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Title: Chapter Three

Ooooh, who else do they have stashed away?

Very nice chapter, I love seeing Centre creepiness in action. Also that "socialization" to them means raising a kid in a psych ward, lol. Better than a basement, it's true.

Reviewer: MarieL Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/11/13 01:15 am
Title: Prologue

Nice beginning, I'm looking forward to reading more. It's hard to fault anyone who knows what the WISC is in a universe about geniuses, lol.

I'm personally fine with longer chapters, maybe other feel differently?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm a big fan of your work, so it's a honour to receive a review!  

Also, I took your advice- chapter three is quite long! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm a big fan of your work, so it's a honour to receive a review!  

Also, I took your advice- chapter three is quite long! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm a big fan of your work, so it's a honour to receive a review!  

Also, I took your advice- chapter three is quite long! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm a big fan of your work, so it's a honour to receive a review!  

Also, I took your advice- chapter three is quite long! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm a big fan of your work, so it's a honour to receive a review!  

Also, I took your advice- chapter three is quite long! :)

Reviewer: MarieL Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/10/13 03:40 am
Title: Chapter Two

Another incredibly well-written chapter.  You have been taking lessons from our beloved PTBs giving us mcuh without giving us anything! Cannot wait to see where this goes and how everyone fits it.

 

It is unusual for me to like original charcaters in Pretender stories, but i find myself here liking both Elizabeth and Patrick very much. I also really love that the Institute is 'legitimate' in almost everywhere, even while the shadow of the Centre looms over them.

 

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reviews!  And more importantly, thank you for putting up with my earlier drafts and being my sounding board for figuring out all the angst.  You are a great and powerful Beta- I am truly appreciative!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reviews!  And more importantly, thank you for putting up with my earlier drafts and being my sounding board for figuring out all the angst.  You are a great and powerful Beta- I am truly appreciative!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the reviews!  And more importantly, thank you for putting up with my earlier drafts and being my sounding board for figuring out all the angst.  You are a great and powerful Beta- I am truly appreciative!

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/10/13 03:08 am
Title: Chapter One

This is exceptionally well written and totally engaging. Michelle turning up was quite a surprise and makes it even more intrugiung as to where this might go. Can't believe i have let this sit here so long without looking at it!

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/10/13 02:45 am
Title: Prologue

Finally got around to having a look at this. Intriguing start!

Well written and i just love how well reasoned the changes in socialiazition policy has come about.

Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/10/13 02:31 am
Title: Chapter One

Awesome update!  More please, this was awesome.  



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command- enjoy!  

 

And thank you thank you for the review!



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command- enjoy!  

 

And thank you thank you for the review!



Author's Response:

Your wish is my command- enjoy!  

 

And thank you thank you for the review!

Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/13 03:22 pm
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