Oh, my God. Mirage this is stunning. I have no other words.

Oooh and this is a hell of a ride too, this story that mentions carnival rides. So exhilarating even after a third read. Please never stop writing.

I AM SOBBING. SOBBING MIRAGE. This is so fast paced and so action packed and so exciting and so emotional and that ending and those peach hues!!! Her smile. Jarod catching his breath. I'm so in love with your writing and voice and styles. More than one. This seems completly different from the others and the others were all different to each other. It's like you have more than one writing voice. Each story has a unique personality so far that I've read. I just need more. Thank you for this.
I love it so much.

"It was just a bad dream." Jarod reassured softly, caressing her arm as he spoke. Parker drew in a sharp breath and then rattled the cuffs.

"Apparently not." She remarked dryly, noticing with a fleeting flash of horror that Jarod had cuffed both her wrists to the bed.

lol! Yes!!! This is everything Mirage. Humor. Drama. Intrique. Adventure. Actions. And SEX.

You're amazing.

Holy Goddesses!

I think I need a cold shower.

Wow. You blow my mind.

No one has ever written Jarod with a whip before or any of the more detailed aspects of BDSM or the rules. I like how you are respectful to the community. I'm in that community. And it's more consensual and safe than finding a date in a religious bible camp or something. It's all about consent and some of the newbie vanillas do think it's sex and they do think it's bad and they do think it's consenting to nonconsent, to blurring lines and shades of gray just like you explained so you nailed that. Jarod explained that well. Oh, Michael would be a beautiful DOM. Sorry. I just needed to get it out there one time. I love this story. It's so well done, researched. You must know someone in the community or be in the community??

Ooh, Mommy, write more and write it harder! Yes!!!!!

Fun fact. Did you know that Jami is the name of Michael's sister in real life? You call him Jarod's player, right? Yeah, him. The actor. I know you aren't like a super fan who knows his birthday and the ear wiggling talents and you might also not know the names of his family either, and I can't believe no one has told you about it, but yeah. It doesn't mean you should change the name. I am curious and I only remember after reading and I was like.. oh. Just a heads up. If you didn't know I thought you would want to know. So now you know if you read this review.

This is hot no matter what the characters are named. It's hotter because Jarod is played by Michael. I mean.. damn. You don't get it probably or you're so used to being around gorgeous people and pretty celebrities that gorgeous and sexy are the norm for you but for me Michael is the ultimate man. I see him in everything you write. I want him big time. He is Jarod and you write Jarod better than anyone. HOT. I'm going to need multiple cold showers.

You could never write a trifle. This is amazing. I'm blown away. I've been reading you all day and I want more!

THIS! This is what I'd expect hols at the Centre to be like. Parker out seeking the BEST for Raines and boom there's Jarod and then Parker gives everyone the gift that keeps on giving. Raines being gone! This. I love this. So many good tidings and Christmas feels too. Christmas ain't Christmas without Ella singing Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas. This is beautiful. The Gift. Pretender Perfect.

I'm kind of whiplashed. Going from The Gift to this. You really can write any genre with ease and it amazes me. Lyle and Jarod's interactions here. I nearly fell into the floor. My God. It's all so plausible. This is stunning too. You are damn amazing.

Impressive as always! I've always wanted to see Jarod back In the Centre while Parker is there, assuming she isn't leaving? She is such a bitch and I can't stand her but I want to see Jarid tormenting her for real in the place where she put him, and I understand that Lyke is probably the only reason Jarod is back. Parker never had the brass to capture Jarod

 She is ALL talk on the TV series and always has been.

I hope Jarod pays Parker back for the shit she has put him through.

More please stat!

Are you trying to spoil me? Because THIS is how you spoil me!

Yes, GOD please let their brains shut up. Their bodies have got this. I know that Broots is at stake and that's the only reason I didn't get upset when Parker became aware and slammed on the brakes. It was really subtle. The comedy is golden my dear. That last line slamming it all home. Ta! Happy hols to you sweet girl. Please don't ever stop writing.

Happy dancing in my chair right now young lady!

What I love most about reading you is it's the perfect transition from IOTH or any of the seasons. I watch IOTH about once a week and then click any of your stories and it's a perfect flow. 

You really know the characters and you know where to put them and obviously spend a lot of time plotting and figuring it all out.

You're brilliant.
more please?