Characters: Jarod, Sam
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 229
Read Count: 1819
Fan of the original tele series
In 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.
Gotta say I'm glad you didn't scrape this. Don't scrap your stories. Share them with us. This one is all boom and begins with action and the action continues. I wish I had time to read it all in one sitting.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedA chance encounter with a past acquaintance is Jarod's undoing. Or is it?
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How about writing a sequel sometime? I really love this. There's some comedy gold mixed in with the serious stuff. It's freaking awesome.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed
A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
Hmmmm.
This is incredible work, the way you set up the crime scene and plot, the reasons Jarod and MP are there and then transitioning into the more erotic parts but keeping it plausible by having MP uncertain about a life with him. SHe chased him, is suppose to hate him. She has to admit she never hated him. I don't think it would be easy. You recongize the complications. Really descriptive erotica there. I don't mind. I was a little shocked. Well done.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedWhen you care enough to send the very best
It's cold where I am and my mum is sending me her speciality yule cookies so Im glad to have found this. Is the child Jarod and Parker's? How about a sequel? Continue writing. This is your calling.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedFull circle- with a twist
Poignant and so succinct. I like to Jarod was ordered by the court to testify and on the stand he had no choice but to tell the truth because of his sense of justice. I need to read more short fics. There's a wealth of entertainment and intrigue.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedJarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Great job with this and all of your fiction. You are amazing and you keep me hanging on every word.
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jeremy.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedAh yes Mate this is GOLD! Pretender Gold from amazing start to epic finish. Congratulations!
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedA past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
Congratulations. This is a fantastic story! Few writers write Jarod and Miss Parker well. On top of a plausible plot and correct characterisations you use correct grammar. That's very rare these days. You are talented m'dear.
I'm finally out of the sticks and my internet connection is restored. I think last time I was here you were considering a continuation of Combustion. I hope you'll update us on that eventually. Either way thank you for this well written story. It's a real treat Mirage.
Thank you.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedIt never gets old and it's definitely never boring or dull. Stay well and safe and write some more when you can. Really grateful to you. Cheers!
Same to you, Jeremy. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedTop notch mate!
Post more soon please.
Cheers!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jeremy.
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Top notch mate! You've flawlessly and effortlessly brought them into the modern world. You gave us a spot of humor where it was necessary. Terrific!
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedWild Horses prequel.
whoa dark much Mirage? Im gonna read this one again a couple of times and I think I'm reading out of order. Is this a series or a sequel? This is Lyle and as with any person who was a child in the grips of the Centre this iis too plausible . The details the way you describe everything makes it even more terrifying and creepy. Youre a totally versatile way talented author.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedNothing like her mother.
This is first-rate story telling and professionalism I've come to expect and always come back to.
Cheers!
Are you sure it was my fic you read?
Thanks for reading and for the generous review, Jeremy.
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Fabulous as always. There's nothing I can say that hasn't been said. Please keep going.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedTop notch mate! You're a hell of a story teller telling a hell of a story.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedTop shelf all the way! You are a brilliant story teller and author. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedTop shelf all the way! You are a brilliant story teller and author. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedFinished business.
Nicely done mate. I'm in right agreement with your fantastic twist to this tale.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedNicely done mate. I'm in right agreement with your fantastic twist to this tale.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedA last resort
First rate, as always Mirage. Cheers, Mate.
Thanks for the r&r, Jeremy.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedAll treats this Halloween 🎃! Top notch.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedI'll never understand how you're able to write them so in character. You've mastered the craft of storytelling and writing and you never disappoint.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedExplosive writing! Powerful like always.
Reviewer: Jeremy SignedTop shelf! You're a hell of a story teller and author.
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