Mirage this is amazing writing. The plot and seeing Jarod manipulating and Parker secretive is hard for me. You thread it together so well. Please let Miss Parker and Jarod find some happiness.

Please update soon!!

Zoes dead. I'm glad you killed her. She makes me sick I can't believe she was ever put on the show !!! You are my favorite author and I don't like seeing Parker and Jarod treat each other cruelly ...the way they were on the series to each other.. but this is the way they were and with his inner rage and as steve says he's a sociopath and the way she easily forgets what happened on earlier episodes for instance when her father disappointed her and she forgot all that in the very next airing and she was never strong enough leave the Centre and the lies. It's all so believable and you are an amazing talented writer. WRite more, but yes please also write us some smut!!!! And update A hero's heart too!!

I unfairly reviewed and judged you when I first read this one and Forces of Nature and I'm going to do better. I owe you a enormous apology Mirage.

Jarod IS dark. Jarod is DARKNESS. He acts really immature and in the beginning when I was watching the serie I thought he's a child boy playing games. That became my permanent opinion of him no matter what he did or said and everything he did was excused as "it's ok it's all ok he's a child that is too immature." The French equivalent I guess to American's "Boys will be boys" when trump said he grabbed women by the pussy. You know how some people excused him over there no matter what he does. Everyone in the whole knows that his voters think he can do no wrong while he does so many wrongs. Maybe you live in a nice country and don't have to hear about the unpleasantness but France knows trump is a joke.

I was so wrong to judge you and it's so hard to know how wrong I was. I was watching again the serie and when Jarod is a gigolo he went too far with that woman that hired him for sex. She changed her mind and was shocked by his hostel. She was scared and disappointed. She tried to leave. She fled to the bed to get her things but he was there and on top of her. Jarod didn't have to take things that far with her.  I notice more and more little things that I ignored because I love Jarod. I guess I would vote for him no matter what. I know better know. This all could happen. It's plausible and especially with Sydney gone and that twisted game he plays with Miss Parker can elevate to danger. To sleep with the woman who chased him and pretended to be cruel for her Daddy's approval but she wasn't cruel and even if he knew it was all facade and he did it still had to hurt that she chose her Daddy first and not him. It would feel that she succeeded in capturing him and he would want it but still not want it and the feelings can get confused. He can be very dangerous. I've done studying to learn more about the minds of these people.

You weren't making Jarod bad just to make Jarod bad or because you don't like him. This is a possible eventual outcome to a high tension relationship where there are feelings of attraction and memories of childhood fondness all confused within anger, fear, pain, shame on his part for letting her catch him and if he's really in love with her shame for falling in love with a woman that acted so much like she hated him and some of the things she did to him.

Accept my apology. Please never stop writing.

This is good, this chapter is so great, really shows J concern and I like it! You have an original plot going on which is the reason I'm still reading now and the reason I'm reviewing to tell you so. There seems more to the story.

I am excited for the new fic and a R rating at that. I think is plausible because we know she'd think she has him only to find he wins again. Its wonderful so far and if it goes like your other fics it will be wonderful to the end. A ten of course.

24, I love this scene of Parker realizing the truth and seeing that she and Jarod were close once it was beautiful. I want to know what she will do about it.

I love all of your fics and I'm excited for more!!!! Everything is changing in the Pretender world lately and I'm soooo relieved and happy that someone still writes my favorite characters in a way that I can recognize them. Thank you for all these splendid post IOTH fics. Ohh Mirage you know Parker, Jarod and the rest of them all so well and you always do them justice. Keep writing please! You're the best! :)

Merci Mirage! I love ths chapter. Beautiful again. Your fiction always is!!! I never see Jarod and Miss Parker so well written as when you write them. They are alive in your writing. #thepretenderlives when you write. Merci! Merci! Much love to you!

Merci beaucoup mon amie! Welcome back!! This is the wonderful. Mirage. I suspect Rachael is bad. She didn't tell Jarod there was ever a suspect. I always try to guess. This is the guess. More please. 

Merci beaucoup mon ami! Je ne peux jamais vous remercier pour cela! Je t'aime trop. Je veux lire la suite. Fabuleux Mirage! 

I love every of your fics and the accuracy you portray Miss Parker, all the insights into her relationship with Jarod. Brilliant and Highly addictive. Give us MORE. Please.

Thank your insomnia. I love that Jarod is married! I know it will all be fixed by you. I trust you.