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Combustion by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Twincest. With a twist!

 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Incest/Twincest, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1539
Read Count: 9657
[Report This] Published: 24/09/11 Updated: 24/09/11


Title: Chapter 1: Going Down in Flames

are they full siblings or half? is Jarod technically the twin Catherine gave birth to? *there is a bigger age difference between them in the series isn't there?* or does Miss Parker still have a twin somewhere out there? and if so is the twin even genetically Miss Parker's sibling or was Catherine used as a surrogate?

or could the Centre have previously harvested and used Catherine's egg with Major Charles and implanted Jarod's "mom" and when they saw how promising the combination was they used it to make Miss Parker? also are Miss Parker and Ethan full siblings then?

plus...the Centre has no qualms about morality right?...so wouldn't they maybe use genetic material from their top male and top female to try to make another pretender even if the male and female were related? yes I'm meaning Baby Parker...plus they could have messed with his genes or tested embryos to find the one that had the most chance of survival without any disability...

...even if he isn't related to Miss Parker she'd still probably want to take care of him...of course either way he could be raised as their kid. I mean unless the pretender or inner sense genes make any child MP/J have less likely to be disabled Baby Parker might be it for their chance to raise a kid and not subject a new player*if they adopted a different kid* into the web that the Centre might still be...

this is of course assuming that the Centre hadn't already tried to make a MP/J baby which could be Gemini*another tampered result?*...from a timeline I just found*no clue how good it is* it looks like Baby Parker was born about 8 months after J and Major Charles first got wind of Gemini...plus Mr. Parker shoots blanks...just sayin

 

and if I got any timeline or anything in the show wrong I haven't seen the series in several years but just got into the fanfiction.

so...they gonna lie to family/friends and say that they were already in a physical relationship BEFORE they learned about being related? I mean they were technically in an intimate relationship since they were kids...plus it wouldn't seem as wrong necessarily...

wonder what Ethan and MP's mom thinks of this...Josh will probably LOVE being related to MP...which might vex his "mother" and Emily...wait...I wonder if Josh has the inner sense too...or Jarod for that matter...

 

anyway you have a TON of places you can take this and as long as J/MP stay together-together I know it'll be good. SO PLEASE CONTINUE!



Author's Response:

Thanks, helikesitheymikey.

Wow, I love your enthusiasm! This is quite a thought provoking review; I can't resist addressing a few of the points/questions you raised.

For some strange reason, I thought Jarod was much older than Parker until I watched Bloodlines. I decided then that there couldn't be that huge an age gap between the pair considering how perplexed she was during that agonizingly lengthy pause before Jarod finally replied with: "No. I'm not your brother."

One would have thought she could have eliminated him completely; instead her behavior (in Stone Mountain) indicated that she really believed the possibility existed that Jarod was her twin.

I think it was Broots that said: "No one knows how old Jarod is", which counters Raines' statement (made in season one I think) regarding the empire state building being replicated by a four-year-old" (alluding to Jarod).

If Raines is right, we know how old Jarod is (he was abducted in 1963 at the age of 4) but Miss Parker's age is still in question.

She's always so vague; she was "pretty young" when her mother died. We know Parker was born January 3, but we have no exact year that I'm aware of and the birth footage of Parker and her twin (who ever he or she may be) has no date at all and simply reads "Classified" on the screen. Not helpful.

Ooh, and as for baby Parker, yes, he could be Parker and Jarod's child, but although Mr. Parker's sperm count was very low, low doesn't mean non-existent, so there is still a possibility, albeit a slim one.

And let's not forget that Lyle had sex with Brigitte during a time when she (Brigitte) was shooting up fertility drugs. There are so many possibilities.


Oh wow! Jarod having the inner sense never even occurred to me, haha! He does make incredible leaps of logic and as Broots said to Parker in Agent of year zero: "he gets inside your head, you can't make a decision without him being two steps ahead" and perhaps that's because Jarod has the inner "non" sense too. And chances are, his clone would also have the inner sense. But if it were real, Parker and Jarod should have known they were twins, haha.

I am still considering a continue, trying to get the muse on board and sort all of my thoughts on the matter into a workable outline at least. We shall see.

Oh, and welcome to fanfiction! I hope you'll contribute with a fic (or many fics) in the very near future- I'll look forward to it, in fact.

 

 

Reviewer: helikesitheymikey Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/11/11