Characters: Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, Suspence/Mystery
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4089
Read Count: 1365
This is beyond dark, but genius at the same time :) Loved it!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedwow, this is disturbing but brilliant!
please update!
Thank you so much for your review! I had forgotten all about this story and had to re-read it myself. Boy is it long! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedI think this story is genius!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedVery good story, I once thought before what would have happened if Lyle did sth to Miss Parker in there. Jarod would feel insanely guitly.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedBeautiful :)
I like the adventure in the beginning! Miss Parker in real action!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedI like this beginning! Just sad it ends were it ends, would have loved to read a bit MP/Debbie talk! I like them :)
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedgreat story! I love the idea and I love the way you wrote it. More please!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedi am crying, i hate to cry!
make it stop!
i still loved it.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedgreat story, couldn't stop reading. I finished it in one go. well, at least until the next chapter if there will ever be one.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedI seriously love this!
I like the premise and I generally love stories in which MP shows everyone her true self or where she is a true Pretender herself.
I would love to read an update!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedI love the story so far!I hope you'll continue to write it :)
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedso her fathers "plan" didn't work? yippy!
great story, well written!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedFirst I have to say, that I love this story :)
Second I have to say, that you should really continue, because I'm hooked!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedI really like this :)
Parker is being kidnapped and brought somewhere, but where?
and what the hell is Lyle up to again.
Please update! I want more of this drug^^
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedWow, disturbing but brilliant!
Loved it!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedi want more! I love this so far!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedmore? this is really good!
Please update!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedGreat story, please continue!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedThis is an amazing story, I hope you'll continue it someday!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signedplease update! i love this story!
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedIn 2002, the corporation known as the Centre was infiltrated by various law enforcement agencies that acted in a synchronized global effort to eradicate the organization. And then one day, Jarod's huntress ran away.
please update soon! this is great!
Author's Response: Hi Leonie1988, I will update as soon as I possibly can. Thanks so much!
I just reread the whole thing and I once again enjoyed it! I got very frustrated with Jarod at times, but I think that'a part of the charme of your stories! At first I thought she might have had a child with this Patrick guy, but the marriage to Lyle was a real twist! Even though you gave us that scene were she had to sign the licsense. Overall great, thank you!
Thank you so much, Leonie1988. I'm really glad you liked it. You've very kind.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 SignedA call boy pays Miss Parker a visit. Not what you think. :-)
I really enjoyed this story, because this is something I see MP would do. She wouldn't have to pay for sex, as we all know, but I see her paying for comfort.
Reviewer: Leonie1988 Signed