Title: Chapter 4: The Reunion and Confessions
I see exactly which fic inspired you (I love Mandy's work but can't find them anymore on the internet...) and it's great that you wrote your own ''marshmallow'' version (it is meant as a compliment!)
I think it is important that you keep your own style: if you feel like writing fluffy romance, just do it! I personnally love dark fics but it is also good to read light heart-warming fanfics which are not depressing!And it puts me back into MPJ mode! So keep up the good work. (as for short chapters, I'd rather read a completed short fic than the numerous ones I loved but after hours of reading you realized it wasn't finished and never would be!)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I'm so glad that even fluffy romances are enjoyed. I'm probably going to write more MPJ with romance and such, but also smut! =) I just wanted a short simple one to test the waters so to speak.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed
Date: 23/04/13