Penname: Leese [Contact]

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Member Since: 31/05/22

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Summary:

Nothing is more hideous than human nature.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Angelo, Broots, Ethan, Jarod, Lyle, Miss Parker, Mr Raines, Original Character, Sam, Sydney
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 95072
Read Count: 101201
[Report This] Published: 08/11/08 Updated: 27/09/10


Title: Chapter 24: Oh, What a Tangled Web

Tangled web is spot on.i love how trapped they are by themselves and their own deceiving and deceiving of selves.

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 25: Such Sweet Sorrow

omg!! I can't even right now

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 26: Square One

drunkjarod is a sight innt he? I love this story. I was so afraid but I really love it

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 27: Bitter Sweets

looked up 'its impossible " I really like this song. are you a ... perry como??? fan. u aren't old enough to be a fan of his!! it was just a theme for the shop I guess. love it all. wow. can't get enough

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 28: The Dance We Do

*BOWS* *BOWS*

oh my gloriful goddesses

!!!

You rule.

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 29: None so blind

Margaret with the truth ’ s. and you make me ship Parker and Zoe a little.

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 30: When It All Unravels

uhhhhh my soul and ❤️❤️❤️❤️ why is he so sweet 🧁??? this is not what I thought it was going to be and I love it

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 31: If At First You Don't Succeed

ohh 😮 oh my god he's so much in character being Jarod and she is too trying to be too tough like she can be sometimes and I love them both.

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 32: Coming Clean

he can't let her go ..he should but he wants to fix it and he loves her and she loves him and oh this one really makes a person think deeply

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 33: Cacophony

'looking for these" Jarod over here making my guts feel weird again with his being in control badasness and I want more

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 34: Chance of Rain

😳 omg

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Date: 29/08/22
Title: Chapter 35: Awakening

can't get enough

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Date: 30/08/22
Title: Chapter 36: Eternal Sunshine? (Of The Not-So-Spotless-Mind)

ohhh I love it ohh 😮 wait so you wrote this by the seat of your pants??? like as you posted?? I read the notes so ?? wow! and you succeeded! awesome 😎 you are a genius!!

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Date: 30/08/22
Title: Chapter 37: In The Absence Of Light

ohh 😯

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Date: 30/08/22
Title: Chapter 38: ...In The Abstract (Alternate Ending One)

😮 ohh

 

monstrosity lol no it's not

just scary truths

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Date: 30/08/22
Title: Chapter 39: Irreconcilable Differences? (Alternate Ending Two)

uhh my ’ Sydney is so sweet. I like this ending. I like the first one too. 🧐

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Date: 30/08/22
Title: Chapter 40: Perdition

Yea..yes. this is the ending. I like the first and second endings and they are all plausible but this one is it. It is Jarod and he is persistent. He is a genius and is nuts about family and keeping family together. he loves Parker too. He would do this. Drug her until there are no bad memories and start again. he seems crazy like that and always did ...even back in season 1 he's obviously crazy. I can't believe I was so scared. will try circles of hell next... it's also dark too I'm told. You are brilliant. Thank for staying with this and going to the dark places to write it all out with details. it had to be so hard. you did it,! congratulations.

 

will there be more dark Jarod in the future?? please??!

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Date: 30/08/22
Summary:

He's waiting.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 900
Read Count: 6588
[Report This] Published: 05/08/12 Updated: 05/08/12


Title: Chapter 2: A Different Ending

So beautiful. I'm breathless.

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Date: 06/10/22
I Owe You One by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Jarod has an epiphany. (payback doesn't have to be a bitch)

 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1289
Read Count: 2503
[Report This] Published: 17/02/13 Updated: 17/02/13


Title: Chapter 1: Changing The Story

Oooh sweet, this one is so not dark. The first thing I heard about you was "ohhh, she's the queen of darkness" but this is deLIGHTful.

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Date: 06/10/22
Darkness Falling by Mirage
Rated: NC 18 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 496]
Summary:

Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides. 



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57575
Read Count: 34609
[Report This] Published: 04/03/15 Updated: 01/06/23


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

THIS IS HOW IT IS DONE!!

I echo the others who say you should be writing the novels. Please can't we share you on Facebook and Twitter?? I don't even use those anymore because there was nothing else to do there but if we could share you... I'd have a reason to use them.

You are the best!

Thank you for all the entertainment, tears, laughter, 😲 shocks, and more.

Now get on to updating the other stories and write new ones please.

I love you!

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Date: 04/06/23
Summary:


Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: None
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: The Return
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 39350
Read Count: 5401
[Report This] Published: 04/11/16 Updated: 04/08/22


Title: Chapter 1: Unknown

Please say you're busy writing right now. Keep those little fingers going Mirage. I don't know what I'd do without you! Please hurry. I'm so addicted.

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Date: 12/08/22
Title: Chapter 11: Trust

Thank you for this! It means so much. I have a question. I read that Steve & Craig talked about Miss Parkers real dad might be even more ICKY than Raines. My question is what do u think that could mean??? would like ur input. Thanks again!! I love your work.

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Date: 26/08/22
Oblivion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: None
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 45808
Read Count: 61796
[Report This] Published: 24/12/16 Updated: 14/07/23


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You are such a stand out author, breaking from the pack, not afraid to write anything, not afraid to say people uncomfortable, and I was a little bit but also I'm intrigued and I think two consenting adults have a right to be together if they want to and if they use precautions and not procreate.You write so eloquently that it becomes so plausible and you add dialogue that makes it all feel perfect. It's genius. I hope for more.

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Date: 19/07/23
Lacunae by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 240]
Summary:

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Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 36694
Read Count: 74663
[Report This] Published: 25/03/18 Updated: 01/08/23


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I finally signed up!!! You are worth the hassle of signing up tho so it's all good. I love your writing voice and the realism in your stories that keep The Pretender alive. Thank you for being you. Please write more.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Leese.

Reviewer: Leese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/05/22
Blindsided by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 192]
Summary:

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Categories: Indefinite Timeline, Stories
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: Warning: Language, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 10214
Read Count: 4282
[Report This] Published: 23/12/21 Updated: 18/04/24


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yes!

I can't even wait to see what happens next! So excited!😆 Please keep going m'dear.

Reviewer: Leese Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/05/23