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Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4282
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Ahhh. My heart. You really do an amazing job with all aspects of writing. What I always notice the most is characterizations. That one can make or break a story for me no matter how well written because if I don't recognize the characters, if I don't see and hear Jarod, Lyle, Parker, Sydney I can't read it. You do that brilliantly. The only other time I see them this in character is in the TV series.
For me, it's almost as if some of the plausibility is hinged on the characters' explanations and reactions. The Pretender series on tv had some crazy stuff that stretched plausibility but it was plausible when Sydney or Jarod or Broots explained it in their technical intelligent terms. I love that I always recognize them when you write them. Thank you for that. You make it feel like the series never ended.
Reviewer: Leese SignedOi! They've got him. Now they gotta keep him. Sounds like they're on their way to finding a way to keep him... I'm so freaking stoked for this. I'm here for this story big time!
Reviewer: Leese Signed
Finished business.
OMG this is amazing. That's one baddie who should've never walked away. Thanks for writing this and doing it so cleverly. You're a genius.
Reviewer: Leese SignedA last resort
As much as I love love love darkJarod I gotta say I'm in love with the lighter Jarod too. This is an intriguing plot, fresh. I can't get enough. More please?
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Leese.
Reviewer: Leese SignedOoohh uh. Dyyyamn. I'm sitting here trying to figure out what I love more about your stories. Is it the stellar story telling, the lyrical prose and writing, or the freaking on-the-nose characterisations? I've never seen the characters behave more like the characters since watching thte characters on the series... I have a paid subscription so I can watch The Pretender and read your stories and now I stare off like... they are the same when you write them. It's scary and I love it. You are my favorite author, the one that keeps me coming back. You keep the series alive for me and I'm grateful. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Please never stop writing.
Yeah, scary. That's me. Thanks for reading and for the much-too-generous reivew, Leese.
Reviewer: Leese SignedOohhh I already want the sequel! I'm usually patient...waited for a end to The Pretender TV show for ages but I crave more of your writing so hard.
More please.
Reviewer: Leese Signed
Part six of The Return series.
I've missed you so much girl. It's so good to see you here again and what a hell of a wondeful installment to The Return series. It's happening. You're really bringing them together and not just for the sex. In some of your other in process stories they've had sex but haven't even embraced as adults so it's important to see this and the evolution. I love it. You are articulate and provide precious details and I need more. Please.
Reviewer: Leese SignedThis scribblet follows Asphyxia.
This one nearly knocked me off my couch! I don't like spiders. This is a dark and troubling piece, like most dreams and what I imagine the death experience will be like with the confusion and trying to escape the chaos outside the mind. It's brilliant. I've never read anything like t his, worded this way, designed this way. You constructed it and composed it into a stunning and terrifying work of art. This really knocks me. Shakes me hard. If that makes sense. NO warnings needed because none of the warnings I see would work either. It's just vaguely dark in a way that is menacing. I feel this so hard. I was speechless and unable to review for a while. I read this 2 days ago and just now can try to find words. It's amazing. I want more like it. To understand these feelings. Thank you for evoking so much. I learn things about msyelf that maybe scare me. This is a perfect Pretender fit. Things can be strangely perfect and we know something is wrong but don't yet know what. It's like that. You are a master.
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