Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 364
Read Count: 179585
Your rendition of Parker was just amazing.. timeless. So wonderful in fact you have cured me of my need to constantly watch the last minutes of IotH until my dvd is no longer functioning. No more limo scene for me.
Jacci, amazing doesn’t even begin to describe your work. I’m laughing, crying, angsting, loving and hating your work all at the same time. Look at the emotional turmoil you have forced upon me.
You must keep this going. I check every day for an update to this epic tale. I can’t imagine the emptiness I will feel when you feel it is time to bring this fic to an end. It will be truly tragic.. Shakespearean like.
couchtime.. or a straightjacket and padded cell.. the frustration of the main character is evident... contagious. I feel like punching something.
I hope the next installment finds our beloved character in better spirits.. i can't handle all of the angst
Wow!! Special guest author?!! Can we keep her?? Maybe it's time for some fresh meat!
Author's Response: I fear she has already run away, so no keeping her. But always looking for new special guests
Jacci you have proved yourself as a versatile writer! Puff Daddy gave me warm fuzzies in all the wrong places. If Mr. Wiggles shows up, I won't be able to handle it.
Author's Response: I will send him along right away. Gotta feed those fuzzies of yours.
when they say that a good author is a like painter with a gorgeous canvas, i don't think this is what they had in mind.. although it is different and edgy.
to be honest, i feet like this chapter was written by someone who might be suffering from the NH Crossword Virus..
and who cares about I.E. people anyway. It's a piece of shiza, if you parden my german.
Keep that nasty crossword virus to yourself!!
Although having said that, keep watching this space, some virus might be soon coming this way.
Reviewer: KatieQ Signedwith those eyes.. he could be your McDreamy... the taunt bone structure.. mmmm.. alright i'm off to bed.. it was a struggle to make it through this chapter without fallign asleep, despite the high quality and intense plot... i'm glad i made it to the end, the imagery shall give me nothing but sweet sweet dreams.
ode to puff daddy!
Sorry to have sent you to sleep with my riveting writing. Clearly i need some more excitement in the chappie, Enjoy your Broots dream!
ps let me know if you get an email re this response via the comments on email news item or via a new reveiw
(no i am not shamelessy pimping reveiws either...lol)
Reviewer: KatieQ SignedI seriously hope you are planning on continuing with this storyline, but it was fabulous on its own. Poor Zoe, we just can't give her and J a happy ending eh?
Thanks for sharing, and please share if this story or some other in the near future!
hehehe.. that was fun!! gave me a nice chuckle, thanks... time for Manoline to step up eh!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun writing it and yes Manoline needs to do the sequel.
Awww, a very believable conversation between the two. I especially enjoy the last line. Thanks so much for sharing =)
Author's Response: Your review makes me blush! Thanks Katie! I'm glad you find it a believble conversation, I really tried hard to stay in character and like the chapter in Jacs' Test Story says, it isn't easy!
Hahahahaha.. nice work manoline! It was super fabulous!! You and Rachell have done quite a nice job.. is there more to come? There better be!
Gave me a great laugh!!
Thanks Katie.
And yes there is indeed more to come, RaChell is working on WB3 as we speak. And let me tell you, it is hilarious. Reviewer: KatieQ SignedI just knew you would bring Lyle into the saga.. it's no fun without him sticking around. ;)
Author's Response: lol, thanks katie!! ofc its no fun with out lyle, he is the core of fun lol
Hey!
What a sweet story!! There arn't many out there about what would happen if MP used her inner sense (whether or not we enjoy that concept or not!). I think you did well with the POV writing, I agree it is a challenge. Thanks for sharing.. well done!
hahaha.. nice one Rachell. I loved it. thanks for making me laugh!
Author's Response: You're welcome for the laughs KatieQ! It was a pleasure to write this one and with all the dark stories that have left us hanging, I thought it was time for some humor. (hint, hint, I'm not above poking you to finsh your stories which have left me hanging ;) Not even when it comes to answering your review of mine.) Ha ha!
Hey!
Intriguing beginning!! I like how you wrote Ethan's inner sense into the sotry. He's a character who definately hasn't had to much glory in fics.. very curious as to where you will take this. =)
ooh! this story is surrounded with mystery! Can't wait for your to reveal what is going on! Great hook! Hope you post again soon! My only complaint is that the chapters are a little short ;)
Author's Response: Okay I promise Chapter 10 (Which I will post on Monday) Should be much longer *grins* Just for my hero *giggles*
Hey!
I'm the queen of dumbass mistakes. Don't be shy, send out some beta emails! I would volunteer myself but i think Jacci would fishslap me for volunteering my services as a beta.. lol.. talk about the blind leading the blind.
Your story is very creative, but I do agree with Rachell, you have jumped around a little bit. We readers crave little details. Again your concept is truly wonderful.
And to Rachell.. i don't think i've ever been served in a review for another story before ;). I do apologize for taking soo long.. i misjudged my writing speed for the last two months. Grr to school. Exams are almost here and then i should increase. If it makes you feel better the next africa is about to be sent off to the beta's.
So good luck looking for the beta's Courtney.. and really great plot that you have going.
Reviewer: KatieQ SignedHey!
Ethan has been relatively ignored in fandom. I liked this little glimpse into his life, and I hope you will continue onwards with this plot. It's a great start.. also a great ficlet if that is all your muse will allow.
Reviewer: KatieQ SignedI am sorry to hear about the loss of Steven, a tragically young age. My thoughts are with his family in this very difficult time.
- K
Reviewer: KatieQ SignedHahaha... nice pic inserted!! A fun little ficlet.. i enjoyed... going ot let us know what happens/doesn't h appen when Syd opens that door???
(FYI - Africa and Surrender are with the betas) ..now running away quickly.
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks KatieQ for the review! I'm so glad you like it. (big smile here) It warms my heart, but do I look like I'm going to let you know what happens? Well honestly I really didn't intend to do any more on this fic-let!
As for you, you always have that "with the betas" excuse. You're darn right you had better run! The rate you're going, I'm going to be old and grey by the time you get your stories up-dated!
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed
Oh was an intriguing begining.. a tease.. honestly i'm surprised the e-dict supported it.
But wonderful begninning... i cannot wait to read more!! Soon I hope!
- K
ooh a little tease, but it was fabulous. I'll be waiting, right behind RaChell.
Author's Response: The chapters are short in this one, so I suspect you will be saying \'tease\' quite a lot *smirks* Thanks for the review, Katie, I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it. There is plenty more to come... there is much I wanna do with this one!
keep them coming :P.. very intrigued
I would offer some motivation, but RaChell seems to be doing that quite well on her own.
Queue the dramatic music.. the plot thickens...
What's a story without good old evil Raines, seriously. He's not around nearly enough IMO.
- K
You can never have too many people offering motivation IMO.
Dr Wheezer has a nice role in what is happening in this fic...
I'm glad you're enjoying it Katie... am keeping my cards close to my chest on this one...
so much so that I'm annoying people. ie RaChell *smirks*
Keep R&Ring. I like to know what you think!
Reviewer: KatieQ Signedhey tina!!
wonderful start... i'm interested to see how you fill in those 'three' weeks (i think it was 3 anyways!)..it's a story that's been begging for someone to write, and i cannnot wait to read more!
write quiickly :P
- K
Reviewer: KatieQ Signedthe plot is moving ahead nicely!!! very curious to see where you are going with it :P
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