german, admirer of languages, sucker for happy endings and a big jarod-parker-shipper :)
When Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.
oookay wow this developement is wonderful. i am addicted damnit
Reviewer: lipamo Signed
whaaaat is going on!? biti live to be in parker's clueless shoes. her üerspectiveis wonderfully wrong and ehr deveöopement great to see. also how kyle and her were bonding over they common experience with brutality after her defending that little girl... love it.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed oh damn you brought rachel into it. although i realy like her character amd i think she is good for jarod. but first and foremost i root for our starcrossed pair to finally be un-starcrossed. they only have to really tell each other what they feel i guess. and for that happening.. i am stoked to see how you make it happen..
Reviewer: lipamo Signed hmm.. does she lie to kyle? i guess so but she would have done it anyway just to find a way to get even with him..
Reviewer: lipamo Signed wow. damnit wow. makes me a little uneasy... she is a damn hard one. i wonder what needs happen in order to make her open up
Reviewer: lipamo Signed ooh this is so awesome! i love how your storyline develops and how you draw our two favorite characters. absolutely in love with this story - i am deeply impressed with your writing skills. i am so very much looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: lipamo Signed Jarod wants something more.
oooh what a way with words... this is deliciously and heartbreaking beautiful. completely my style. wou.d love to read more of it but thank you so much for every word!
Thank you so much, lipamo. My apologies for not responding sooner; I wasn't aware that you'd reviewed.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed Jarod summons Miss Parker and Sydney to Debbie’s school Christmas show.
what a sweet, fluffy one-shot. and it indeed was really funny also kinda weird, and that's absoluely my style :). enjoyed it alot!
Thanks Lipamo, this was for the authors Xmas context. They liked it, even if it didn't win, which I'm really grateful for!
Reviewer: lipamo SignedTen years after Carthis, MP & J live in hiding with their family. The Centre still exists, but Lyle is no longer threatening their freedom. But one day a silent enemy coming from their past suddenly appears. Parker and Jarod are forced to remember what happened ten years before, when everything changed…
Last update: January '23 - Chapter 34
oh, that's definitely a present worth waiting for. i was short on time during the holidays, so i juist read your new chapter now. and believe me, i can appreciate it alot! so great to see that part of the story unfold. Really love it, how miss parker charms major charles without knowing it. and of course, how you show her regrets - it's great that she confesses not in front of syd or jarod, but his father.
thanks so much for continueing this story! it's my only "living link" to the pretender world and i enjoy it so much how it feeds my imagination. as always i'm looking forward to the next :).
I hope you and your husband had the best time during the holidays - it must have been a special time for you, i guess. have a nice one!
As always, thanks for the compliments lipamo. I'm glad you're enjoying this, I'm always glad to update this fic because I know that someone will read it, and that someone is you. So thank you =)
Reviewer: lipamo Signed what a lovely chapter! oh yeah, I definitely enjoyed it to read. Alot! I've been on vacation and completely off the grid the last two weeks. so i was again really really delighted to see that you've updated again so soon as promised. so great! the way you let them love each other is so magnificent. and I got completely teary-eyed reading ethan's message. i was on the edge of really crying. but shit i really hope that lyle is trustworthy and won't betray them. if something happens to jarod's mother.. oh god. but it hopefully won't. and the young parker boy.. this is going to be a hell of a next chapter with so much going on. I'm so stoked to read more and I'm so glad you're writing this! what a perfet homecoming gift! :)
take care, et bises,
Daniela
Thanks a lot Daniela, sweet and nice as usual.
Don't worry, I have still so much in store for you all ;)
Reviewer: lipamo Signed i am so happy about this story, i can't even begin to tell you. unregistered, i've read it til chapter 7 last night (til 2am) because i couldn't stop. I really am an addict for your style and imagination.
i read it again now anyway the following days and review each chapter, maybe i can beta-read it too, when my time management :) and energy allow is.
Ah ah, then you read it all yesterday night! You're the best ;)
I'm looking forward for your reviews :P I appreaciate all your comments. And I promise an update very soon, maybe during the week!
Miss Roxy
Reviewer: lipamo Signed
so incredibly sweet and so much authenticity .. like ~ "i hope for your sake that you eather rob me or kill me because I'm to tired for anything else" - that's sooooo fucking good, i was laughing in astonishment. love your writing, but that's nothing new. by the way: i read one of phenyx stories and it was good, but the story a bit too strange and heavy (for me at least. it was the one when parker seduced him just to let lyle catch him and jarod changed into that emotionless businessman). so i still like your style and storylines better.
Yeah, I enjoyed writing that line. I know what story of Phenyx you're talking about and it's very cool. I love the way she describes J's faults and Parker's good qualities.
Anyway, I'm so glad you still enjoy my style, thanks :P
Reviewer: lipamo Signed that conversation betwenn mp and syd at the end is soo endearing! and the way you pull so much atmosphere from the page is so great, so touching. love it. Although i've already read it, it's again just as wondeerful as the first time to read. now is even better, because i don't feel this urgent rush to hurry through it :), my addiction is well covered now.
I love Parker and Sydney's relationship, I've always felt it could lead anywhere, even more than Jarod and Syd's one. I feel like he's actually a father to her, to both of them.
Reviewer: lipamo Signedi love that he's the weak one for once. and the way mp rises to the occation and grwos so much is wonderful to see. their developement is so natural.
That was the first idea that came in my mind. I wanted Jarod to be the weak one, for once in a lifetime.
And it seems I was right ;)
Reviewer: lipamo Signedthat sex scene is so special. i love how you captrue jarods thoughts when he enters her and recognizes that she hadn't been with another man since tommy and how strong she was for him. also how they grief together and the way jarod lights their mood at the same time. so incredible well written. i'm so deeply impressed how you imagine all this.
Well smut is not really my strong point. But I tried to write it down as I "feel" it.
I don't think between them would be something hard or "weird", you know as in other fanfics I've read.
I think it would be the most natural thing.
Reviewer: lipamo Signedoh reviewing the fifth chapter i forgot to tell you that i was laughing so hard again when he thanked her and she thought first he referred to the sex. sooo funny.
in this one it's so great how you let them manage their first real fight and her disappointment. wonderfully written, just: wow.
the last part of confessions seemed a little rushed to me, although i completely understand why you avoided dialogues here. it's plenty what they discuss and you still capture their feelings while talking. but i'm a sucker for dialogue, and you're so freakingly good at it.
Ah Ah, you're talking about Miss Parker's sarcasm. Well, I like her kidding with Jarod like that.
Well, about the fight...I've read many thoughts about Catherine's diary and someone even told that Jarod was selfish because he never gave it to Miss Parker.
1st, we don't know if he ever delivered it or if he read it.
2nd, I don't think he would have ever hidden something so important from her. There should have been a reason.
So I wrote this "fight" to explain the diary-thing from my POV.
And about the -rush- confessions, well I felt like I needed to tell something without dialogue. I know that's probably one of the best things I can do, writing dialogues (probably the ONLY thing I'm good at), but this one...I don't know, I liked it just simple as I put it down. No spoken words, only tales. Like if this was only their moment, not ours.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed oh i love this so freaking much!
Well this was only my fave part of the story, as you see I didn't save up words in this chapter.
I wanted them to talk about past lovers and I tried to imagine everything they have thought and felt with all of them.
Of course the most difficult moments always come with Tommy and Zoe (which I particularly loath).
But it's always so much fun to write Jarod's reaction when he realizes that he is actually in love with Parker and not with Zoe. And I usually write different scenes in every fiction I write. But I always feel obliged to describe Jarod's change of attitude towards Zoe, because when the show ended we didn't know what happened between them.
The only thing I'm always sure about is the fact that Alex was ESSENTIAL for him to understand his real feelings. That's why I love Alex so much!
Reviewer: lipamo SignedWhen i reviewd this chapter for the first time, i wasn't talkiing about this one explecite, and i really have to do that. because it's beauty is enchanting, it's so marvellous. the way you introduce us to parkers story.. when i first read it i kinda prayed that the husband would be jarod, and after read her children's names i was assured. but the way you decribe their relationship and write these kissing scenes.. it just melts my heart, so incredible beautiful, all that feeling goes straight to my heart. this first chapter is really hard to top and now that i've read until chapter 8, it stands in a row of unbelievable great parts of this story. because there are so many chapters when i eather was so touched i nearly cried, or i reached kinda turned on for ice-water :) and all the time wished this should never end :). i know i'm getting delusional, but all i want to say that this is one of the best things i've ever read. i enjoy it soso much. thanks alot.
Thanks @lipamo, as usual. Thanks for your nice words.
Reviewer: lipamo Signedoh yeah, i feel exactly the same. while both Zoe and Tommy were really fun and good for j and mp, i absolutely disliked them. :) and i was sooo grateful for that alex charater.. i guess it's completely normal to root for a sociopath ;) when he's the one who brings the couple we've invested to much in on the next level.
yes and all that wonderful sarcasm and kidding swirring around j and mp - i can't even begin to tell you how much fun this is to read. to me that's the biggest quality proof for a writer: dialogues and sarcasm. i just loove your style.
=) Thanks @lipamo
Reviewer: lipamo Signedoh yeah! this just what i had in mind for them and i love to read it. the scene with broots and syd on the phone was great and also that wonderful sappy conversation at the end here now.. but where is the sex scenen? :) toooo bad you didn't write it because i think you're really good at them! looking very much forwrad to the next chapter, patiently waiting :) yours, lipamo
Thanks lipamo, but you know I'm not really good at writing smut :)
I hope to update the ff soon, but with Saving Luke coming out I think it'll take some time to interest people in fan faction again :)
Be patient!
Reviewer: lipamo Signedooh shit. ooh awesome. ohh man, this is so good. love their dynamic as usual, and wow i was craving for your story to continue! thanks so much for it, but knowing parkers inner sense is on alert .. i'm getting nerveous. looking for the next one!
As usual, you're very kind. So much that I don't deserve it ;)
I hope you're going to love the next chapters too, I promise I'll try to update the story as soon as I can.
Thanks for the reviews!
Reviewer: lipamo Signed what a turn of events!!! I was off the grid for two weeks again, on vacation without internet, and i loooved to see you updating this one! and i completely understand why you like to write lyle. so devellish, so mean, so opportunistic. he makes the interaction between jarod and mp even more beautiful. the way she says "you have no idea" is so wonderful to imagine. she said that line often in the show, but now she has not only that wondeful icy glare, but also a loving fullyness swinging with it. and i loved to imagine jarods surprised reaction. so good!!!! thanks again and again for this chapter and for updating, i'm patiently waiting for numero 12. :) merci, grazie, thanks so much and dankeschön!
I was wondering where you were! ;) Thanks for your thoughts, as usual, I'm really glad that someone's still reading this.
I promise a new update soon, stay tuned!
Miss Roxy
Reviewer: lipamo Signed wow, i have to say: many people tried to write a good reunion-scene between jarod and his mother. but i never really had the impression that it really worked, it never felt right. but your scene - i have to, is awesome. really lovely how you describe it and it seems real. also miss parkers speech and conversation with jarod's father: really really well written, i was on my toes. also how jarod reacts is beautifully realistic and not too cheesy. the only thing i could critic on is the little note how j and mp moved closer to jarods parents as they meet again: hand in hand. it was sweet, but in my tastes a little bit too sweet. anyway, it wasn't important to me and i LOVEd this chapter. soo looking forward what you got in store about lyle and master parker... i'm stoked! thanks so much again and again.
Well, I was waiting for you review lipamo.
First of all, thanks for the compliments. I think it's pretty hard to write about a reunion if you don't have it in your heart. In my mind, I've always thought that this would be wonderful for Jarod, but he would also have so many questions for his mother.
In other fictions I wrote, Major Charles accepts Miss Parker's presence with his son, but lately I've been thinking that maybe it wouldn't be 'so' simple, so I had to write a more resistent Major Charles.
For the "hand in hand" thing, I added it while I was reading the chapter before publishing. I thought it was a nice touch to make Jarod show his parents that he and Miss Parker are an item. But I appreaciate your note about it. Maybe it was too sappy =)
Reviewer: lipamo Signed oh wow, what a temper. and to let him walk home? that's kinda mean. at jarod's place, I would be really pissed at her. yes, his lie about Lyle wasn't cool either. but that's completely overreacting. she made her point clear by not really kissing him and telling him to sleep on the couch that night.
anyway, it's a wonderful opportunity to establich family dynamics and you do that extraordinary well. also you show us the children's characters in relation to their parents a bit more and that's just beautiful.
i'm so grateful that you found the time to write although you're getting married. - congratulations!!! I wish you the very best and it seems you found it already. But there'll be more to come. Thanks so much! I'll be here, patiently waiting for your next chapter. Have a nice one
Thanks Lipamo.
Yeah, maybe Miss Parker was a bit overreacting.
But I believe that after having her head filled with lies of her father for twenty years, she wouldn't be so accomodating if finding out that the only person she truly trusts was lying to her.
I promise, she's going to forgive J, don't worry.
And thanks, yes, I'm really happy for my incoming wedding. It's like a blessing.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed ohhhhhhh wowowowowowo! you know i was waiting so longingly for this. I live and read in the moment and don't think much past it. So i didn't see this coming, but it's the best outcome of their relationship of course. and sincerily hope that it doesn't stop. I love thier conversation, jarod's fears and the way you let us know how overwhelmed and happy he is by becoming a father. The way you only let Miss Parker speak is geniusly written, also because there's so much between the lines. i love how you shape their characeters, is't pure beauty. I'm soo looking forward to your next chapter. but be assured: I'm patient as always and love to check this site regularily just for fun :). have a good time and take care! salut!
Well, I'm writing these days.
So maybe I'll update sooner this time. Thanks for your kind words ;)
Reviewer: lipamo Signed