A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61579
Penname: Con-O [Contact]
Real name: Connor Schupp
Real name: Connor Schupp
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Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61579
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61579
[Report This] Published: 24/12/16 Updated: 14/07/23
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: 01/02/17
I know how much you love Sydney. You do still love Sydney? I'm surprised this hasn't happened to him. Plausible as always. And very short.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 01/02/17
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: 01/02/17
So love all the forensics stuff. Great chapter! I want more and more. You rule this fandom. Keep going. Please. And update your other stories too. I need more!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 01/02/17
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Author's Response:
Date: 21/10/20
You always snatch me back here. I'm addicted.
More please?
Author's Response:
There shall be more. Thanks for the r&r, Con-0.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 21/10/20
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Author's Response:
Date: 03/07/21
Top notch.
Bravo!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Con-0.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 03/07/21
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Date: 20/09/21
Amazing. Have I told you lately that your prose is exceptional and your characterisations are eerily spot on?
Firstly, I love Parker's interrogation, how it's all business as usual at first [possible flirting?] and then she holds Jarod's feet to the fire. He comes through ok. I'm glad about that. He's not a stalker, wasn't watching her, was just watching out for himself without being too weird about it.
There are still some feelings there. The visual descriptions you share, the smiles of sorrow and longing. Oh, Mirage. It's like I'm watching them.
There is always a way back. That's the most Jarod thing to say ever and I love you for climbing into his mind and into all of these characters mind somehow.
Miss Parker's aw honey you shouldn't have was the same perfect sharp wit but I think she meant it too and don't blame her for any reluctance to boot up that laptop.
Many authors can accurately write one character well. You write them all and I feel young again and like I'm watching a lost episode. Thank you for sharing your gifts with us.
I've said it before but here I go again. This is Pretender perfect.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 20/09/21
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Author's Response:
Date: 28/01/22
Top notch Mate! You're an amazing story teller and author. Nice name that Willow. I read that the Bidens just adopted a cat called Willow today and I reckon it's not a coincidence cos don't most Americans read fanfic hehee? Even respected world leaders read here and are inspired to name their pets after characters here.
Author's Response:
*opens new tab* Aw, she's a sweetheart.
Thanks, Con-O.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 28/01/22
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Date: 12/04/22
You've got the pages flying. I love your descriptive work and characterisations and all of the action.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 12/04/22
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36694
Read Count: 74019
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Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36694
Read Count: 74019
[Report This] Published: 25/03/18 Updated: 01/08/23
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Date: 15/08/19
Jarod laid it down epically and it's about time too. On the series he would get in a barbed one-liner and take a jab here and there. I'm glad he finally told her what's what and I still sympathetize with them both. Impressive. Every line is impressive Mirage. Thank you for letting them duke it out verbally before having sex. At the end of all that pain and hurtful words there was not fight left I guess. I'm so curious to know what happens next. I hope you're writing quickly.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 15/08/19
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Author's Response:
Date: 07/11/19
"remind me not to put you on speaker phone: lol. Jarod is so funny and Parker's deadpan responses are funny. I like how she don't act shook at all by anything he says. She's all you can talk while eat. I'm glad they're gonna have dinner. Finally. The characters are all perfect the things they say are brilliant. It's like watching the series all over again. Thank you for that. Congrats on this.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Con-0.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 07/11/19
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Date: 25/05/22
It's like reading a painting. You illustrate with words. It's so amazing. I hope you'll update all of your stories. Please? Congratulations!!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 25/05/22
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Date: 10/08/23
You're in top form as always mate!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 10/08/23
Summary:
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 913
Read Count: 2036
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 913
Read Count: 2036
[Report This] Published: 16/10/18 Updated: 16/10/18
Title: Chapter 1: Refuge in Reverie
Author's Response:
Date: 17/10/18
My brain doesn't want to brain right now young lady. Spectacular work here Mirage. I am curious about what else you're hiding in your literary vaults. I'm thankful I saw the buzz on twitter. I might have missed this without it. You're a genius and... you know just keep being a genius. This is perfect. It's magic. And I think it will easy to film an ending like this one too. Somone needed to say it. Thanks for sharing with us and thanks to the person who asked you to dig up your first works.
Author's Response:
My brain is the same 24/7. Um. You're incredibly.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 17/10/18
Summary:
Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 89
Read Count: 699
Nothing like her mother.
Characters: Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 89
Read Count: 699
[Report This] Published: 03/12/21 Updated: 03/12/21
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 07/12/21
Top notch as always. You leave me wanting more again. Do I ever ask? More please?
Author's Response:
There will be no more of this. Sorry.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Con-O.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 07/12/21
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 05/01/22
Am upset you won't be continuing this but I understand. It's perfect stand alone but I love your writing and will always welcome a continuation.
Reviewer: Con-O SignedDate: 05/01/22
Summary:
Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4197
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Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4197
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 18/04/24
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 05/01/22
Top notch mate. Short chapters but I can appreciate the quality over quantity any time. You continue to amaze me.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 05/01/22
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Author's Response:
Date: 05/01/22
Stunning second chapter. I was almost afraid that it was Miss Parker that was missing even though it was pretty clear it was a different pair of blue eyes. This made me so relieved. Miss Parker is on her game here. Strong but not overdone or pretentious. I love it. Quite the mystery-suspence crime thriller in play here. I hope you'll update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and the much-too generous review.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 05/01/22
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: 11/03/23
Top notch mate. This is the quality I've come to expect and always receive from you. You never disappoint. More!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 11/03/23
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 10/08/23
please update soon
Author's Response:
Done.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 10/08/23
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 10/09/23
I was hoping Jarod would have his day with at least one of the people involved in Miunas murder.
You exceed my expectations and hopes time and time and time again and you've done it again.
Congrats! 🎉 🎉
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 10/09/23
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Date: 22/04/24
omg I don't usually read the other reviews but my mobile scrolled cis someone nudged me at airport Lorraina is cray. I know why you'd think ear wiggling is an euphemism for something else!!!
Lorraina is like "why a euphemism?"
Also Lorraine is like "I am dirty and get all over him and objectify him and love euphemisms"
I don't know much about the actual actors either. I knew about the ear wiggly thing because IMDb or Wikipedia or something but you can't be expected to know everything about the actors.
I appreciate that you don't objectify him and that you don't obsess over actors. It's so pathetic of fans to want to screw actors they don't even know. I'm glad you're not reeking of that desperation
I love your writing and story telling skills too. more please! You're amazing 🤩😻🤩🤩🤩.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 22/04/24
Summary:
Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 82
Read Count: 1201
Finished business.
Characters: Jarod, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 82
Read Count: 1201
[Report This] Published: 30/06/22 Updated: 30/06/22
Title: Chapter 1: Justice
Date: 02/07/22
Bloody well done mate! Unexpected treat and I am grateful to you. Stay well!!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 02/07/22
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4683
A last resort
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4683
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 29/09/22
💯 Your writing is tenacious and bold. Really sharp. It grips my hand, gets under my skin, and demands I pay attention. This is well crafted as all your stories are. I like how fresh your ideas are and it's amazing to see how you execute them, always surprising me. You're such a refreshing shift. I've read a many stale plots but you....YOU always leave me wanting more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 29/09/22
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 01/02/23
Ooooh congratulations 🎉!! Parker's expression after the close moment with Jarod leaning over..resembling the look jarods dad had before...when the plane was losing altitude.. God, that is so funny 🤣.. but plausible..parker looked really stunned and alarmed almost kissing Jarod in car this..she was so different from the bark-bite parker we knew. I love the traces of comedy..and you know these characters and where to put them. Please update soon. Thank you for writing!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 01/02/23
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Date: 27/12/23
Ohh I love this so much Mirage. I'm so grateful always to you for writing and sharing with us. This does my heart so good. Take care of yourself ok??? I love you so much fellow fan-mily !!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 27/12/23
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 282
Part six of The Return series.
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 282
[Report This] Published: 14/11/23 Updated: 14/11/23
Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind Of Freedom
Date: 17/11/23
Exquisite as always. You're a master story teller and I can't get enough!!!!
Reviewer: Con-O Signed Date: 17/11/23