Oooh. Terrific!! I love Parker's snark in the loft safe house and the withered flowers and your descriptions of it and omg it's just like they were beautiful together and why why why aren't they together?  Please Mirage put them back together again. Have you not met Michael T. Weiss yet? Where is my selfie? Bah. I'm kidding with you. I think you've already met him and are keeping it secret. I won't bother you about him. I swear.  Please write more.

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazzzeiinggg you write them like they are on the show and make them sooooo real and I want morrrreeeeeee!!! After your reply to my other review I gave you I believe that I am right and you have met Michael T. Weiss and are being discreet and mean. LOVE that man! Was he like Jarod and did he look like Jarod and did he act like Jarod when you saw and met him????!

MORE!

Uh-uhh! Mirage. I always hear their voices and see their facial expressions when I read your stories. It's like sitting here watching Michael and Andrea. Your characterisations literally blow my mind. You get me in that zone you know ?? where I forget everything except the story and it's like I'm in it watching it and not reading it? I WANT MORE!

Okay I love this and I'm so hooked. You are an amazing storyteller and writer and I need more. Now. Yeah this is perfect and Eli is so realitstic. Parker should be pissed at Jarod. I like how plausible it all is when you write them. Please keep writing. I mean it. Don't stop writing ever.

Oh and touche on the review response. So I wasn't really bullying meanly just playing with you about meeting the real Jarod so I'm glad you're not angry and you don't take things seriously. But now I see that it's my fault that I haven't introduced you to Michael T. Weiss.... I see what you did there and I like it. You probably didn't expect this but now I will have to fix my mistake by totally introducing you two because he is so damn wonderful and I know you will freaking love him...I can even take you out partying and get you drunk first or get a beta blocker... some of his fans get woozy and too excited. This one girl I knew was so freaked out nervous it was 2 cute. She was terrified lol. But he's soooo nice. He's really so nice. The nicest ever. He really puts women at ease and he really put his arm around me and everything for my selfie with him. Hot. You'll lvoe it. It's sooooo exciting. Every fan who writes fan fic for the Pretender HAS to meet him. You HAVE to do it. I sent you an email.

Ooh oh! I love this. Hit me right in the freaking feels Mirage.

More?

hope u will updae soon!! it's like heroine and I usually only say that about smut fiction!! I can see Jarod and Michael t in each scene and having met him 3 !!! times I know what I like and I know him!! there should be smut or sex but even if there isn't I will read this.

GOD!!!! I LOVE THIS! Give me the Mirarchives. I have a birthday coming up in 2019.  Oh, honey you blow me so away!

Do you still not have a selfie with Michael T??!! No autograph?!!

I still think you should get a crush on Michael T you know because it would be a new perspective and so cute of you and awww. Just a teeny little bitty crush on him. He's really sweet. You'd like him. I had a real nice close up to him selfie like I tried not to get all over him but I still probably freaked him out cos I'm so into him. But I get what you're saying about not disrupting his life and all. I'm sorry. I can't really talk about anything else but him. I see him when you write and he's the only Jarod so it's your fault. But don't stop writing. I need mores. I thought fo sure you'd take the dare and prove you like him and everything by getting the autograph and a really cute pic with him. You should!!! You should go crazy with it!!

🎉 🎉 🎉 🎉 🎉 🥂  🥳🥂🥂🥳 🥳 🥂🎇 🎆 💥 LOVE this!

The Pretender is back at the Centre. OMFG! Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us. I know you get tired of it probably and that I can be 🥴 frustrating to you and I know the Twitter thing isn't what you want. But you keep going to keep this dream alive. really thank you

Oh my god I want more and more. please please please update all of your FICS NOW. I'm dying here.

Oh, did you know that Michael T. Weiss can wiggle his ears?

You should know that if you don't already. He's so cute. You still don't have the selfie do you? You HAVE to do a selfie with Michael and get all close and stuff. You have to show us the SELFIE with him! Please. We'll know who you are then! I want to know more about you...and a pic of him is ALWAYS a wondreful amazing freaking thing. He's beautiful.

You also have to write more for us NOW!

I freaking love your writing. I see him and all of the c haraaracters when you wirte! It's magical baby!!!!!

Oh ohhh. Wows. Mirage, this is brilliant. Are you sure you're not a Jarod fangirl? So I love the title and how it means without one thing another thing can't exist, so it means essential. Melissa destroying the tape keeps Jarod off the cop's radar. She makes it so he can continue bringing justice to others. Wow. That's crazy profound. They don't know he had that rapist in a bathtub. And oh, that rapist was under for a little while and being phobic like that would make it harder for him and he was panicking omg this is completely plausible. People do go under water and then walk away and seem fine and then a few hours later... oh, at the rapist's age with those symptoms a doctor would think heart attack. Even if they thought drowning they couldn't blame Jarod without that tape. I think it's also essential that the rapist die. He raped her twice. He wasn't sorry. He was still being smug in the tub. That's one person that Jarod should have killed. So did Jraod mean for this to happen. I know he seems upset, and he stammers. So maybe he didn't mean for the rapist to die. I liked the summary finished business as the episode was risque business and I like the justice parts. Ohh. I love it. Spectacularly done as always. Smooches to you. PLEASE UPDATE OBLIVION AND DON'T FORGET THE RETURN THAT YOU HAVENN'T UPDATED IN MONTHS!!! How do you write a story this brilliant with only 82 words?  omg. amazing.

Amazing work as always Mirage. You are brilliant. I love the characters are you really do them justice. Please never stop writing for us.

...and OK I get it... what you said in the last response to review.

So DAM addicting!!!!!!!

I NEED MORE NOW!!!!!!

So stoked to see you back with amazing work and you keep my eyes glued!!  Please write faster.