Ohh oh beautiful..this is just simply exquisite, Mirage.

Gray.

But he dreamed in color.

Oh my 💜 💜 💜 💜 💜 💜

Oh, wow, you are evil for leaving us hanging there lol why MIRAGE? But I know you'll update and complete this because you always do, and it'll probably end up being my new favorite story lol because that's how it usually goes lol. More please. It's terrific! 

This gets more and more exciting with each chapter. More please?

Please continue this. I love it.

I can see that this would be salvation and such a relief to any girl or woman. No should stay pregnant if they don't want to be...for any reason. I love that Jarod doesn't judge her and that you show that he was a victim too.

I wonder how long Jarod will be with her or only until he flies her out of the states ? Would love to see a romance flourish but the title is a friend I  need so I think they will only be friends? Either way I love it and want more!

Oh, my god. All of the oomphs from Jarod and all of the Pretender feels. It's so familiar when I read you.

Shout out to Parker's slam dunk wit.

"Right, so, tell me, how does this work, exactly, mm? Another punch in the ol' crazy-card, and I get a free ride to straitjacket land?"

Those loyalty cards. I have one for a local ice cream shop. Each time I buy a quart of ice cream they punch my loyalty card with a little cone shaped hole puncher. When my card is finally filled with 6 cone shaped punch outs I get a FREE quart of ice cream. LOL. So, Parker, she suspects that if she shows one more weird symptom or quirk, not remembering or one more terrible truth from the past is discovered that she'll earn herself a free trip to a mental institution

... and we know she'd forget stuff that like just happened in the previous episode, and she didn't remember who hit her mum but she indicated that her mum and dad argued a lot.

It's really intense when Jarod says, "Don't you?" (know what it's in the can) 

Parker tries to laugh it off, and then tells Jarod he has her permission. And I can hear the tears in his voice and his reaction to that. Really profound.

Solid writing Mirage.

You fill in the blanks perfectly. Please continue.

Oh, the old, old Pretender feelings are being stirred up by you again. It's like being young and watching The Pretender on TNT and Dark Angel. OMG. I'm seriously more excited than I've been in ages. Please continue. Thank you so much.

Aggghhhhh Broots. The poor fellow right? I can feel his agony. I can't wait for the gang to be all back together again. Parker is going to need all of the support she can get.

More please? Soon please!