker. sequel to : Never Stand On The X

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 954
Read Count: 2523
[Report This] Published: 07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: X Marks The Spot

As always, a Hoot and a Half!  :)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summary: Round three on the practical joke front Note - Sequel to Never Stand on the X and X Marks the spot

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 903
Read Count: 2288
[Report This] Published: 07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Make Sure You're Not On An X

Chris said it all so all I can say is Ditto here!  Love these stories!  A joy to read.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summary: Miss Parker's Revenge. Round four on the practical joke front Note - Sequel to Never Stand on the X, X Marks the spot and Make Sure You're Not on an X

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 971
Read Count: 2334
[Report This] Published: 07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: If I See One more X...

This is so cute!  Love it and it really put a smile on my face.  :)  I'll have to watch out for 'X's" from now on. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summer of Sam by whitefire
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A twisted sweeper captures Jarod

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Sam
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 229
Read Count: 1832
[Report This] Published: 07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: --

Always loved your stories and this one is no exception.  Perfect and well done. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Summary: Jarod comes full circle during the Christmas holidays



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1311
Read Count: 4320
[Report This] Published: 07/06/05 Updated: 07/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Christmas Story

This is so sweet and touching.  Very tender and I love it.  Nice job.  And of course I'm a Winnie the Pooh fan too.  ;)

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Summary: Everyone's favorite Sweeper has a life himself-- and he's not just brawn. Sweepers come with brains.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Sam
Classifications: Genres: Comedy, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7778
Read Count: 1680
[Report This] Published: 08/06/05 Updated: 08/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sam: More than Muscle

Very nice and sweet.  I love Sam's character and you did a wonderful job of keeping him in character in this story.  Love the secert hidden side of him too.  You did a terrific job of a difficult subject.  You deserve more then 10 stars!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Broken Times by RRP
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Uh. SamParker Friendship. And sadness.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Sam
Classifications: Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 937
Read Count: 1934
[Report This] Published: 08/06/05 Updated: 08/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Broken Times

Wow!  This is so...powerful!  I am speechless, it is so prefect and well done.  I love how it is like a hidden slice of Miss Parker's and Sam's personalities that we never see but know must exist.  Great Job!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Goodbye, Goodnight by RRP
Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Sequel to Broken Times. A funeral on a sunny day, to say farewell for one last time.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Miss Parker, Sam
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 926
Read Count: 7709
[Report This] Published: 08/06/05 Updated: 08/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye, Goodnight

Once again, you just astound me with a story line that gives the reader a brief glimpse of the human side of these two characters.  And so keeping in character too, you didn't miss a beat and if I didn't know better, I'd think this was part of a Pretender script that hadn't aired.  Job well done, and a delight to read.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/04/07
Summary: The debate over the purchase of a Father's Day Card

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 581
Read Count: 1080
[Report This] Published: 23/06/05 Updated: 23/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: The Father's Day Card

Wow!  Excellant as always!  You really had me going there, I was completely un-prepared for who was getting the father's day card!  Like I said "WOW!"

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Summary: There are 8 redfiles, but we only know the subjects of 5:Jarod, Kyle, Angelo, Lyle, and Miss Parker. Who are in the other three? Allow me to present one possibility. It is after the season 3 premiere. Raines calls in a Navy officer to help bring in Jarod, and has to specifically instruct her NOT to kill him. When she starts having haunting memories, she wants to find out the whole story. She just has to get at Jarod to do it, the only way she knows how...



Categories: Season 3
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 8922
Read Count: 14524
[Report This] Published: 05/07/05 Updated: 05/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

CJ, your stories are still as fresh today as they were when you wrote them.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/04/07
Just a Gift by Andrea
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Jarod sends Miss Parker a gift

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1221
Read Count: 1962
[Report This] Published: 13/07/05 Updated: 13/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Just a Gift

Very appropriate!  So very Miss Parker.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/06/07
Summary: This fic happens right after "Til Death Do Us Part," and it describes what may have happened if Parker had told Thomas what she really did.

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Miss Parker, Thomas
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1016
Read Count: 2035
[Report This] Published: 13/07/05 Updated: 13/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Of Course I Still Love You

Oh this is very sweet and delightful.  Such a tender side of Miss parker and you can almost picture her with Thomas.  Nicely done!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
Sweet Intoxication by Andrea
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Somebody's mourning...

Categories: Alternate Universe
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1032
Read Count: 1449
[Report This] Published: 13/07/05 Updated: 13/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Sweet Intoxication

Really interesting story with a twist.  Love the way you played with the lyrics and wove them into the story.  Very nice, very tender, took me a minute to realize just who you were writing about.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
A Window Into My Soul by Andrea
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: general reflections..

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1614
Read Count: 2206
[Report This] Published: 13/07/05 Updated: 13/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: A Window Into My Soul

Nice and intense, quite a interesting 'look' into Miss Parker's mind and some how you wonder how she gets up every morning knowing what she will face.  Love the part about Jarod rescuing her.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/06/07
Summary: She knew they would end up here. They always ended up in this place.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1008
Read Count: 695
[Report This] Published: 13/07/05 Updated: 13/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Silence of the Ordinary

Interesting story!  You can only imgaine what would have happened if they had grown up together.

Hey Thunderchild, you can pick your jaw up off the ground now. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Secrets by Jackie
Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Ever wonder what a GSW to the back would do to an other wise active, kick ass woman? Ever wonder what the reaction of people around her would be? If you answered 'No' to either of these questions, please, do not read my story. (Geez, I'm kidding. Don't flame me.)

Categories: Season 3
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Mr Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, General, Vignette
Warnings: None

Series: Secrets Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 501
Read Count: 2318
[Report This] Published: 09/08/05 Updated: 09/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Secrets

Intense!  Nicely done and a bit sad.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/06/07
Siphon by Elliott Silver
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The alibi of good-bye.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Debbie, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Character Musing, General, Vignette
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 699
Read Count: 436
[Report This] Published: 11/08/05 Updated: 11/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Siphon

Different, dangerous and mysterious.  Perfect Centre story.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/07
Saboteur by Elliott Silver
Rated: PG [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A glance into what used to be forever. [First in the Sazerac trilogy.]

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 368
Read Count: 1959
[Report This] Published: 11/08/05 Updated: 11/08/05


Title: Chapter 1: Saboteur

Interesting story.  Liked the color and feeling you wrote into it.  You can almost smell the smoke and taste the air.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed
Date: 01/06/07
Found by 24
Rated: G starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Jarod thinks that Miss Parker is dead, but what happens when he finds out the truth?

 

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1152
Read Count: 3398
[Report This] Published: 12/08/05 Updated: 26/04/07


Title: Chapter 2: Jarod

I like this story. It's nicely constructed and well done, not rushed or hurried. You could use a beta reader, but then couldn't we all???? But you are getting better and I'm happy to see you've taken more time with the last two stories I've read by you. Good job!

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/04/07