Swiss fan of TP.
PretenderMiss Parker. Jarod. A kiss. Death.
No smut in this but... you killed Jarod? With a kiss, and that's kind of smutty and I love it. Very original! I leave in search of more smut. Please write more smut.
Reviewer: Monica Signed
A chance encounter with a past acquaintance is Jarod's undoing. Or is it?
♥ ♦ ♠ ♣
The plot is original and fresh and it's all well written and ...all I care about is the smut today.Smut. Smut. Smut. Give me more.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Love it, and it goes like lightning, so fast. I'm struck. You have to write more smut.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Oh, I remember the semi happy ending... something else you don't always do is a happy ending.
Reviewer: Monica Signed You are such a reluctant smut writer and we have to push and push you and peer pressure you so much but you deliver and I know you can deliver some more.I love this. Seriously, you were born to write and you were born to write smut at least twice a year. Please?
Reviewer: Monica Signed Twincest. With a twist!
Hey! I found some more smut. Short smut lacking important details and hidden in some plot but smut and I'll take what I can get. You rule.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Parker corners Jarod. Or does she?
This is bloody mindblowing. I hate shades of Gray. But Jarod, actually has other levels and shades,and that's why he's working as a DOM. He can do that. He can do anything. He's a Pretender. You took that hook and took it higher and I love you for it.I can't say enough how much I love this and how hot it is. I heard this was some sort of social experiment of yours but it's amazing.
Reviewer: Monica Signed What twisted said. This should have been done back when The Pretender was on air actually. It's Jarod. And it's Miss P. There were even whips, dildos, buttplugs, and edible panties in one episode.. a rape episode at that. Who does that?!!! They were crazy. You're actually tame and sane in comparison. Those 2 would be perfect exploring domination and submission, and they are in this story and I love it. You do them and the BDSM community justice. You show it respectfully, and it is respectful. I know that for a face. Places like this really exist. All of the things you wrote are true. It's a little like cosplay and sometimes scripted. You should try it if you haven't.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Just... oh my god wow. Your notes at the end are hilarious. Oops. I love that you clicked the button and posted this. It's brilliant and so hot and tastefully done.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Excellent excellent. I thought I'd already reviewed everything so I'm skimming back over and I'm in such a smut mood. You haven't written enough smut. Write more smut!!
Reviewer: Monica Signed Part two of The Return series.
This was so amazing. You know these characters personally it seems and always manage to do something original and with a fresh twist which has to be nearly impossible since it's been ages since the show's inception. Thank you thank you thank you for keeping this fandom alive and update soon.
Thank you, Monica, for reading and reviewing. Thank you thank you thank YOU.
Reviewer: Monica Signed 
A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
I'm in a smut mood today. You only have 4 offerings. You can do better than that, methinks. Smut, no plot, just mindless, endless nasty things going on with Jarod and Miss P. Please write more smut. This is hands down my favorite smut piece of all time because it's from Jarod's POV which isn't something I see often. Is it true that you don't like writing Parker POV smut because you have to write "me", "mine", "I" while writing about Jarod and sex? I get that if it's true and it can be weird but I know you can do it skillfully and HOTLY. This novella is steamy and perfection. You took the genre to an entirely higher level. Congrats!
Reviewer: Monica Signed Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Ooh, I love this. It's a happy ending as far as they have are happy and to get pastries and espresso, and "infinite possibilities" and I think this must have been hard for you to write being that you're a nonshipper and you saw through Jarod billed as a "good" guy from the beginning on the tv series. You are right. He isn't "good." You see the real but you also see the potential I think, and that there is something between them. You never let your personal feelings get in the way of the story that needs to be told. That's important. I love your writing voice. It's powerful and energetic, and new energy and vision is important to keeping the series alive. I was afraid you were going to abandon this but you haven't abandoned a story yet, so please never do. Keep writing and sharing. It's goodbye to Darkness Falling but not goodbye to us and your other fics, ok? Don't stop writing. We need you. Always grateful to you.
Reviewer: Monica Signed A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
LOVE! Please explore the incest. Let them really be father and daughter. It's ok if they don't have children. Please. More. I love the forbidden!
Reviewer: Monica Signed I love how you got the idea and developed it so slowly over these chapters, building and building. Brilliant. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Monica Signed You're a clever one. I don't know how you manage to write new ideas. I was so sure the pretender had done everything in the series on telly but here you are writing fresh content and I love it. Your writing style blows my mind and I can never believe how well they are written and how so in character they are. It's just like watching the series again. It's so amazing. I'm still hooked. How is that even possible.. BUT. I'm terrified for our Sydney and I know how much you love him so I know this hurts you. I'm still reading. I can't NOT read. More, please?
Reviewer: Monica Signed _
Oooh amazing job with this. Thanks so much. Please keep going. Never stop writing. Ta.
Reviewer: Monica Signed More! Please write whatever the hell you want and how EVER you want to but just keep writing. ONLY YOU WRITE THEM THE WAY THEY WERE ON THE TELEVISED SERIES. You keep them in character and their dialougue clever and intelligent. PLUS SEX! YES. More please?
Reviewer: Monica Signed -
Didn't expect this and.... maybe I should have. Congratulations 🎉!! Please 🙠🙠🙠write more and don't ever stop.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Blue flickering lights! Jarod's in trouble now. Brilliant descriptions and plotting.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Oh💕 Parker arrives with snark to spare and she's telling the truth..Jarod can be a drama queen sometimes.
Reviewer: Monica Signed I'm excited for more!! Please write quickly. I know you're updating like five stories. I can never get enough of you.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Finished business.
This is so sublime and succinct. I love it. I thought there might be some smut hidden away but this was very satisfying in another way that is important. Brilliant.
Reviewer: Monica Signed A last resort
Impressive. Your writing and plotting is superior and insightful, and the characters are the characters. You're a clever one. I know you'll be updating soon. Won't you?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Monica.
Reviewer: Monica Signed Gothic trifecta achieved!! ooh my library of dreams..Jarod would have it . So stoked for more!
Reviewer: Monica Signed 