If you have a minute to spare, go for it.
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 594
Read Count: 3297
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Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 594
Read Count: 3297
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 594
Read Count: 3297
[Report This] Published: 13/07/10 Updated: 13/07/10
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 31/01/23
I love this. Really sweet but in the best way.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 31/01/23
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 69644
Read Count: 144583
When Jarod and his clone are presumed dead and further cloning attempts prove futile, Raines is determined to find another way. He finds it in Dry River, Arizona.
Characters: All the characters, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 69644
Read Count: 144583
[Report This] Published: 29/03/13 Updated: 06/06/19
Title: Chapter 1: The Missing Piece
Date: 10/11/22
Please continue. Are you so reluctant to write a happy ending? Please do it.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 10/11/22
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content
Challenges: SMUT COOKIE
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4826
Read Count: 921082
A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance, Smut
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content
Challenges: SMUT COOKIE
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4826
Read Count: 921082
[Report This] Published: 17/08/13 Updated: 17/08/13
Title: Chapter 1: Content
Date: 31/01/23
*whistles* Holy smokes! It's almost uncomfortable how IN character they are when sex is involved. I feel like I'm peeking in a window at them. I won't mind if you write more like this. Very classy and tastefully done and with plot. "I've half a mind to introduce myself." I can hear him say that. You're really good at this.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 31/01/23
Summary:
Categories: Christmas Challenge
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 988
Read Count: 4004
When you care enough to send the very best
Characters: Telling Would Spoil
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 988
Read Count: 4004
[Report This] Published: 10/12/13 Updated: 10/12/13
Title: Chapter 1: The Gift That Keeps on Giving
Date: 24/12/23
This is a solid story that could be an episode like everything you write. So tell me now are the hollow bullets the very best or killing raines or is miss parker the very best so she sent herself? All 3 methinks! I don't go in for Xmas usually but this is bloody perfect!
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 24/12/23
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57575
Read Count: 35001
Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57575
Read Count: 35001
[Report This] Published: 04/03/15 Updated: 01/06/23
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Date: 18/06/23
Excellent work. You skillfully crafted this captivating story that demanded my attention from the first word, and you did it while skillfully crafting and completing several other pieces. You're a natural wordsmith, your syntax and grammar are always on point, and most importantly you're a hell of a story teller, you don't fuss with the characters. You keep them in character, you understand subtlety and irony and apply them brilliantly, and the story is solid. Now that this is done I still will think of it and revisit it and your other pieces. It's been a pleasure to read this. It's always a pleasure to read Mirage.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 18/06/23
Summary:
Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 5577
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Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 5577
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 18/04/24
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Date: 10/03/23
Top shelf here as always Mirage. You like continuity too I see. I remember little Jarod screaming the antcipation of pain is worse than the pain and yeah seems the theory holds still. I love the word choices and placement, the way you talk about Parker being hard, incisive, angry, all snarling but how gentle she is with Jarod... beautiful moment. She's more kind than he is sometimes. His comes out of him because he's bitter and afraid sometimes and he doesn't mean it. I think she loves him and always has. This is really beautiful, gritty, raw, noir-ish, fast paced. Please update soon.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 10/03/23
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 11/09/23
Top notch mate. More action packed than usual with loads of excitement.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 11/09/23
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 9494
A last resort
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 9494
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 10/11/22
Just read all four chapters! Outstanding work, Mirage. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 10/11/22
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Date: 31/01/23
There you are young lady! Stop disappearing on us please. This update is amazing. That library! You're a book nerd aren't you? and a music nerd? Your descriptive work blows me away. The characters ARE the characters.You know them well. The architeture is stunning. I want more.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 31/01/23
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Date: 24/12/23
Top shelf writing here mate just like always. You are a hell of story teller and author. Please add more soon!
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 24/12/23
Summary:
Categories: Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2197
Read Count: 18302
A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Drama
Warnings: Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2197
Read Count: 18302
[Report This] Published: 08/06/23 Updated: 15/10/24
Title: Chapter 1: A Friend In Need
Date: 18/06/23
It's not easy to catch my attention or hold my attention but you're doing a bang on job of it. Keep going.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 18/06/23
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 395
Part six of The Return series.
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 395
[Report This] Published: 14/11/23 Updated: 14/11/23
Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind Of Freedom
Date: 15/11/23
Top notch mate!
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 15/11/23
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3612
Read Count: 340
This scriblet follows Incursion.
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 3612
Read Count: 340
[Report This] Published: 05/06/24 Updated: 05/06/24
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: 07/06/24
Solid story all the way! The writing and story telling are solid and skillfully done and this series of yours could be an episode or series continuation easily. You are a natural wordsmith and know how to command a captive reader.
I'm all yours. I'm impatient for more but I know real life can be a pain. I'll be here waiting.
Author's Response:
Well, no, not a wordsmith. There will be more. Thank you for reading and the all too generous review.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 07/06/24
Summary:
Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2913
Read Count: 491
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Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2913
Read Count: 491
[Report This] Published: 22/06/24 Updated: 22/06/24
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 27/06/24
*whistles* This is a solid first chapter. Does it feel awkward for you to write them so in character? They are scarily, eerily, uncomfortably, spot on themselves. How do you do that? Top shelf as always. I pray you'll keep writing.
Reviewer: richie Signed Date: 27/06/24