I read this last night and I still am speechless. I shy away from smut sometimes because of the slang. Like if the characters are slanging and dirty talking each other it's not so bad but mostly I only go in for that trash talking IRL. I can't stand the narrator using slang at all tho. This is perfect. It has plausible plot and then the most steamy dirty smut written in the classiest most tasteful language ever and so I can see what they're doing and I understand what's happening. I read a pretender smut story by another author once and I couldn't tell which orifice Jarod was poking around in. It was so confusing. You make it really clear what's going on. I'm still speechless. I've never read anything this hot. It's hot plot smut. It's delicious. I love that ending. Jarod wont' give up but doesn't seem stalky about it. I love how in character they always are when you write them. I love everything about your stories and your writing and voice. You have a cohesiveness, so much skill. That's all know to say. I'm still speechless. This story will stay with me always. All stars.

Of course she isn't waiting. Yah! Slammed in the shipper feels... from someone who isn't a shipper???! Comeon! This is beautiful and I know you'll finish right? Right? Please?

It keeps better and better and I keep needing more and more. Please feed this addiction.

Oh! All the Pretender feels with this one on this sad day. You're an amazing author and I'm thankful to read you. It's a tough day today. I learned that Lenny Von Dolhen who played our Mr. Cox obgyn has passed away. Hate to be a bearer of bad tidings. I know you loved the man and he was a compassionate liberal man. I'm thrilled to read this and with sadness in my heart. That's 4 of our Pretender fandomily. Mr. Parker. Brigitte. Debbie. Mr. Cox. It sucks. So thanks for this. I read this with tears in my eyes. Thank you for keeping this series and these characters alive for me.

Action packed and fast paced. Oh oooh you are incredibly talented. I can't even. More?

Oh wow. There is no violence, sex, cursing, or anything that makes a warning necessary but this is still somehow one of the darkest stories I've ever read in my entire life. It follows Asphyxia masterfully and is masterfully written! You wrote so few words and said so much that showed us an entire movie's worth of words. I love the seamless transition between dream and reality. Amazing! I'm so envious. More, please?