Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Word count: 364
Read Count: 38344
I'm a senior in college working for an English degree and a masters in education. I'm far too obsessed with The Pretender for it to be healthy, but hey aren't we all? My greatest pet peeve is when people ask what my favorite TV show is and when I say tP they have never heard of it. :(
My previous penname was Aqua, but I changed it to TLM. So if these stories sound familiar. You may have read it on another site.
Sometimes I forget that I'm writing fics or refuse to update for months at a time and I realize it's quite annoying but what can I say? I'm a moody writer that way. Just harass me a lot and that will probably help.
[Images from cila81 and babybacke.]
Hang in there!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, i am trying, and i THINK things just got better with responding to reveiws. if this works i will be one happy vegemite. This is my test run.
Review alerts work yay!!!!!!!!
Fabbo, let me know if you get this, and if the link works, thanks
Fabbo, let me know if you get this, and if the link works, thanks
jacsReviewer: TLM Signed
Jarod's a prisoner of The Triumvirate. This is the sequel to Conflict Zero.
Oh poor Jarod. I want that poor man out of there pronto haha. Your story's wonderful and fortunately or unfortunately I can really feel Jarod's despair. Let's get him out of that hellhole okay? haha
Even I can't leave him there forever.. I'm glad you are enjoying and suffering a bit along with J.. cue evil laugh. I'll stop soon, I promise. Thanks for the feedback :)
WRITE MORE OF YOUR STORY!! ;)Reviewer: TLM Signed
Oh no they better not have won. Very nice strategy by the Africans. Lyle had it right when he took Zoe way back when. Messing with those innocents is the only way to beat Jarod. Very nice chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Hey you should hop over to the forum and take a stab at Sleepyhead.
Glad you agree with the big take down, so to speak. Next chap is almost ready...so beta dependant, should be up in the near future (aka much less time than a month!!)
Thanks for the fb!
Reviewer: TLM Signed
Yessssssssss sketchy old guy is going to help Jarod out of this hell hole. Hopefully, and hopefully he's not tricking him. Oh that would be frustrating. And what about Lys? Someone's got to rescue her, too. This was a great chapter, very suspenseful. Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: ooh leading me on to the desired outcome eh?? hehehe. time will tell! thanks for the review :D
Finally! Very intriguing chapter. Cox is an interesting addition and I can't wait to see what Miss Parker has up her sleeve for Lyle. Keep it up keep it up!
I looooove your stories. This chapter was wonderful. I'm still trying to figure this guy out, but I REALLY hope Jarod and Lys make it. Good luck with your thesis. That's got to be awfully stressful. Maybe now I'll actually update my story since you're showing me up!
Author's Response: Awww, shucks!! Thanks so much TLM! It's nice to get some kind remarks, especially after such a long draught. I cannot wait to see the next installment of 27!! :)
Jarod is captured and returned to the Centre. Part of the Guess Who/Guess What Challenge
This is really intriguing, I like the way it's going. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I am glad that i am being sneaky!! Thanks for the feedback :D. Much more to come, I promise!
You and your suspenseful endings! I'd like Jarod to have a pulse in the next chapter if that's not too much to ask. Seriously, great story. Keep it comin!
I'm sorry.. it really isn't fair of me to leave you with a suspenseful ending.. when i cannot promise a timely update (timely in katie land is a few days).. btw.. missy, where is your next chapter?? hehehe
thanks for the feedback though.. and i promise.. this isn't sleephead and there shall be a pulse.. any guesses on who is talking at the beginning :PReviewer: TLM Signed
Cancer? There's no pretending out of that one! Ugh. Love your story as usual. Your Parker one liners are top notch. Keep it up and update soon. :)
hehehe.. i'm glad you appreciate my attempt at Parker.. glad you are enjoying, and thanks for the feedback! Till next time!
- KReviewer: TLM Signed
Okay I miiiiiight know who one of the speakers is, but I'm not at all sure. As for the unraveling, that is a complete lie! I am as in the dark as ever, missy! Haha but it certainly did not disappoint and I enjoyed it as always. Keep it up and I look forward to your next chapter. :D
Author's Response: hahaha... so maybe beginning to unravel was a bit generous. although when you look back a few chapters from now.. it will be the turning point.. i think anyways. but thanks.. glad you are enjoying still...
I love that I don't know what's going to happen. I have an idea, but you're just so tricky. Wonderful chapter. Especially loved the Parker/Jarod interaction.
This is sad. :( Keep writing, I like it.
Author's Response: I promise that you'll like the next chapter!
Oh very cute.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had so much fun writing this and your feedback really makes my day. :)
Oh so bold. Very clever. And it's good to see Sydney helping out and actually doing something for Jarod for once. Keep up your great pace!Reviewer: TLM Signed
Oh I think this is a fantastic beginning (to The End ha ha ha)! Manoline is right, the characters are portrayed very well. Good job and please continue.
Author's Response: Hehe, that was my private joke too. Couldn't think of a title hence this one. Thanks for the compliment.
Oh I'm excited now. Can't wait to see how that night goes. Keep up the good work. ;)
Yeah, me wanna know how that night goes too, hehe.Reviewer: TLM Signed
Oh I like it. Such a nice start. I love exploring the depths of Parker's pain and you did it so wonderfully. Please continue!
Thanks so much. I never write from Parker's POV usually, i am firmly entrenched in the 'Jarod Camp' ordinarily.
More to come very soon.Reviewer: TLM Signed
Really great story. I just dedicated the last few hours to reading it. I love the wit you give Miss Parker, keeping it very realistic to her bitter nature even when she is happ(ier). Can't wait to read the sequel to this.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)
What a great start! I'm glad Jarod and Parker's relationship is growing slowly. It wouldn't be realistic for them to jump right into it after the island. Can't wait for your next chapter.Reviewer: TLM Signed
Oooh you're setting a nice quick pace! Careful or we'll all get used to it! This was brilliant. It's written so well and I loved the interaction between the girl at the bar and Jarod as well. It was perfect. Keep it up!Reviewer: TLM Signed
Jarod sat perfectly decent with the remote in one hand, still aimed at the television as if he had meant to turn past it, but just never did. She was amazed that he wasn’t on the phone with Sydney, asking questions while he watched.
Hahah that part cracked me up. Nice chapter. The end was very tasteful and a good mixing of their physical and emotional bond.Reviewer: TLM Signed
Great chapter. Centre politics are the best. Here's hoping Sydney and Miss Parker have something up their sleeves.
Love this chapter. Poor Sydney's just scrambling around trying to make a difference, but it seems pretty hopeless. Interesting thing with the key. Can't wait for the next piece!
Two in one week! It's beyond exciting. There were so many great lines in this. I loved "This was so very Parker: a promise buried in a threat wrapped up in a warning." and the part about family history, made me laugh out loud. Loved the Jarod/Parker interaction at the end. I'm very anxious to read more!