Penname: CrackerjacknPez [Contact]

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Truth and Consequences by MMB
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Miss Parker prepares to rebuild and protect the Centre while Jarod must face one family to be able to claim his dream of happiness with the other. Sequel to "Balancing the Scales"

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 233138
Read Count: 58150
[Report This] Published: 08/05/05 Updated: 08/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Taking Stock

I haven't read all the others, but I'm looking forward to it, if this is any indication of your skill.

Literature-wise, well done. Nice flow, especially hard w/ an epic like this, smooth story line, nicely rounded characters. That's NOT easy in an epic.

The only thing I hated was the language used. Too bad symbols didn't replace the words or something. I can understand the need from the bad guys, but not J, MP, etc. Understand it, but hate it nonetheless.

I finished reading 'Resolutions' just today, so a review is imminent, but just wanted you to know you're an excellent writer. Keep it up!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 22/02/07
Resolutions by MMB
Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Happily ever after never seemed so far away. Sequel to Truth and Consequences.

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 369601
Read Count: 14873
[Report This] Published: 08/05/05 Updated: 08/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Picking Up the Pieces Again

I saw less of the words I mentioned before... good job! :p

Heh, anyway, on to the review...

You kept up the connecting pieces beautifully. With 4 or so separate subplots, that's no little thing. I never suspected Crystal's connection w/ another subplot, and I never foresaw how Kevin was related. In the early chapters, though, I noticed the character Kevin was talking to was Cricket, then the next chapter, it was Crystal. That confused me a bit, but otherwise, easy to distinguish. I saw Cricket was mentioned as a 3rd companion, but I figured the Cricket Kevin encountered was actually Crystal, since the conversations were congruent to each other. And I loved how you brought in another colleague of Syd's, another one of the good guys!  Oh, and the best part, Ginger!!!!! I kept on reading (remember, I just came in on T&C), and I was impatient to get back to the CA scene as each of the other differnt subplots had to have their turn. Wow, this whole epic of yours sure is addicting...

Well, time to go back to where it all began, 'Retrospective', and go from there! Thanks for such a great ending.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/02/07
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Epilogue

as usual, whenever I get done reading this thing, awesome! u kept me so addicted to this from start to finish, I've neglected pretty much everything else in RL.... grr, now back to real life... ah, but what a way to go...

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/08/07
Summary: Jarod is taken by someone not involed with the Centre... Who are they and what do they want?

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 118742
Read Count: 33215
[Report This] Published: 14/05/05 Updated: 01/05/08


Title: Chapter 3: Welcome Sydney

continue, Please!! interesting turn of events for j, happenings unexpected



Author's Response: Hopefully will be some more on the way soon

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/02/07
Summary: Can Jarod and Miss Parker work together to ensure the safety of their family and future

Categories: Post Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 13495
Read Count: 6660
[Report This] Published: 15/05/05 Updated: 15/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fortunes Hostage

Nice story! Really, thats the only way J and MP could b together, no matter what J tells MP about running away from the Centre w/ him. Thx 4 sharing.

Author's Response:

Thanks Sabrina, nice to know a fellow writer agrees.      PS Although I don't review other & I'm truely surprised when someone reviews my stories, I did enjoy your stories, again, my thanks! Jax :-) 

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/01/07
At Last by leochick
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: It's Miss Parker's birthday, and once again her father disappoints her. Guess who shows up? Just a fluff piece of JMP. Please read and review.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2228
Read Count: 2510
[Report This] Published: 17/05/05 Updated: 17/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: -

Great story! Perfect for shippers, yet the characters stay true, no unrealistic actions from any char. Nice job!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/12/06
Summary: Jarod encounters something that most Americans experience every six months: the dentist!

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2142
Read Count: 4131
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: A New, Unpleasant Experience

lollll funnny!!! he has discovered HFC before, and been to the dentist's office, but as a dentist, and only for the first few min of an ep, when he sees something on tv, using that news item for the ep's pretend. he's never been as a patient before... nnnnice!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 16/07/07
Summary: A fairy tale read to a certain Pretender just has to be easy, right?

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 599
Read Count: 1542
[Report This] Published: 23/05/05 Updated: 23/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: Fairy Tale Mishap

Awwww, poor Jarod!!!  :-D   Sounds like the author needs to take a couple chill pills and call her shrink in the morning. Can we say passive-aggressive issues?

 ;-)  '_^  ^_^

The plot outside the story is so much fnunier than the fairy tale (and it is PRETTY funny), which, I'm sure you planned!  '_^  Thanks!!!   Hehehehehe.......  *walks away, laughing*

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/07
Summary: If you've ever wondered how The Pretender characters would react to fanfic writers and the situations we put them in, this is the series for you! This unique round robin series (written by many different authors) started on PretendFic by Katherine Bruce (though she had no idea she was starting anything!). Then Danielle : - ) was greatly inspired and wrote a little sequel, and the rest quickly started to come into focus.

Categories: Pretenderpayback
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1246
Read Count: 1763
[Report This] Published: 28/05/05 Updated: 28/05/05


Title: Chapter 1: More Light

*gulp* OK, OK! Here's your review...

 Nice! Doesn't seem like the characters get a lot of feedback time, so I don't know if I get the overall title, but nice idea.

 P.S. Thanks to you, I'm now going back to reviewing the fics I read... thanks for the conscience-wake-up-call. :-)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, CJnP.  =)

Sorry it's taken me so long to repond, I just got back into things. 

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 03/07/07
Summary: If You Give a Pretender a Twinkie-- A Parody. Response to the "If You Give a Mouse a Cookie" Challenge.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 566
Read Count: 1630
[Report This] Published: 08/06/05 Updated: 08/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: If You Give A Pretender A Cookie

Awww... 'tis a pity there's no other reviews, since this is a ROCKIN' STORY!!!!

 I loved it!!!!!!! And, even better, a coworker was near when I read it, and as I pre-explained tP to her before reading it, and a little during (she's never heard of either the TV show or the books... poor deprived young lady), she totally cracked up w/ me/!! We both LOVED it. Thank you!! I hope you continue writing! I'd love to see a "Sydneyed" version; it reminds me of that lightbulb joke Syd told in an ep!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/07
Alternate Theories by Ally
Rated: PG starstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: a alternate pretender payback

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Brigitte, Broots, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2425
Read Count: 1948
[Report This] Published: 17/06/05 Updated: 17/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Alternate Theories

*cracking up laughing* I loved it! loved how j ACTUALLY gets to decide where his life's gonna go for once! can't wait to read the fics mentioned!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/07/07
Summary: Featuring characters from The Pretender and The Highlander. Jarod is kidnapped by a group of seafaring gypsies to help them break into The Centre to rescue a young Immortal, only no one knows anything about the child except its age. Methos and Duncan volunteer to go inside under cover to try to ferret out the child's identity, but with surprising results.

Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 30044
Read Count: 1017
[Report This] Published: 22/06/05 Updated: 22/06/05


Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

wow, I can see why buffyangel68 was so interested in this fic, that she just had to write her own! nice work. can't wait to read the rest, as well as the sequel to which she referred.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 20/07/07
Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

its great! only thing I'm confused is, how do they know jarod'll be Immortal? does being.. intimate.. w/ a female Immortal make the man one? great job.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 20/07/07
Summary: Sequel to Immortal Quest, featuring characters from The Pretender and The Highlander. The Immortals are reunited again when they and several others are held hostage on a remote island as participants in a bizarre game of chess, in which captured pieces are lost forever.

Categories: Crossovers
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 28815
Read Count: 5056
[Report This] Published: 22/06/05 Updated: 22/06/05


Title: Chapter 1: Queen's Gambit

good one! I love how everything ties together. follows nicely w/ its prequel.

'the traveller', huh? sounds interesting. *goes to take a look*

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 21/07/07
Summary: Jarod is convinced a recording tech's death wasn't the suicide it was declared, and during the course of his investigation, he finds himself crossing the path of a most unusual woman who affects him profoundly, and who shares a similar need for diversity in her life.

Categories: Season 1
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16182
Read Count: 1833
[Report This] Published: 22/06/05 Updated: 22/06/05


Title: Chapter 3: Part 3

definitely good!!! I love how u put in damara's name w/ the show his life inspired.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 21/07/07
Dirty Closets by csievers
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Parody of the epsidoes. I thought it was on the line between PG and PG-13, but just to be safe.... As much as I enjoy the Pretender, I'm not a die-hard fan, nor am I a writer, but when I thought of this I had to write it down.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1966
Read Count: 1819
[Report This] Published: 05/07/05 Updated: 05/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Dirty Closets

LOLOLLLL I loved it!!! It was absitively, posolutely fabulous! It was both a little sardonic and innocently funny, at the same time... VERY nice mix of the two in the same story. Thanks for writing it!!!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/07
Summary: Miss Parker and Jarod have kiddies and they're a family and please don't take this seriously.

Categories: Spoofs / Parodies
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Comedy
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 438
Read Count: 122662
[Report This] Published: 28/07/05 Updated: 28/07/05


Title: Chapter 1: Chappie 1 omg

FUNNY!!! DEFINITELY AU, b/c you can't imagine the Centre doing that THAT many times, obviously... and pregnancy and pickles together being the law... HILARIOUS!

NICE fic.  :-D

Poor Jarod.  :-p

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/07
Retired
Soul Splinters by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 67]
Summary: jarod.jpgWhat it takes to heal...

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 63775
Read Count: 22544
[Report This] Published: 23/11/05 Updated: 21/05/07


Title: Chapter 11: Choices

oh. wow... this story so far is so in-char for all the tP gang!! VERRRY good. '-'

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 08/07/07
Title: Chapter 13: Turning Point

oh wow! NICE going! looking fwd to reading what the last thing in the cupboard was... don't remember reading what it was.. mp's recovery seemed too quick to be realistic considering how far gone she was, but maybe that's just me.. perhaps this was an excellent example of the true power of, well, love. :-p

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 14: Survival

grrrr!!!! what a cliffhanger!! good thing you've got more posted.. I liked the 'dream' thing j had, w/ the knight stuff.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 15: Escape

thanks for writing this! looking fwd to reading is sequel.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 09/07/07
Accidentally in love by Azilan
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Sometimes true love can be a pain

Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Romance
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 4255
Read Count: 8449
[Report This] Published: 23/12/05 Updated: 27/12/05


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this is good!!! I hope u finish it sometime in the near future..

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/08/07
Soul Splinters II by whashaza
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary: J2.jpgThis is a sequel to Soul Splinters.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 55671
Read Count: 22932
[Report This] Published: 09/03/06 Updated: 05/07/07


Title: Chapter 4: Preparations

the head shrinker was a good idea. j's problem is realistic. did u plan the whole 'its ur fault' thing from the beginning? I remember something from the prev. fic...

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 6: The games we play

wow!! and here I thought I liked cliffhangers! hehe, good thing u've finished the fic!

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 09/07/07
Title: Chapter 7: The darkness that rules

once again.... huh. wonderfully realistic. I always wondered how mp did her job, as a hunter and such.. I thought j was surprised, then forced into unconsciousness... a struggle? anyway, verrrry good, jarod... oops! sorry... :-p

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed
Date: 09/07/07