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Pis Aller by Mirage
Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

A last resort



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Jarod, Miss Parker
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11762
Read Count: 4723
[Report This] Published: 28/09/22 Updated: 01/03/24


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Exquisite. You continue to out-do yourself. Appointment in Samarra feels. Very very Miss Parkeresque, like all of her other thoughts. She's come close to losing Broots already with his health issues that are related to working for the Centre. I too want to see him get out of the mess alive. It's probable that there would be a time that this would happen, and cannon because in the past she's been protective of Broots. The closeness Jarod and Parker shared wasn't expected. You're not a shipper but you also know the chemistry and cannon. She's important to his world and they both had some flashbacks of kissing each other during the television series and they did almost kiss in Carthis. Actually I think they did kiss and Ocee walked in and we weren't allowed to see that they kissed. All of that mouth wiping of Jarod's makes me wonder. Apothecary and card catalog ahhh a woman after my own heart. I can smell that library. Books. Lightly scented oak from pervious fire place fires. Pancakes. You caress all of the senses including auditory with Bach. The feel of books. Records. Polished wood. Jarod's gothic trifecta achieved was brilliant. A real stroke of genius. He's restoring an observatory, and he's rather observant. I think he meant "first step" exactly the way Parker thought he did and I think she probably had to conceal the alarm. Your writing is transportive, illustrative. It feels like I'm there. If Parker COULD could allow things to happen, one first kiss as adults, take that first step there's no telling where it'll take them. We all want it.

Your response to my previous review and check in was really vague, Mirage. "Priorities that could't be back-burnered." You're not actually Miss Parker, are you? That sounds like some quick stock reply. As a matter of face you replied to another reviewer with that same reply. I hope you're really well and taking care of yourself. Until next time.

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/01/23
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bravo! This, like everything you write, is exquisite. Miss Parker would find it difficult to be indebted to Jarod. I can understand the concerns she has. I can understand her feelings of sadness too when she saw the envelope and knew Broots was already on his way to safety. I love the realization that Jarod was keeping her close, using the guise of helping her help Broots.Jarod could have done everything alone. Keeping Parker out of her own way is important and you obviously know how intelligent and capable Jarod is proving again that you don't hate Jarod. I apologize again for ever thinking you hated Jarod.

Magnificent work. Thank you and congratulations!

Until next time

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/03/24
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bravo! This, like everything you write, is exquisite. Miss Parker would find it difficult to be indebted to Jarod. I can understand the concerns she has. I can understand her feelings of sadness too when she saw the envelope and knew Broots was already on his way to safety. I love the realization that Jarod was keeping her close, using the guise of helping her help Broots.Jarod could have done everything alone. Keeping Parker out of her own way is important and you obviously know how intelligent and capable Jarod is proving again that you don't hate Jarod. I apologize again for ever thinking you hated Jarod.

Magnificent work. Thank you and congratulations!

Until next time

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/03/24
Summary:

The pursuit for Jarod turns deadly in this present day Dystopia. Who will die and who will live?

Let's find out.



Categories: Post IOTH, Post Rebirth
Characters: All the characters
Classifications: Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Character Musing, Comedy, Drama, Romance, Smut, Suspence/Mystery, Tragedy
Warnings: Warning: Character Death, Warning: Language, Warning: Non Consensual Sexual Content, Warning: Sexual Content, Warning: Violence

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 1448
Read Count: 9888
[Report This] Published: 08/10/22 Updated: 08/10/22


Title: Chapter 1: Fallen Angels in the Satan's Playground

I see what you did there, and I like it. Real dogs in hot dogs is a terrible mental image. It's interesting to me that I know who you're talking about without naming "Dear Leader." I read 1984 and Animal Farm and all of the classics regarding this kind of subject but never really thought I'd see so many willfully ignorant people jump on the red hat bandwagon. Well done.

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/10/22
Summary:

Part six of The Return series.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Jarod, Miss Parker, Original Character
Classifications: Genres: General
Warnings: Warning: Language

Series: The Return
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:No
Word count: 2230
Read Count: 296
[Report This] Published: 14/11/23 Updated: 14/11/23


Title: Chapter 1: A Different Kind Of Freedom

Well hello there sweet Mirage. How are you?

I must say that I'm pleasantly surprised by Parker's lowering of her guard. This work takes time, building the emotional bonds and trust can't be done immediately but you are masterfully building a strong foundation for them.This is impressive. Jarod isn't so bad, is he?

You're a wordsmith Mirage.

I also was pleased with your respone of my review of chapter 14 of Lucunae. We are fam. You are not derpy. I love that you love the fandom.

Until next time.

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/11/23
Incursion by Mirage
Rated: PG 13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

This scribblet follows Asphyxia.



Categories: Post IOTH
Characters: Broots, Catherine Parker, Jarod, Miss Parker, Other Non-Centre Related Character
Classifications: Genres: Angst, General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1113
Read Count: 186
[Report This] Published: 24/01/24 Updated: 24/01/24


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bravo! This could be the continue of The Pretender, picking up where it was canceled with Asphyxia.

You have extraordinary insight into the characters and a deep understanding of writing and grammar that grips me each time I read you.

I understand what you're saying about the warnings. No warning is warranted for this story, and....... yet....... there's something dark here, something insidious, but beautiful, and also horrific. You recongize that and I do as well.

I think the PG13 is sufficient. 

I think a P for everyone is fine, too.

I would understand also if you raised the warning to R or XXX.

I understand any confliction you might have about the rating.

The spider stabbing and penetrating Miss Parker's hand parallels her belief in the previous part of the series, Asphyxia, that Lyle raped her as well. She died believing it. Jarod brought her back from death but I think that the belief she died with remains in her mind.

The stabbing represents rape, too. The spider is basically Lyle. He raped his victims. He was going to rape Miss Parker. Not only that, but Lyle used a knife to affix Miss Parker to the floor in Asphyxia.

I also see the similarities between silk spun by spider and suture silk, a more innocent view.

It's subjective. I think depending on perspective the reader will form their own idea and either find it too dark to be read or a day in the life of a weird dream.

I applaud you for this. I hope Jarod will help Miss Parker. I hope Miss Parker will let Jarod help her.

This could be the turning point for them.

It's brilliant, in short. Beyond brilliant even.

Until next time...

Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/01/24