Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
There was so much talk about ghosts, this story and conclusion, and you, and you lived up to the hype so that means it wasn't hype at all, m' petite.
I read this all in one sitting this afternoon, and it is such a joy. Please forgive me for not reviewing each chapter. It's so daunting to review each chapter. I reserved final and complete judgment for the final chapter and took it all in total as a story. I hope you'll write more as you have a natural skill. You're a born author.
Reviewer: Sydney Signed
A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
You capture all of the characters perfectly. Love Parker's "THE most unpleasant" comment and the descriptive work. Beautiful work. More please?
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Your plotting is on point, and you really know the characters. Jarod back at the Centre is so exciting. The way you plotted this is brilliant. That fighting scene is realistic and something I can see Jarod doing.
I want to read more. Please?
Reviewer: Sydney Signed
A last resort
Exquisite work, Mirage.
Thank you for including Isaac. Jarod has called in a lot of favors from victims he's helped in the past and I love that only Isaac seems to know Jarod is still alive. The others seem to think they are helping family of Jarod. I love this subtly here. Isaac proves that The Pretender was wide awake woke back in the 90s.
I love how in character they all are when you write them. Magical. I can't get enough.
Reviewer: Sydney Signed
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
I just read your story and I love it.
Reviewer: Sydney SignedPart six of The Return series.
Congratulations!
Let me count the ways I'm in love with this young lady.
I haven't read anyone touch the topic of human sacrifices even though it was discussed heavily during IOTH. The sword in the Alley Sports Bar. The sacrifices that have to be made for messing with the scrolls. I'm glad you're exploring this and I love it. I was afraid you were going another direction with this but you surprised me and made this brilliant turn.
I love how Broots that Broots is, even if his the mastermind and was with the government infiltrating the Centre as a tech. He's still Broots. He's still worried. He must feel like he's sending his children away and putting the oldest, Jarod, in charge.
I love how you describe Jarod's concealed feelings. We don't always get to know how he's feeling. He always plays it cool and it's nice that he isn't so cool now and he's made some mistakes and revealed darkness. It's like you saw that in him before some of the others did, and instead of stopping writing the darker Jarod stories you wrote several more darkJarod stories. I love that about you.
I think it still alienates some fans because he's so sweet and so Greg Brady on the surface. It's his facade. He talks about Parker's. It takes one to know and that's why. He's hiding too. Jarod is dangerous and I needed to read your perspective to see that myself. It's like the truth is there and we don't want to see it.
Did you know that Michael T. Weiss wanted Jarod to be darker? It's in the special featurettes on the DVD. They said it. They said something about arguing about how dark he would go.
Season 5 would have been darker Jarod. Michael wanted Jarod to get darker.
You gave him what the networks didn't whether you're aware or not. I love it.
So, keep doing what you're doing. We like Jarod any flavor we can get him and you write him in all of the flavors of the rainbow and it's terrific. I love your work. More please?
Reviewer: Sydney Signed