Oh no mate, it ended? I could have read this forever. I have to remind myself that you have other stories that you're updating and that helps console me. 

Including the ghosts is pure genius gold mate. I think their Mums should be together to see them make up and begin their lives together and Thomas deserves to see it made right too between his best friend and the love of his life.

Top notch mate, all the way to the last sentence. It's been a honor to read this.

Top notch, mate!

Uh-oh, Parker just made a mistake. Those images of MTW I just saw in here mean bad things happen here and she wiill regret that mistake.

I watched Iowa, the top image, and the Malibu Rd. series, and both Freeway and Freeway 2. Larry, Roger, Larry, guy in a box car, and I dunno how many more times one can man play a rapist or child molester. He does it so well. That's a problem with the best actors. They make it look real.

As for Jarod we know Jarod is bad and can do this. Look what he did to that dude he broke out of a Mexican prison. Sliced him open and stole his kidney wiithout conset...withdrawn consent= screaming no= NO = no consent. Jarod's math on that one doesn't add up. Rape is the same thing. Assault is assault. Surgery without consent is assault. That's just the law. But Jarod breaks laws every time he breathes and impersonates someone so...

I guess I'm buckling in for darkness.

Oh MY God. Very dark. Getting darker still. The reading is easy and it's like a train. So fast.

You are not an Air Supply fan. Got it.

Very fast paced and a lot of drama. Scary Jarod.

THe chapters could be longer. That's about my only issue/

Ouches. This is not easy to read at all. Must have been a pill to write it all out with the stunning detail and medically accurate detail.

Not many people even acknowledge female ejaculation. Only ONE other author here that I'm aware ofh as even referred it, but subtly, by writing "never been so much evidence of orgasm" and I'm miserably misquoting that and parapharsing. It was Mirage I'm certain. Just confirmed that it was Circles Of Hell by Mirage and she implies what happens in her own subtle way and I think someone took issue with even that because people... are gonna take issue. Some people think women don't orgasm at all.

I have to grin any time I read sex here! I love it!

Any time authors break from the pack, chew off the leashes and run feral to do their own thing a reviewer is going to have an issue. 

I'm curious to know what happens next.

Top notch. Succinct and subtle with a sucker punch that left me breathless. I love that the rapist is dead.

This is plausible and remarkably plotted and written. The characters are so meaty, so real, true to form. You're amazing. If you ever want to settle in a write an epic please do it. I could read you all day and night forever.

A short gut punch of a chapter to keep me on the edge of my seat. I love it.

Mate, this is amazing. Thank you for writing these fantastic stories and sharing them with us. Much love and big respect!

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Exceptional work. You have reached through the screen and taken my hand and yanked me inside this universe, an amazing Pretenderverse. The characters are meaty, so fleshy, real and on point. The descriptive work is beautiful. I can smell that earth, all of it. The plotting work is remarkable. Please continue this.

This is phenomenal, young lady.

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