Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 6740
Read Count: 17557
Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Oh wow you do keep me surprised and happy. How in the hell do you write them ALL exactly in character all the time? Amazing as always. So good to see them ride off to the pastry shops together. Sounds happy to me. I love this and love you for writing it. Thanks a a gazillion! Congratulations 🎉 too!
Reviewer: lisa SignedI'm shipping Broots and Em now!! Are they a thing now and how hard is Jarod gonna flip when he finds out they are??!! I need more now!!
Reviewer: lisa SignedA past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
"nothing if not metaphorical" oh my heart I 💕 love this.
Reviewer: lisa SignedThis is just as intense and emotional the second time around as the first. So powerful.
Reviewer: lisa Signed"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.
Reviewer: lisa Signed"You must be a genius or something" lol love the light conversation. and Jarod s " but not the correct them" and the thought that they once planned so much and would say " can't go soon enough" to each other oh they are so perfect together and it's so tragic.
Reviewer: lisa Signedoh so hot 🥵🤩 🔥 love the deets.
Reviewer: lisa Signedhope to read more about willow and giana and Nick. so amazing. now I'm all caught up reviewing all 20 chapters. love each one.
Reviewer: lisa SignedWe are demanding fans! I love that they tasted each other although Jarod barely got a taste before things took a turn. In hindsight reading this is still exciting even though I know what will happen next..still suspense and that's powerful. I know why Parker reacted that. way now but still wish she hadn't... such a masterpiece!!
Reviewer: lisa Signedlobotomy..the centre is a messed up place and I'm thankful to you for exploring it's darkness.
Reviewer: lisa SignedThis dude is scary af. I remember being so creeped out the first time around. Poor Sydney. Poor poor Sydney. I was so worried the first run through. I'm still just as worried the second time through.
Reviewer: lisa Signedlol, yep, it's true, Jarod has never needed an invitation. Parker's final thoughts before the next update lol. Two sociopaths. lol.
Reviewer: lisa SignedThat's really Sydney's mum and pop and last name is Mikhail. Verrry good Mirage. So you do know how many psychiatrists it takes to change a lightbulb. You understood the assignment. Brilliantly done.
Reviewer: lisa Signedlol Jarod shouldn't give her such a hard time. She's worried. But you said before that Jarod is going to Jarod. Jarod taking a pin to Lyle's inflated little balloon was hilarious. He just wanted to laugh at Jarod's misery. They're exactly like I remember. I love it.
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After all of the bickering and threats Jarod tells her to lock the door. That's true love right there. I didn't catch that the first go around. THat's proof he loves her. Oh, Mirage. You always write something special and you write it exceptionally....just spectacular.
No foreshadowing yet. Gotta love Sydney trying to help. Always trying to help.
Reviewer: lisa Signed"If I'd only known you wanted to be submissive" When Jarod gets salty he gets extra salty.. and scary. Speaking of scary ... it's scary how in character the characters always are. Gotta love Broots here.
Reviewer: lisa SignedOk now that was just hot. Lyle and Jarod are hot together. I said it. There.
Reviewer: lisa SignedScary darkness. You write it all so well.
Reviewer: lisa SignedI remember the first time I read this and how shook I was. I should have reviewed this then. Parker's slipping a little bit, trying to keep up the facade but smoking again and scotch. She's shaken and still trying to be tough. You balance her emotions brilliantly.
Reviewer: lisa SignedWhoa hold up. So... oh ohh. Yes! Jarod has always been so much like a father to her. A better one than Raines or Mr. Parker for sure. Oh, Mirage, my shipper heart just thumped harder. I love this. It is plausible. If Raines could manipulate puberty and it can be done according to my Scientist sis in law. She says it shouldn't be done. Not a fan of cloning either but with the funding and time it could be done. Amazing. You really make my brain work and do the thing no one else does. I love it. I will go back and review chapters 1-18 because I owe you the reviews. I wonder if you provided foreshadowing in previous chapters. I LOVE this "helluva plot twist." Keep going. Tachy in the sheets .. that's Jarod. Love it.
Reviewer: lisa SignedAwesome first chapter. I love your insights into the troubled mind.
Reviewer: lisa SignedThis hit me directly in my eternally shipper soul. Love. Are you sure you're not a shipper? Super sure? More please? Cherries on top? You like cherries? With whipcream? Please?
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More more more!
I'm an addict. Give me more.
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