Oh you shameless writer you! Now that I have begun to breathe again, I can only said shame on you for leaving us in suspense, clutching the edge of our seats until our knuckles turn pale white, our pulse racing and teeth tightly clenched.
OK I guess that is my way of saying it's really good. And I want to know about Sydney and Miss Parker! Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/06/07 03:10 pm
Very nice, love the one liners. You have Miss Parker's sharp wit and tongue in character. Like the fact that you play everything out so the reader can mentally picture it happening. You're very good about leaving things hanging so it's very suspenceful.
I look forward to your next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/07 11:29 am
I am so happy that you decided to pick this story back up.
I love how you keep the tension steady through the different chapters. Can't wait to see what their plans are and what the triumvirate want's with the both of them.
I am looking forward to your next chapter.
Reviewer: Eden Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/07 02:59 pm
I forgot the rating!!
Stupid me!!
Reviewer: Dirlala Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/07 01:58 pm
I LOVE your story!!
I read chapters 16, 17 and 18 on an another website, and it's so intense, I can't stand not knowing what would happen next!! The characters are so *REAL*, so themselves!!
I want to read your other stories on the other website but I'm affraid to mix evrything up, so I prefer to finish reading this one!!
So please, update sooooooon!!
Reviewer: Dirlala Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/07 01:55 pm
First time I've ever reviewed here. This is great; I personally think they're all in character. I love evil Lyle; good Jarod and a Parker who's 'tough as nails' and hard to figure out. Speaking of Parker, what evil plans do they have in mind for her? Can't wait to find out and thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us.
Reviewer: ascii27 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/03/07 12:11 pm
Great fanfic, Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/03/07 01:16 am
I love your story. i read it on fanfiction and was wondering if you were planning on changing any of it? Either it will be great.
[Report This]Date: 21/03/07 08:10 pm
Great fanfic, couldn't stop reading, Love the storyline between parker & jarod.
Please update soon, can't wait to know what happens
Reviewer: alicia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/07 04:44 pm
Please keep writting, I love your story.
Reviewer: Lynn Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/07 02:53 pm
Great story!! I can't wait for more!!
But, just one question: why NC 18??
I really love the interaction between the characters, especially between Jarod and Parker!! Go on, don't stop writting!!
Reviewer: Julia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/07 11:44 am
Great story, I really hope you keep it coming, I love it. I really love relationship between parker & Jarod. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!!
Reviewer: Allie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/07 02:37 am
I LOVE THIS STORY, I HOPE YOU CONTINUE WITH IT SOON. I REALLY LOVE JAROD AND PARKER TOGETHER. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
Reviewer: Cally24 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/07 08:19 am
you bet we want more... the story is great! i love your writing.
can't wait for more.
btw, i know everyone wants it, but don't say it... so, i'm gonan say it..
a little smuttyness would be great, too :o)
[Report This]Date: 20/03/07 05:51 am
Love it, Please keep it up, so far one of my favorites
Reviewer: Natasha Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/03/07 03:45 am
Zsazsa
- Great so far. Yes please write more chapters. I hope Jarod and miss parker can get out of this.
[Report This]Date: 19/03/07 11:32 pm
I really liked it, I hope you write more soon.
Keep up the great work
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/03/07 10:51 pm
I love this story, I cann't wait to see what happens next. Please update very soon.
Reviewer: cally Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/03/07 10:49 pm
