Characters: Broots, Debbie, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 9859
Read Count: 4085
loved it! but it's not finished :( update? please?
I am sorry to say that I don't know when or if I will continue writing this story. Considering that this story received quite a few clicks but not many reviews, I wasn't very motivated to continue writing. I've changed sites and started writing for other shows since then. I am glad you liked the story though and I hope one day I can find the time to maybe finish this story. But at the moment I am too busy to take this one up again.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedRetribution goes awry when Jarod inadvertently kills a man. (Story in English)
when will the morning light be there? hehe
very good chapter! as always. I especially enjoyed Miss Parker talking to herself. Very good.
Thanks, Leonie. The morning light is coming, slowly but surely.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedGreat new chapter, thank you! Can't wait for more :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Leonie1988. (I've just now seen this review.)
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedTwelve years after Carthis, the death of a dear friend reunites predator and prey. *If adultery bothers you, click elsewhere or prepare to be bothered.
Very good! I enjoy this story very much!
Just one thing: I want to strangle Jarod every time he pushes Miss Parker so badly.
And the time in the cabin were he basically raped her... that was the darkest part of the story and shouldn't be forgotten.
Please update! I love it :)
Thanks, Leonie1988. I know, I know, I want to strangle Jarod too (and strangle my muse, haha). I don't know why I write him so dark and cruel but we all know that he can be both. The events inside the cabin were indeed very dark. It won't be forgotten.
I will update as soon as I can.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedSuspense!
Very good new chapter, I enjoyed it immensely! I'm always a bit in favor of Miss Parker, so this story is perfect for me :) and I like evil Jarod. hehe
Thanks, Leonie1988. I'm so glad you're enjoying it. It's been brought to my attention that I write quite a bit of "evil Jarod" type fics- I didn't realize how many I've written; I could write a billion more. Easily. So I"m glad it's to your liking.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedGreat new chapter, but I still hate him :-)
Thanks for the update!
Thanks, Leonie. Yeah, he is quite hate-able in this fic.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedOh yeah, Ethan should know! And I know Ethan is really understanding and loves Miss Parker and Jarod, but I hope he won't forgive him right away!
Very good new chapter, thanks!
Hello, Leonie. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedYay! Nice turn of events! Jarod deserves every bit of it. I don't get how he gets away with his bad behaviour again and again.
Parker deserves so much better than him! And if she thinks she loves him, I'm sure it's most likely a panic reaction to ehat would happen if she DIDN'T love him anymore.
Please give her a happily ever after!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedhey :) I had time to catch up and I like how Miss Parker is acting. She is standing up for herself and is finally honest with herself as well. Well done! I believe Jarod when he says he loves her, but love is not always enough and can (in the case of a genius in love) also be 'dangerous'.
Can't wait for more :D
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedHey, yay an update! Jippy!
At the same time though... urgh, Jarod is such a creep! And I'm angry at Parker that she hasn't grabbed Astra and ran away from him a long time ago. If he can't control his anger around Parker, who is to say, that he can around Astra? I had to skip several parts because it just wasn't sexy at all when they had sex.
Hi and thanks for reading and reviewing, Leonie1988. I know. Ugh- my response after reading over what I'd written. It will all be over soon. Not soon enough. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedPost Ep for 'Til Death Do Us Part. Jarod calls Miss Parker one more time, but she's been doing some thinking. Game or not, she's tired of playing by his rules. Now she's making up her own.
Wow, I saw it coming but you played it out very well! Thank you!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedNothing is ever as it seems... Jarod goes for under cover mission that will turn his life upside down... old friends, lost love and powerful enemies await... Set post IOTH.
Very good, can't wait for more. I'm getting impatient to learn more about what happened to Parker! Please update soon :)
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedMPJR. Some dreams just aren't meant to come true. But every now and again, fate deals a wild card.
Great stora so far, thank you!
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and how Jarod will find out!
When Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.
Great story so far, I just got caught up on it all and I'm hooked! I like that Jarod and Miss Parkers skills are (to a certain point) evenly matched. So many Pretender stories barely give MP a chance, J is always ten steps ahead. Even though he was here too for some time, she caught up. And I like that Parker doesn't let him get away with his puppeteer complex! And Kyle/Parker!!! Wow!
Thank you, Leonie1988, for reading and reviewing. I'm happy that you're liking it so far.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed--
Wow ok, I really love this series. It's something different and just plain awesome ;)
I always liked your stories and your writing style and I hope to read a continuation!
Greetings from Hamburg,
Leonie1988
Thank you, Leonie1998, for reading and reviewing. It's much appreciated. :)
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedJarod escapes from the Centre in 1979 and goes in search of his only friend out in the world.
Thanks for the new chapter! It's fun to read and interesting. I like it, that Parker and Jarod don't know everything yet. He doesn't know that his parents are still alive etc.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Thank you for reading and reviewing! The fact that youngish Jarod didn't immediately run off to investigate his parents like his older counterpart will be addressed soon ...
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedNice! Finally Jarod loosened up a bit! Well done, I can't wait for more :)
Thank you! I finally finished some more, lol.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedGreat new chapter, thank you very much. I like that you acknowledged, that Miss Parker didn't have a great childhood either and that she wasn't allowed to be a kid and just play all the time.
I'm a little in love with this story, so keep it coming!
Awwww, thank you. It's definitely motivating to hear your kind words :-)
And yes, even after thinking about it awhile I can't picture Miss P's childhood as anything but one of repression and -- after her mother's death -- utter neglect. It would be like losing two parents at once, only one is still technically alive to throw you a bone of a few minutes attention on occasion.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedPart IV
Thanks for the update, I love this series so much. I think both Parker and Jarod are well portrayed. I'd love for Parker to interact with the others, just to establish the different relationships, I love those dynamics.
I hope you'll update soon, have a good day!
Thank you for reading and the lovely review, Leonie1988. I'll try to inject some additional Fletcher family-Parker interaction in future chapters.
Thanks again. Have a great day.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed