I'm glad she didn't but when I read this earlier I was freaking big time.. you had me fooled and worried.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:19 am
Sydney considering suicide is something I didn't see coming really but I can see he's feeling upset. Very interesting.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:16 am
Alot of very nice moments here. I really like this.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:13 am
Alot of very nice moments here. I really like this.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:12 am
I hope she and Jarod have more sex. Love it when it's written well. ;)
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:10 am
Busted. Sydney caught them. lol . He handled it well.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:08 am
Busted. Sydney caught them. lol . He handled it well.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:08 am
Jarod IS in love and that's why he likes her 'what!' Lol. So nice. Very good chapter.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:06 am
Am still having problems with the security code but I want to review every chapter I read because writing seems hard and you earned the reviews. ;)
Jarod getting angry! I love it.
'Why, Sydney, are YOU going to give her that affection and appreciation?' He turned to his mentor, 'Or behind all this lies the fact that your problem is that YOU’RE not the one she trusts?'
[Report This]Date: 03/02/17 12:05 am
That Parker stubbornness never reallly vanishes. I like that.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:41 pm
I love the way they finally came together again. Great job. I really like this.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:40 pm
She is SO stubborn. We love her tho.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:37 pm
It's getting better and better.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:35 pm
Forget to sign my name.
Sorry.
Jarod gulping lol. Nothing like it in the world.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:33 pm
Jarod gulping lol. Nothing like it in the world.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:33 pm
I love her sarcasm. Great job.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:31 pm
Great interaction between MP and the Major. Wow. She is brutal.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:30 pm
Great interaction between MP and the Major. Wow. She is brutal.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:29 pm
'ass liking puppy' lol Love it.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:27 pm
Big improvement in grammar. It's so much easier to read. Great job.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:26 pm
Big improvement in grammar. It's so much easier to read. Great job.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:26 pm
I went ahead and skipped ahead. I had to know how it ended before I read it all lol. It's soo good.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:24 pm
I went ahead and skipped ahead. I had to know how it ended before I read it all lol. It's soo good.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:24 pm
I hope Jarod kicks Lyle's a$$.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:21 pm
I like the relationships between everyone. REally like this story.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/02/17 11:20 pm
