Penname: Leonie1988 [Contact]

Real name: Leonie H.

Member Since: 23/09/09

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Summary: After one of his infamous phone calls, Jarod comes by to check on Miss Parker. He discovers something horrible, but some positive changes ensue as well. Trying to adjust to the new circumstances, Jarod and Miss Parker work together to outsmart the Centre. They have to hide their alliance from their friends in order to protect them and themselves. The stakes are high and nerves are raw.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 9859
Read Count: 4085
[Report This] Published: 01/08/10 Updated: 28/08/10


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loved it! but it's not finished :( update? please?



Author's Response:

I am sorry to say that I don't know when or if I will continue writing this story. Considering that this story received quite a few clicks but not many reviews, I wasn't very motivated to continue writing. I've changed sites and started writing for other shows since then. I am glad you liked the story though and I hope one day I can find the time to maybe finish this story. But at the moment I am too busy to take this one up again.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/10/11
Summary:

Retribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Cox, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Original Character, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Slash, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 37661
Read Count: 14235
[Report This] Published: 30/06/11 Updated: 08/12/17


Title: Chapter 5: V

when will the morning light be there? hehe

very good chapter! as always. I especially enjoyed Miss Parker talking to herself. Very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leonie. The morning light is coming, slowly but surely.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25/10/11
Title: Chapter 10: X

Great new chapter, thank you! Can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Leonie1988. (I've just now seen this review.)

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 22/12/12
Circles of Hell by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

Twelve years after Carthis, the death of a dear friend reunites predator and prey. *If adultery bothers you, click elsewhere or prepare to be bothered.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 108764
Read Count: 29791
[Report This] Published: 02/09/11 Updated: 14/06/14


Title: Chapter 5: Halfway to Heaven (halfway to hell)

Very good! I enjoy this story very much!

Just one thing: I want to strangle Jarod every time he pushes Miss Parker so badly.

And the time in the cabin were he basically raped her... that was the darkest part of the story and shouldn't be forgotten.

Please update! I love it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leonie1988. I know, I know, I want to strangle Jarod too (and strangle my muse, haha). I don't know why I write him so dark and cruel but we all know that he can be both. The events inside the cabin were indeed very dark. It won't be forgotten.

I will update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/10/11
Title: Chapter 6: Playing with Fire

Suspense!

Very good new chapter, I enjoyed it immensely! I'm always a bit in favor of Miss Parker, so this story is perfect for me :) and I like evil Jarod. hehe



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leonie1988. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. It's been brought to my attention that I write quite a bit of "evil Jarod" type fics- I didn't realize how many I've written; I could write a billion more. Easily. So I"m glad it's to your liking. 

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/10/11
Title: Chapter 7: What fresh hell is this?

Great new chapter, but I still hate him :-)

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leonie. Yeah, he is quite hate-able in this fic.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 16/11/11
Title: Chapter 8: Hell and High Water

Oh yeah, Ethan should know! And I know Ethan is really understanding and loves Miss Parker and Jarod, but I hope he won't forgive him right away!

Very good new chapter, thanks!



Author's Response:

Hello, Leonie. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 09/01/12
Title: Chapter 22: Purgatory (Part II)

Yay! Nice turn of events! Jarod deserves every bit of it. I don't get how he gets away with his bad behaviour again and again.

Parker deserves so much better than him! And if she thinks she loves him, I'm sure it's most likely a panic reaction to ehat would happen if she DIDN'T love him anymore.

Please give her a happily ever after!

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 03/11/13
Title: Chapter 23: Purgatory (Part III: The Beginning of the End)

hey :) I had time to catch up and I like how Miss Parker is acting. She is standing up for herself and is finally honest with herself as well. Well done! I believe Jarod when he says he loves her, but love is not always enough and can (in the case of a genius in love) also be 'dangerous'.

Can't wait for more :D

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 09/03/14
Title: Chapter 24: Purgatory (Part IV: Circle, Unbroken [Part I of II])

Hey, yay an update! Jippy!
At the same time though... urgh, Jarod is such a creep! And I'm angry at Parker that she hasn't grabbed Astra and ran away from him a long time ago. If he can't control his anger around Parker, who is to say, that he can around Astra? I had to skip several parts because it just wasn't sexy at all when they had sex.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for reading and reviewing, Leonie1988. I know. Ugh- my response after reading over what I'd written. It will all be over soon. Not soon enough. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 22/04/14
Summary:

Post Ep for 'Til Death Do Us Part.  Jarod calls Miss Parker one more time, but she's been doing some thinking.  Game or not, she's tired of playing by his rules.  Now she's making up her own.



Categories: Season 4
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Character Musing, Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1722
Read Count: 5940
[Report This] Published: 11/12/11 Updated: 11/12/11


Title: Chapter 1: 'Til Death, She Could Wait

Wow, I saw it coming but you played it out very well! Thank you!

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/12/12
All or nothing by Cuddles
Rated: R starstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Nothing is ever as it seems... Jarod goes for under cover mission that will turn his life upside down... old friends, lost love and powerful enemies await... Set post IOTH.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 34366
Read Count: 15128
[Report This] Published: 20/04/12 Updated: 11/02/13


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Very good, can't wait for more. I'm getting impatient to learn more about what happened to Parker! Please update soon :)

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 22/12/12
Summary:

MPJR.  Some dreams just aren't meant to come true.  But every now and again, fate deals a wild card.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Catherine Parker, Ethan, Jarod, Jarod's Family, Miss Parker, The Clone
Classifications: Genres: Drama, Romance
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 13002
Read Count: 6375
[Report This] Published: 29/07/12 Updated: 24/08/13


Title: Chapter 4: Pieces of a Dream

Great stora so far, thank you!
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and how Jarod will find out!

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/12
A Hero's Heart by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 298]
Summary:

When Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.

 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 69644
Read Count: 143785
[Report This] Published: 29/03/13 Updated: 06/06/19


Title: Chapter 16: Gone (Part III)

Great story so far, I just got caught up on it all and I'm hooked! I like that Jarod and Miss Parkers skills are (to a certain point) evenly matched. So many Pretender stories barely give MP a chance, J is always ten steps ahead. Even though he was here too for some time, she caught up. And I like that Parker doesn't let him get away with his puppeteer complex! And Kyle/Parker!!! Wow!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Leonie1988, for reading and reviewing. I'm happy that you're liking it so far.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/05/17
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: None

Series: The Return
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10366
Read Count: 2515
[Report This] Published: 30/08/13 Updated: 24/10/13


Title: Chapter 1: Seeking The Lost

Wow ok, I really love this series. It's something different and just plain awesome ;)

I always liked your stories and your writing style and I hope to read a continuation!

Greetings from Hamburg,

Leonie1988

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Leonie1998, for reading and reviewing. It's much appreciated. :)

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 12/10/13
Summary:

Jarod escapes from the Centre in 1979 and goes in search of his only friend out in the world. 



Categories: Prequel, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content

Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 32127
Read Count: 5458
[Report This] Published: 07/09/13 Updated: 21/12/13


Title: Chapter 5: Friendly intentions

Thanks for the new chapter! It's fun to read and interesting. I like it, that Parker and Jarod don't know everything yet. He doesn't know that his parents are still alive etc.

I look forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! The fact that youngish Jarod didn't immediately run off to investigate his parents like his older counterpart will be addressed soon ...

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 07/11/13
Title: Chapter 8: The black swan

Nice! Finally Jarod loosened up a bit! Well done, I can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! I finally finished some more, lol.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 22/11/13
Title: Chapter 9: Sunrise, sunset

Great new chapter, thank you very much. I like that you acknowledged, that Miss Parker didn't have a great childhood either and that she wasn't allowed to be a kid and just play all the time.

I'm a little in love with this story, so keep it coming!



Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you. It's definitely motivating to hear your kind words :-)

And yes, even after thinking about it awhile I can't picture Miss P's childhood as anything but one of repression and -- after her mother's death -- utter neglect. It would be like losing two parents at once, only one is still technically alive to throw you a bone of a few minutes attention on occasion.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed
Date: 01/12/13
Summary:

Part IV



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: The Return
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 42888
Read Count: 6553
[Report This] Published: 19/07/14 Updated: 28/02/16


Title: Chapter 2: The Secret Garden ( Part I: The Caulbearer )

Thanks for the update, I love this series so much. I think both Parker and Jarod are well portrayed. I'd love for Parker to interact with the others, just to establish the different relationships, I love those dynamics.

I hope you'll update soon, have a good day!

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Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and the lovely review, Leonie1988. I'll try to inject some additional Fletcher family-Parker interaction in future chapters.

Thanks again. Have a great day.

Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/11/14