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Title: Chapter 1

I love this. I think I saw Michael T. Weiss today and immediately thought of the fandomly and YOU and I came here and you have recently updated!! I was so scared that I couldn't even say hey at him lol.. he's SO tall, and he looks different. I'm so regretful now but I know I would still be scared spineless if I had the chance again so what's a girl to do anyway? He doesn't bite does he? You've seen him. You didn't freak out. I feel stupid now.
Reading this makes me feel better. You take my mind off of the stupid things I've done. I hope to read more. This is out of the world amazing. Lyrical and moving. Haunting. I love it.



Author's Response:
I'm sorry that didn't happen, and that you have regrets.

Wow. I never know how to respond to this. I guess I don't notice his height, maybe I'm always wearing heels, or in a seated scenario. I don't know.

No, I've never been bitten by him, but I have watched The Howling IV in which the human character that he portrays sorta transitions into a werewolf character (hell of an improvement, because that Richard person character is aptly named, an absolute dick, and that's exactly how he got himself turned ino a fucking werewolf to begin with), and presumably werewolves do bite (disclaimer: I've never met a werewolf—probably because they don't exist—and cannot confirm that they do, in fact, bite) so I can understand how he'd be associated with biting. But, no, there was no wolfing out.

And no, I didn't freak out.

No, you aren't stupid. You're probably maybe a little bit nervous because he's famous. If it helps: a lot of people are famous now. Your neighbor probably has a podcast. It doesn't make anyone special. No, you aren't spineless (you wouldn't be able to type—or live—if you didn't have a spine). You're on a public website confiding your fear to me (and potentially billions of other people) which means you aren't spinless, and, wow, billions? Yeah, I know. If only. If only billions of people had good taste, yes?

I'd be glaring at the screen at Jarod while he sing-song purred some new awful thing in Parker's general direction during season twenty-nine (going on thirty) of The Pretender (instead of scribbling fanfic and assuring fans that the actors aren't werewolves) IF only.

You're not stupid.
You're not stupid.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

 

Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/02/24 02:29 am
Title: Chapter 1

Ooh this does my heart so good. This fandom is very much alive and I very much love your writing. You capture the series and the characters and you have these plots that drive the story the forward and bring the series up to much needed date. It's refreshing to read you Mirage. I can't wait for more. This is super exciting!

Reviewer: Jana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/24 10:16 pm
Title: Chapter 1

How much do I love this Mirage??? Let me count all of the wayzzz. I love everything about this. Dreams can be like this, and brains can be like that, trying to make sense out of the senseless that are subconsciouses get up to. This is deep and dark. It's beautiful and horrific. I love it. It's so pretenderY too. More please? I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/24 01:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

Exciting and eloquently written! I'm excited to read more, and that the fandom is still alive and well after decades!!! That means the tv series was awesome AND it means the fanfic is also awesome!!

I will have to read the other parts of this series. I'm new so please be kind and forgive me for not knowing all of your work. I'm excited for the rest of the series to complete.

Kind regards always and thank you for not giving up on the fandom.

Reviewer: Rozzo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/24 10:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I'm grinning like a huge fool right now. SEeing you still posting makes me happy. You bring me happiness and comfort . I know this feeling that MIss Parker  has in her dream. You express it beautifully and eloquently. I can't articulate the way you do. I love that you understand things, difficult things, and that you write about them. I love that this fandom is alive and these characters will never die. Thank you. More please?

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/24 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 1

Thank you so much for writing and sharing. We have to keep the series alive, keep the characters alive, keep the fandom strong. It means so much to me that you continue. I need this so badly now.

Please keep going forever.

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/02/24 10:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What blows me away is your spot on characterisations and how all senses are impacted when I read you. It's like watching, hearing, touching, tasting, smelling, etcc.... That's the thing also that I don't like sometimes... it all being real enough to touch and taste as it's quite terrifying and this isn't an insult to you... that's the reading experience. Authors should be able to transport and you excel in doing so. You are an outstanding author and that's why I'm still trembling after reading this. I await impatiently the complete series of these no longer missing pieces.Thank you.

Reviewer: Joni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/24 07:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What blows me away is your spot on characterisations and how all senses are impacted when I read you. It's like watching, hearing, touching, tasting, smelling, etcc.... That's the thing also that I don't like sometimes... it all being real enough to touch and taste as it's quite terrifying and this isn't an insult to you... that's the reading experience. Authors should be able to transport and you excel in doing so. You are an outstanding author and that's why I'm still trembling after reading this. I await impatiently the complete series of these no longer missing pieces.Thank you.

Reviewer: Joni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/24 07:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

There must be more. Now! Don't make me break out the whip! Seriously tho you've got me intrigued, you know the characters. I can't get enough!

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/02/24 12:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

Exciting! This was intriguing and pleasantly dark Mirage. Good to see Catherine. I think Parker would retreat into her mother's embrace and can't blame her. I hope Lyle pays. I can't wait for this series to be all completed. I'm so excited. You never disappoint. More more more please please please and thank you so much.

Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/24 02:26 am
Title: Chapter 1

oh yeah baby! This is out of this world. You keep getting better and I keep staying addicted. A pretender perfect math. More of this. Stoked for this series!

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/24 01:30 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm actually speechless. The seamless merging of the peaceful freedom-refuge  with terror and entrapment and the seamless merging of the terror with reality, the way the reader is allowed to SEE everything that has happened and everything that Parker believes is happening, some that she doesn't undersatnd and is confused by, and then that allows us to also see what is actually really happening while she struggles to free herself of webbing.. it is powerful. It's really moving for me. You do really take me there, sink me into the scene.Her brain has been trying to process events, and in fear she sought her mother's refuge, escaped into her mind. There are things that her brain isn't processing. I think that's part of the refuge. The 'strange and violent hammerring" is Jarod "thrusting" Lyle's face into the floor three times.. this does follow Asphyxia perfectly. The pressure in her chest and the lips is jarod performing CPR on her. The sirens, the throat. She was intubated. She escaped all of that trauma by finding her mother but she couldn't run far enough. It's that feeling that something is wrong and you keep running until you can't run anymore. You transported me, took my  hand and yanked me into that world. How are you able to do that? Not even Stephen King has done that. Not many authors can do that. This is all plausible, too. It's scarily plausible. You're a hell of an author, Mirage. My sights are set on the next installments. Please. Kudos and Bravos!

Reviewer: James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/24 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 1

I want you to know that I've enslaved your muse and it will be doing my bidding with only Jarod and Parker romancy smut from here on. That's the hint for you to write some smut. I find this intriguing too but I don't foresee any smut in this. I love the way you write smut particularly the anatomical correctness and the preciseness so there's no guessing about what Jarod and Parker might be doing to each other. Transcendence and Sweet Dreams and those smutty love to hate each other sex scenes in COH and FON are the best thing ever. Don't get me wrong. I love this. It's immersive in every way and speaks to all of my senses but right now I just want the one sense fondled if you know what I mean. I want you to give me more of this and finish it up and then write smut. Nobody does it better Mirage! Forever grateful to you.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/24 12:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

Ooh Merci! I'm hooked LIKE a fish. You reel me in. I need more.

Reviewer: Garbiella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/24 11:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

OOo. Mirage, I'm breathless. This is exquisite.

Congrats congrats!! I love it.

Thank you and more please?

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/24 10:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Hell yeaha, Mate this is gold! The way you set this up and introed us to the "IT" a bloody spider and weaved the tale the way that spider weaved Parker into its web in her dream refuge turned nightmare is brilliant. You're a GENIUS! Pretender Gold Mate.

Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/24 03:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm so excited! Stoked to read this and super freaking excited for more! Oh thank you so much for writing and posting here. Thank you forever!

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/24 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 1

Merci! Please keep going. I love it all. So much emotion and terrific writing.

Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/24 12:52 am
Title: Chapter 1

This is so dark. No violence, no death, no language, no sex... still so dark. No warnings necessary, but I get why you feel like that there should be warning. This took my breath away. I love it. It's not an unpleasant feeling. Your writing is evocative. You're amazing. Magical. You're magic. Thank you.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/24 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oomph! Congratulations! Broots for the win! He is tolerant af sure but when he finally gives out of fucks it's a sight. I love Jon Gries, too, and he is central to The Pretender, and he will give us these little bits of wisdom here and there and is protector. I love that you know that and include him. Have you seen Dream Corp LLC by the way? You should if you haven't. What movies have you seen him in if you don't mind having the conversation. Any recommendations? Please?

Anyhoo m'dear the characters are all real enough to feel up and punch. I don't like that doctor either.

I'm Lyle's favorite lovefest gal, and an incest fan. I can't ignore his darkness or what we know is canon from the series. You do right by him and all of the characters in this (and everything you write while I'm at it). You blew me away with this. I love Wild Horse right out of the gate (puns all the way babe) with Lyle kissing Jarod, didn't see that one coming.  YOu are full of surprises, wonderful ones. Seriously. Holy hot awesomesauce. Asphyxia is Lyle in action doing what Lyle does and you capture him perfectly. This chapter is a result of the Asphyxia. I want this series completed NOW.

It's probabaly my favorite Lyle-centered story of yours. It's amazing. Thank you for writing and for sharing with us.

Reviewer: Kat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/24 10:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

WOW!

YOU should be writing the official novels! YOU should be working with television. You should be working in television for real. You've never disappointed me and I will be shocked if you ever do. What can I do to encourage you to write faster?

Reviewer: twisted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/24 10:10 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Amazing mate. You balance the dynamics superbly and provide spine tingling elements that make this pop. I love it. You really capture the emotions, the confusion, the spirit of The Pretender brillantly. Please don't stop. You say you  will complete this series this year and I cheer you on! Thank you for this and all of your work.

Reviewer: Ricky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/24 01:56 am
Title: Chapter 1

Top shelf, Mate! This is epic writing. When I read you I see Michael and Andrea and the actors all fleshed out as Jarod and Miss Parker and the characters. Do you like hold Michael in your mind when you write about Jarod for instance? Or do you watch reruns? I want to know what drives you to write and how you are able to so perfectly capture the characterizations of not just Jarod and Miss Parker but the other characters? Now I think about it I know you write and create original characters and flesh out beautifully too. I am curious if you consider the actors, their feelings and thoughts or if it's all limited to the characters. I know in the past you seem uncomfortable talking about the actors and maybe that's changed? I don't know how you separate them or if you do. Like I said I am curious about you. You are a mirage Mirage.

I hope you'll update it all soon.

 

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/24 10:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ohh Ooooh! This makes perfect sense, Mirage. Everything you write makes sense. I've always followed along with your work with ease. I enjoy well written work and the adult sized words you use. It's obvious to me that you feel it's important to be specific so as to not be misinterpreted. LIke that Shades of Grey book.. and all of the "down there" bs.. I'm like... down where? Anus? Toes? Australia? Where down there? I'm totally neurodivergent and because of that I like to be specific, too.

I love that you are totally specific about where Jarod and Miss Parker's tongue are at and what they are doing specifically. It matters!

I notice the way you space paragraphs and I think you might be a little spectrum-y in that regard and it doesn't impact anything negatively at all. It clarifies for me and I love it. YOu're my favorite author. Between the super stella storytelling ability and the clarity and your command of language... you're a wordsmith. and the stories you tell PLUS you space your paragraphs and don't include too many sentences in each section.. YES I LOVE IT ALL! You're either spectrumish or really considerate of my little autistic heart.

I love the transitions between refuge dream- to nightmare to  reality where she's fighting the doctor. Oh, god. This is amazing. Thank you bunches my fandomly sister! I love you. Keep going. Never stop writing for us please!

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/24 10:41 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I can't get enough! Ever. More please!

Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/24 10:07 pm
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