An update?

I'm reading this. I'm like 18 or so chapters in and realised I haven't reviewed any of it yet. So I'm challenging myself to review so far before I get the prize of continuing.
MY GOD! Mirage. This first chapter is the first domino. It fell and knocked everything else down and that shit happens for real.

You did so... I'm kind of struggling to think coherently.

Magic. this is magical.

Just perfect. My, my.

Oooh. Oh my god!

I hesitate to use the word evil Jarod. He is being Jarod imo. He hasn't always treated her that well on the tv series. They bring out the worst in each other so many times. This is a realistic take on what's on my dvds. I'm in awe.

*Fans self* This is hot. I'm serious. I love this so much. It's not just hot. It's also professionally written and not cheesy and not trashy. It's still in character and classy. It can't be an easy line to dance along and not cross. Well done. I hope you'll update this.

Oh, the ending. Oh, my, my. Your prose is eloquent, stunning, gripping, powerful. I love this story, I'm sad to see this end, I'm grateful that you wrote it for us and that you updated it. You gave us a satisfying conclusion. Thank you so much.

They had sex? They had SEX! You didn't show it! ARRRRHHHHHH!!!!

It's ok. I'm ok. Really  really seriously no really I'm ok. Just deprived of seeing my 2 fav characters haz teh sex. They never did it on screen either. It's so disappointing. I guess... not that they would show them actually having sex on screen either, unless it was on HBO or something, or full porno! But the emotional and physical aspects of sex that you infuse into the sex scenes blow my freaking mind and with talent like that of yours Mirage you should use it to please us sex starved fans! It's like watching the characters ... even I dare say the actors .. have sex when I read your sex parts because you write them so well and the act so freaking well.

I'll stop whinging now.

Did the couple decide not to let possibly being father and daughter get in their way? I'm ok with that. He wasn't her father, even if he was her bio father. He just wasn't. So if they shrugged it off and middle fingered propiety I'm all good. I want them together, having sex, and I don't care how related they are to each other by blood.

Can't you edit and add the sex? Please?

ok i'll stop whinging.

I'll never stop whinging about it.

I love this. I want more.

And give me the sex next time!

Bravo!

Oomph! Now THIS is what I'm talking about. I love your writing. I hope you'll update everything else you're writing, too.

Much love.

Thank you.

You are a breath of fresh air.

*Squees in lifelong, hardcore, diehard pretender fan*

Jarod getting all huffy like this.. ermagherd love it when he does it on the dvds too."a blind woman can even see" oh lordt! Makes my fangirl heart thump harder.

And shout outs to the motorhead tune. My girl Miuna was a metal head mechanic! Yahhh! Please say there'll be more flashbacks to her and how it all unfolded. I love it. Jarod's going back to the Centre. I can't wait. I always wanted to see him back there while Parker is there, too, long term thing. Make it happen please. Love you!

Exquisite. I love how emotional it became between Jarod and Parker. I still have chill bumps all over me. I feel that so much. It's like watching an episode when I read you. You nail it. Every damn time.

Broots just wanting peace. Damn. He's feeling bad and it wasn't his fault. Parker wasn't going to bring Jarod in until Lyle showed up.That's true to her character. She's never captured him. She's never taken him back to the Centre. SHe can't. She won't do it. I feel so much for her. She's standing there telling Jarod to escape, demanding him to leave and he can't! I'm in tears, Mirage.

Jarod can't leave. He tells Parker to leave, and take her people with her. Oh god. He's trying to be strong, wants to confess his love to her but refuses to burden her.. the way Sydney didn't want to burden Jarod if he could escape.

My heart.But they both know they have feelings for each other. Parker doesn't even deny it when Jarod talks about how Faraijii discovering those feelings.

Poor Angelo. Let him be safe and happy.

I hope to see Sydney soon. He's still recovering from the health issue I presume.

That last part tho. Damn. Jarod won't have to feel guilty for long. He'll be seeing her soon I'm guessing. Can't ever get enough of you. Write faster please.