There are pretenders among us.
Pretender
A crime scene, a chance meeting, two people transcending the lives chosen for them. Jarod POV. S.M.U.T.
Just saw the images you posted on some of your stories mate and well played. They do look shocked here after almost being caught kissing by a blind woman, and in the story they are both shocked and ready to blame each other. They look so bloody shocked here. Good choice mate for a perfect Pretender one off. I don't go in for smut usually but this was a crime scene and had some action and it seems inevitable on the series you gave us what the networks failed to give us.
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Jarod is implicated in a spate of homicides.
Top shelf my mate. Margaret alluding to the major's more aggressive tactics when Jarod doesn't kick open the door and then I get the impression that she was with Jarod outside but then floated right through the door to join the other ghosts and Parker. This is all spectacularly written and I know it's over now but I will revisit in coming years. There is humor, action, adventure, drama, trauma, and the love interests. I'm not into fanfic so much but this held my attention and is fiction at it's finest. Pats on the back and kudos.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed A past transgression jeopardizes Sydney's life.
Top notch writing as always. You're one of the few authors I read here and the only one that keeps me coming back.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Top notch mate. It's a tight chapter in a tight story filled with tight chapters. I think Mirage isnt fitting for you even if you do like anonymity. You should be Queen of Pain.
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Top notch writing, can't rate it anything but a ten. Congrats mate!
Thank you, King of Pain.
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Holy hells mate. The chapter title and story title are perfect and provide some hints. Refuge is a returning theme in the tv series and at the end of this hauntingly beautiful missing piece ... it's really the center piece or Centre piece we realize that refuge was sought by Jarod within ...by jarod. In himself and inside the Centre he found refuge. Stunning. You are a genius! I have to recommend this now!
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Wild Horses prequel.
Blimey this is bloody brilliant! New favorites!
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Top notch, Mate.
You bring the characters to life.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Top notch, Mate. All the way. All stars for you!
Cheers!
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Want to add that King of Pain would be a more fitting name for you. You really bring the action!
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Top shelf, mate. Hell of a ride already and action packed! The characters are in top form, the transitions rock, the descriptions all place me dead center CENTRE of the story so I can watch it all unfold up close. Tight chapters, too. You yank me in and don't let go until the last word.
Bloody brilliant.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Finished business.
Top notch writing and story telling. I expect nothing less from you.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed A last resort
Top notch mate, this is a tight af story you've got.
Thanks, dude.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Top notch Mirage! You nail the characters and are a hell of a story teller.
Thanks, King Of Pain
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed That was a fast update young lady and as always of pretender caliber, packed with action and fast paced. Top notch writing all the way. I can't wait to see how Jarod and Miss P work together and how she'll repay him.
I'm curious, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Top notch as always mate. You're a hell of a storyteller and you write the tightest stories. You've honed your craft to pretender perfection. Tell me tho will there be Forces of Nature and Circles of Hell sequels?
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed Reading again and sill delighted. This is bloody well done. Were you by any chance born between 1959 and 1972? Just a question. Nothing weird. Please update soon.
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Top notch mate as always.
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed This scribblet follows Asphyxia.
Buzzin' mate. This is dark and fantastic. Thanks and cheers mate!
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