Penname: Desert Rat [Contact]

Real name: Maria

Member Since: 01/03/08

Membership status: Member

Bio:

Affiliation: Pretender

[Report This]
Reviews by Desert Rat


Terror by MMB
Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: When Miss Parker is attacked, she turns to Sydney for help - and Jarod pitches in.

Categories: Indefinite Timeline
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 36031
Read Count: 2272
[Report This] Published: 07/05/05 Updated: 18/02/08


Title: Chapter 1: Terror

MMB

This was the first of your stories that I read and it spurred me to find the rest of your writings and read them.  I am currently working my way through the 'Resolutions' series. 

THIS story is exceptional.  It is almost textbook reaction to the situation yet the charactors remain human. Miss Parker comes across as her tough self yet as fragile as anyone would be in this instance. 

I also appreciate the fact that you FINISH your stories.  There are too many of them posted that appear will never be finished. 

Your writing style is very readable.  Thank you.  You appear to have listened during high school English class.  Some authors have great creative thought or wonderful charactor development but it is so lost among the painful story construction that I cannot stand to stay with it to see the end.  You, on the other hand, have that wonderful skill of not only thinking of a good story but also putting it down on paper. 

I am truly enjoying reading through your archive.  Again, thank you.  Thank you for sharing your time, creativity and talants. 

 

 

Reviewer: Desert Rat Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/03/08