Just a little bit like pistachios. It shocks me every single time I read it.

I love this! Will you be adding to this? It can't be all.

Hey hey, 🤗 Oh, you ended this in a way I couldn't have imagined, and it is more of a continuation of their relationship and lives than any ending. Firstly tho, the ghosts. I wouldn't have ever imagined that either and the comedic touches were perfect, too. You gave us romance which wasn't expected and tears, and oh God I loved Jarods tearful confession of love, that he rejects existing in a world without her. You gave us loads of action as well as supernatural scifi. Oh, and Thomas's reaction to Parker's comment had me laughing so hard. For a sec I thought Parker could hear the trio and I'm glad she didn't. I love her reluctance to let Jarod inside, that final internal conflict before the war ends, and that he averts his eyes for her comfort. You really have a handle on the characters and again I'm so impressed by your talent. This has been a pleasure to absorb and watch as much to read, as your writing always places me there with the characters. Congratulations too on another completed story, and thank you for not letting the dream die. Please never stop writing and sharing.

This is the last chapter....that is bad! Girl! Please. Give me more of this....More> Please?

Ooooh Miss Parker's reaction to her brother and father? being killed are pricless. THAT is my Miss Parker. Oh GOd! Thank you. It makes sense too that the Triumvirate would wonder what the hell happened that night too and would doubt Raines and Lyle. Finally! The best post isle story I've ever read and I've read them all...expect your other stories. This is first of yours ever. I guess I saved the best for last. :) ;)

Wow! Brandt is wonderful. Mirage Mirage. I'm ...I have no words. The way he shook the imaginary dice...just all of it. I've read TOns of fan fic but none as good as this. Some books I've read in the last two years aren't as good as this. Why aren't YOU writing the novels? I mean...seriously. Why?

Thank you for not omitting Broots!!! He is a fan favorite and central to the show dynamic....just as you are central to this dynamic. You show that the Centre really is a cutting edge facility. Cox on projector to snoop... a novel idea. It's all about accountabililty and I know he's wondering why MP still hasn't ensnared Jarod. You writing is riveting, yanks me in and doesn't let go.

Fabulous job with this Mirage. It's true that you tototally nail the characters and flesh them out. This is hands down some of the best writing I've ever read..is definitely the best in the fanmily, and that includes SLM and CVS. I love the crime scene. That you open with original characters that snapshot us into the story and show us how MP and Jarod get involved is brilliant. I'm impressed! Thank you for contributions. I wouldn't be lurking around here if not for you.

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I want to support Jarod so much all of the time and I want to disagree with Alex. I can't do either of those things right now. Mirage!! This is your fault. You do it subtlely too but you do it and it's like a sucker punch but it's one I should have seen coming. Alex didn't lie. What is going to happen next? I'm going nuts waiting for the next update and you literally like just updated this. Please ohhhh please. More?

Exquisite Mirage. You tackle so many difficult topics and this one is painful too. Forced conception, forced gestation, and force parenthood are cruel and unimaginable and I speak as someone who was stealthed by a guy that removed a condom without me knowing it during sex, and you covered that before in Forces Of Nature before I even knew it was a thing with a name. Not everyone wants to be a parent. I'm one of those people. Some people scream "adoption not abortion" as if they get to control another's choice and too dumb to realize that it means a person has to be preggers for 9 months and maybe they don't want to be preggers. I like sex. I consent to sex. I don't consent to preggers. I'm not mommy material. I forget to feed ME sometimes lol know what I'm saying? What you did here is the end result with neither having to endure the preggers but now they have to raise this kid and this is the priority now and will be for the rest of the kid's life. I like how you write this and you do it with a lot of your stories. If a person is going to abort it's all well and fine but if they are going to have the kid then damn it they need to do it right. I see people in public hitting their kids and I always think they should have aborted. Some people shouldn't be parents because they suck at it. This was honest. I like that the best characters ever created, aside from Sam and Dean and Castiel, and Felicity and Noel, and Lucifer and Maze, and Spencer Reid, Penelope Garcia,Derek Morgan, Hotch, and Emily Prentiss, etc, etc. I'll start over. I like that Jarod and Parker, my favorite complex couple characters are the ones that are dealing with all of these real life adult issues honestly without all the surgar frosting bs. I think hoensty is missing in real life and especially in debates that affect real lives. I love this about you. You're so honest that it hurts. Keep hurting us with honesty. There is beauty in this honest pain. More please?

Never thought I'd be shipping Broots and Emily I say as I sit here shipping Broots and Emily. You're a genius. I love your work. More please?

How are you able to write so many high quality stories at once? I can't even put my thoughts together enough to write one story. You must sit and write for hours? It sounds so hard. I'm glad you do it. What on earth would I do without my pretender fix? I'd lose my mind.. that's what. I need my people. The pretender people are my people. Thank you as always for sharing your talents with us.

I'm on the edge of my seat and so excited to read more. You know these characters. You know where to put them. Impressive work as always. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.