Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance, Vignette
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2443
Read Count: 11418
To whom shall I ship them?
A ten here as well, hope to read more from you.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedSplendid, Mareen! You had me glued to the story with the very first line and quite an ominous opening line it is: "The moment he entered the building, he just knew something was definitely wrong."
It's simply incomparable and so surreal. I loved the recurring "red yellowish tie" and how you were able to tie (haha) the story together and bring it to magnificent conclusion with this memorable line: "Get a new tie."
Reviewer: Mirage SignedWow, that was a hell of a read! I absolutely love this story.
"decapitated....my legs under his bed...head in his fish tank."
And of course, I immediatly visualized a mutilated house fly. :-)
I agree with RaChell, you should have tons of glowing reviews. You certiainly deserve them!
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Aww, I do love Angelo and you did an excellent job with this.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOoh, very nice Sezzie. The only permanent factor in his life since the escape has been constant change- and annoying Parker.
I imagine it would be difficult for him to settle down so to speak. Great piece!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedAmazing. Laconic and just absolutely profound.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedAmazing..
"You say you want your happy ending and yet you detest everything it stands for"
This one simply...it resonates. A new favorite!
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Oh wow! So dark, so very very dark. Great little piece here. I noticed your bio and honestly, you should not be embarrassed at all! It's fiction after all right? I'd like to read more from you...wherever you are.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedGood job. Poor Jarod, never quite "gets" the girl in the end.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedHmm, very interesting. I've wondered about "mom" and "dad" as well and came to a few conclusions, one of which was something along these lines. Great Job, 24!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedThat was beautiful, 24. You kept the characters in character and showed them all doing what they'd generally do, those ordinary things.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedHaha, poor Brootsie. He probably soiled himself. Brilliant, chopsticks.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedHaha. Insanity is good. "Abused Jarod" is even better.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedHaha, such a cute Christmas story. Jarod needing a cold shower, haha, love it!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedNice and very explosive indeed, Vania.
"We only have 40 seconds..."
"Then let's enjoy them."
I love it.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedI am liking it- very much, as a matter of fact. It's a shame there aren't more reviews.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedWhat a twist! Raines alive? Wow! Clicking "next".
Reviewer: Mirage SignedJarod finds his family? Things are about to get even more interesting. I'm still liking this!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedFantastic! I can't wait to see how / if Jarod will convince Miss Parker to help him.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed"What will happen if I trust my feelings.." - Now that is the question, isn't it? I can't wait to find out!! You do really well with the characters.
Reviewer: Mirage SignedGreat twists. You've kept the story flowing well and infused with plenty of action and twists!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedI hate it when writers starve for review (that's why I review, review, review), and I'm so sorry that you didn't get much feedback but better late than never? I hope?
The story is great, and that is an evil cliffy, haha!
Reviewer: Mirage SignedOh, poor Lyle. Hmm, hmm, hmm. I like Lyle too. Very much. Very, very- you get the picture. Great excitment and drama and oh, the twists!
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