Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
I'm going to miss this one but I can always come back and take the journey again. This chapter is so powerful. There's so much strength and depth in your writing, and the characters...oh my god Mirage, they are Pretender perfect. Thank you for writing and sharing always.
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A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
You're one of those authors who knows how to captivate and thrill. I get excited for every new update and story. You haven't disappointed me yet. Thanks for contacting to entertain me.
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Can't get enough Mirage. You know how to keep these pages flipping. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed What can I say?
Wow. Even the smut is professional and eloquent. I love the quality of your work and how consistent it is, the characters are always in character, and you're a master plotter and storyteller and transition scenes with ease.
So, how are you? Really? Are you well? Is there anything I can do for you?
You're not going to stop writing are you?
Please don't ever stop writing for us.
More please?
Aw, thanks for the kind words. I don't plan to stop scribbling. That said, I didn't exactly plan to begin either. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Solid first chapter. Again, your work is so refreshing.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed You really know the characters and know where to put them. This is so clever and cleverly written. I want more and more!
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed I wondered if Mp had other plans when she showed up acting like a lawyer. Her team is already in place gathering evidence to get Jarod out and .. back to the Center I'm thinking???? Amazing. Plausible. Believeable. It's scary and people should know. You have never been afraid of darkness or controversy and that's the stuff that makes any writer a real author and a an amazing author.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed Finished business.
This is outstanding work. I admire your talent and ability to be brief. Thank you for all of your work.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed A last resort
Ooh, wow, so much wow. You're in peak form. You caught my attention with the title and that first thrilling sentence throws us into the action. I love it. You plot and develop the characters while transitioning seamlessly and do it all masterfully. I know that Parker doesn't really plan to kill Broots. She would kill him herself if she wanted him dead, so I'm super excited to see what you have planned for us. I wait impatiently. Amazing work as always.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Miss Shanon.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed Ooh, I love it. More please?
Thanks for the R&R.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed Bravo ‘🎉! You balance plot, adventure, superb storytelling, and momentum beautifully.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed Timed perfectly with Halloween and what could be more scary than what you've written? Not much. I can't wait for Jarod to do what he does best. Revenge. This time with Miss Parker at his side I hope.
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A friend in need is a friend indeed.
This is well written and good story telling..I can see why Mirage encouraged you. You have talent. Please keep going.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed Part six of The Return series.
You're always in peak form. This first chapter of part 6 seamlessly transitioned from where they were. I love how you balance story consistency and brevity. You know what you're doing and you're doing it brilliantly. I hope you never stop. What I love about fanfic is that the authors write the story and that's the only focus. You aren't here to make money. It's fanfic like you say. All fanfic authors get paid in reviews and stars. It's much more pure and authentic to the Pretender tv series this way. You add only what will move the story forward or fill in blanks, and add to the characters' backstories to make their relatsionships even more profound. You stay on the path with what we already know.
I guess I'm still disappointed about the so called "official" novels. I thought they were going to continue where they left us, not change so much of the story including when Jarod escaped. It's like it became more about making money, but I'd spent money on the DVDs. That's the story I wanted to see continued. I don't want to spend more money on books that don't continue the DVD's story, and they haven't released another book yet either. I never thought I'd prefer fan written stories over the the novels written by the show's creators but I do. I prefer yours. I know you don't like this kind of talk and you don't want to hear it or read it. I think you should know how much I love your work. I want you to know.
I want you to know that many of your stories are my preferred continuations and endings. Your stories could all fit perfectly as a movie or episodes.
I want to see you continue this soon please.
Take care of yourself and happy holidays if you celebrate.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed This scribblet follows Asphyxia.
I love this. I think I saw Michael T. Weiss today and immediately thought of the fandomly and YOU and I came here and you have recently updated!! I was so scared that I couldn't even say hey at him lol.. he's SO tall, and he looks different. I'm so regretful now but I know I would still be scared spineless if I had the chance again so what's a girl to do anyway? He doesn't bite does he? You've seen him. You didn't freak out. I feel stupid now.
Reading this makes me feel better. You take my mind off of the stupid things I've done. I hope to read more. This is out of the world amazing. Lyrical and moving. Haunting. I love it.
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