A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61620
A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
Oooh. Terrific!! I love Parker's snark in the loft safe house and the withered flowers and your descriptions of it and omg it's just like they were beautiful together and why why why aren't they together? Please Mirage put them back together again. Have you not met Michael T. Weiss yet? Where is my selfie? Bah. I'm kidding with you. I think you've already met him and are keeping it secret. I won't bother you about him. I swear. Please write more.
I don't know why they aren't together, or if they'll ever be together. We shall see.
Ah, this.
Again.
No, I don't think I'll ever be bothered by your emails and reviews, all filled with adoration for the beloved actor. I completely understand that you want to seek a distraction from all of the ugliness in the world. It doesn't bother me at all. The question of whether or not I've met him, and in which city, seems to be bothering you, however.
My lips are sealed.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedFabulous work as always Mirage. You keep the pages turning for me and I could repeat myself and talk about the perfect characterisations and transitions and all of that brilliance but I know you know what you're doing. Keep doing it. I'm hooked hard.
You still haven't got that selfie with Michael T. Weiss? Have you met him? I think you have and you are holding out. You could update his on how he's doing if you have met him recently jus sayn. I read your response to my reviews. I'm glad I don't bother you by talking about him and it's true what you wrote that it's a testement to him and his ways that I want you to meet him and that I can't shut up about him. Have you seen him lately omg!?! he looks so much older and so much different and still really totally good looking but with gray beard and gray hair and doesn't even look like Jarod much anymore.. and do you like that more or less? I know you once said you didn't like Jarod all that much, his duplicity or something and all. I'm just really curious. I'm glad you're not freaked out by him and all. and all. So yeah. keep writing.
Love you and your work. MORE!! NOW!!!
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazzzeiinggg you write them like they are on the show and make them sooooo real and I want morrrreeeeeee!!! After your reply to my other review I gave you I believe that I am right and you have met Michael T. Weiss and are being discreet and mean. LOVE that man! Was he like Jarod and did he look like Jarod and did he act like Jarod when you saw and met him????!
MORE!
Are you coming back? I need more. The Pretender is my favorite tv series and this story is one of the best stories I've ever read. You know I love Jarod. Oh, I love Jarod and Miss Parker. I love Michael. I'm a big fangirl. I need more. Aren't you a fan girl? Why can't you understand this addiction? I've watched these character so much on tv and I've met these actors so I pretty much know them. I need more of the fanfic because they aren't on tv anymo. Please don't stop writing. More.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedUh-uhh! Mirage. I always hear their voices and see their facial expressions when I read your stories. It's like sitting here watching Michael and Andrea. Your characterisations literally blow my mind. You get me in that zone you know ?? where I forget everything except the story and it's like I'm in it watching it and not reading it? I WANT MORE!
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedOOOOhh I hope he is her bio dad, just a sperm donor really, but he has been a father figure at times...now George Michael is singing in my brain 😭😭😭
I want to know they will continue together this way and what repucssions are....will they regret sex later???
I think they won't.
I trust you to me hanging on the edge of my freekings seat!!!
You RULE!!!
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed_
Okay I love this and I'm so hooked. You are an amazing storyteller and writer and I need more. Now. Yeah this is perfect and Eli is so realitstic. Parker should be pissed at Jarod. I like how plausible it all is when you write them. Please keep writing. I mean it. Don't stop writing ever.
Oh and touche on the review response. So I wasn't really bullying meanly just playing with you about meeting the real Jarod so I'm glad you're not angry and you don't take things seriously. But now I see that it's my fault that I haven't introduced you to Michael T. Weiss.... I see what you did there and I like it. You probably didn't expect this but now I will have to fix my mistake by totally introducing you two because he is so damn wonderful and I know you will freaking love him...I can even take you out partying and get you drunk first or get a beta blocker... some of his fans get woozy and too excited. This one girl I knew was so freaked out nervous it was 2 cute. She was terrified lol. But he's soooo nice. He's really so nice. The nicest ever. He really puts women at ease and he really put his arm around me and everything for my selfie with him. Hot. You'll lvoe it. It's sooooo exciting. Every fan who writes fan fic for the Pretender HAS to meet him. You HAVE to do it. I sent you an email.
Um.
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedOh uhhh! GOD! Mirage. I want more. I'm hooked. I'm always hooked on your writing. Pretender perfect like always. I won't aggravate you about Michael but I should. You need to meet him. I met him and I lived!!! I think you'd get along really good with him. Until then keep writing. I'm totally addicted to your writing.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedOoh oh! I love this. Hit me right in the freaking feels Mirage.
More?
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedSo freaking addicting!
SO many shipper feels here and omg Stella is beautiful.
More!!!!
Reviewer: Lorraina Signedhope u will updae soon!! it's like heroine and I usually only say that about smut fiction!! I can see Jarod and Michael t in each scene and having met him 3 !!! times I know what I like and I know him!! there should be smut or sex but even if there isn't I will read this.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lorraina.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedOoooihhh so hot. I love this!! When are you updating again????!!!! Do I need to ask Twitter?! Do u need 2 b shared on Facebook and Twitter andddddd Instagram???!!!!
Please update..
It seemed the deal was you update if we keep your writing on the downlow but if you holding back we get to share.... and
why don't you want to be shared?? Are you ashamed of your writing that we love?? let us share u everywhere with everyone!!!
MORE!!!
No, it isn't necessary to extort anyone. What happens in Missing Pieces SHOULD stay in Missing Pieces. If I wanted the scribblings posted to twitter I could probably figure out how to do that, but I don't. I didn't make a deal with anyone. Thanks.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed
GOD!!!! I LOVE THIS! Give me the Mirarchives. I have a birthday coming up in 2019. Oh, honey you blow me so away!
Do you still not have a selfie with Michael T??!! No autograph?!!
I still think you should get a crush on Michael T you know because it would be a new perspective and so cute of you and awww. Just a teeny little bitty crush on him. He's really sweet. You'd like him. I had a real nice close up to him selfie like I tried not to get all over him but I still probably freaked him out cos I'm so into him. But I get what you're saying about not disrupting his life and all. I'm sorry. I can't really talk about anything else but him. I see him when you write and he's the only Jarod so it's your fault. But don't stop writing. I need mores. I thought fo sure you'd take the dare and prove you like him and everything by getting the autograph and a really cute pic with him. You should!!! You should go crazy with it!!
Nothing like her mother.
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🎉 🎉 🎉 🎉 🎉 🥂 🥳🥂🥂🥳 🥳 🥂🎇 🎆 ’ LOVE this!
The Pretender is back at the Centre. OMFG! Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us. I know you get tired of it probably and that I can be 🥴 frustrating to you and I know the Twitter thing isn't what you want. But you keep going to keep this dream alive. really thank you
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedI never get tired of reading you!! You're not formulaic or pigeonholed and you branch out to genrebending and you love taking chances and pushing boundaries which is really what writing is about. That and having something else to say, something that means something, something to take away and learn and you always provide that depth so it's not just entertaining it's also important. There is beauty. You also are obviously educated and open minded and you nail the grammar and know how to transition and keep me hanging on in my chair. I hope you will always write for the fanmily.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedOh my god I want more and more. please please please update all of your FICS NOW. I'm dying here.
Oh, did you know that Michael T. Weiss can wiggle his ears?
You should know that if you don't already. He's so cute. You still don't have the selfie do you? You HAVE to do a selfie with Michael and get all close and stuff. You have to show us the SELFIE with him! Please. We'll know who you are then! I want to know more about you...and a pic of him is ALWAYS a wondreful amazing freaking thing. He's beautiful.
You also have to write more for us NOW!
I freaking love your writing. I see him and all of the c haraaracters when you wirte! It's magical baby!!!!!
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed
Uhhh huh!! This is amazing 😍 🤩 😍 🤩 🤩 🤩 🤩!!
ohhhh I can't get enough!!
no we I said he wiggles his ears I meant wiggles his ears...what ever did u think I meant??????!!!!!
so I'm loling what did you think? Ok yes I'm dirty woman and will do anything with anyone and you know I got all over him when I met him but I did mean just wiggle ears...wiggling nothing else and I'm thinking cold dick episodes now with Mr wiggles?!!!!!! I cannot stop the laughter.
I will never be stop the objectiveify him.. and he is sexy. You will fall in love with him eventually. I'm sorry. I try to do the better. sorry I am so sorry ”....please don't block me or anything.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedFinished business.
Oh ohhh. Wows. Mirage, this is brilliant. Are you sure you're not a Jarod fangirl? So I love the title and how it means without one thing another thing can't exist, so it means essential. Melissa destroying the tape keeps Jarod off the cop's radar. She makes it so he can continue bringing justice to others. Wow. That's crazy profound. They don't know he had that rapist in a bathtub. And oh, that rapist was under for a little while and being phobic like that would make it harder for him and he was panicking omg this is completely plausible. People do go under water and then walk away and seem fine and then a few hours later... oh, at the rapist's age with those symptoms a doctor would think heart attack. Even if they thought drowning they couldn't blame Jarod without that tape. I think it's also essential that the rapist die. He raped her twice. He wasn't sorry. He was still being smug in the tub. That's one person that Jarod should have killed. So did Jraod mean for this to happen. I know he seems upset, and he stammers. So maybe he didn't mean for the rapist to die. I liked the summary finished business as the episode was risque business and I like the justice parts. Ohh. I love it. Spectacularly done as always. Smooches to you. PLEASE UPDATE OBLIVION AND DON'T FORGET THE RETURN THAT YOU HAVENN'T UPDATED IN MONTHS!!! How do you write a story this brilliant with only 82 words? omg. amazing.
(I just accidentally put this in a review-to-self instead of here in the response box where it belongs, and now I feel sixty percent more incompetent than usual). Let's try this again:
Smooches right back atcha. No. No, no, no, of course not. Jarod wouldn't kill anyone intentionally. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedA last resort
OMG where are you? Are you ok? You have to be ok. And you have to show your selfies with Michael T. Weiss.. the ones I have a feeling that you have taken with him but won't talk about? Are you embarrased about it or something? Like.. you didn't try to kiss him or anything did you? Because I AM THE ONE who does things like that. SO if you did it's cool. No s hame in my game. Even if you like just did it now... now when he's old. SO um anyway. If you got selfies show me. I will email now and email you every day until you come back. Please. I love this and all of your stories.. even the holiday one .. and by now everyone should I hate holidays that were hijacked by christians and renamed. Please. I miss you. I miss your writing.
Wow, Lorraina, y'know, I realize that I'm not "superfangirl" or whatever.
I'm also not a shallow, fickle dick. I'm also not entitled to comment on someone's body, appearance, etc, and I'm absolutely not here for ableist, ageist, sexist, etc, etc, bullshit.
And, no, I didn't "anything" him during any (hypothetical) encounter. That doesn't even sound remotely consensual.
I absolutely must delete your reviews if you continue to talk about real people.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed
Amazing work as always Mirage. You are brilliant. I love the characters are you really do them justice. Please never stop writing for us.
...and OK I get it... what you said in the last response to review.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed
I'm simpingf for this I want you to know! Uhhhhm more please!
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedPart six of The Return series.
So DAM addicting!!!!!!!
I NEED MORE NOW!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedThis scribblet follows Asphyxia.
So stoked to see you back with amazing work and you keep my eyes glued!! Please write faster.
Reviewer: Lorraina SignedSo stoked to see you back with amazing work and you keep my eyes glued!! Please write faster.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed