Oooh. Oh. Oooo. You nail the characters. Damn girl. You nail them.

Jarod trying to be completely honest.. ."Horrified is typically my response to the horrific," 

Broots being Broots.. And my shirt made her nauseous? That is-- it's crazy. Nauseous, Jarod? Explain that one."

Parker being Parker ... "Mm, well," Parker murmured, glancing at a sleeping Cate, "at least one of us is going to enjoy this."

I love it! They're growing, evolving but not so much that they aren't recongized.. just the natural growth that I'd expect. Their personalities are still their personalities.

All of the physical contact here even tho only G rated is so erotic to me...

I'm so overjoyed and excited to find this fandom alive. I love the pretender and I love you. I'm going to complete my reviews for your other stories too. I love the dark and spicey Jarod ones. Woooooooh!

I've read my way through The Return and will have to go back and review but it might be a minute but know that I love it all and this chapter seems pivotal for them. A new normal, a different kind of freedom. They can make it. I trust you. Whatever direction this goes it will be well written. I'm here for it!

Well hello there sweet Mirage. How are you?

I must say that I'm pleasantly surprised by Parker's lowering of her guard. This work takes time, building the emotional bonds and trust can't be done immediately but you are masterfully building a strong foundation for them.This is impressive. Jarod isn't so bad, is he?

You're a wordsmith Mirage.

I also was pleased with your respone of my review of chapter 14 of Lucunae. We are fam. You are not derpy. I love that you love the fandom.

Until next time.

Ciao!

Love ��💕💕

I'm crying, laughing, and thrilled for more!

Top notch mate!

I've missed you so much girl. It's so good to see you here again and what a hell of a wondeful installment to The Return series. It's happening. You're really bringing them together and not just for the sex. In some of your other in process stories they've had sex but haven't even embraced as adults so it's important to see this and the evolution. I love it. You are articulate and provide precious details and I need more. Please.

Congratulations!

Let me count the ways I'm in love with this young lady.

I haven't read anyone touch the topic of human sacrifices even though it was discussed heavily during IOTH. The sword in the Alley Sports Bar. The sacrifices that have to be made for messing with the scrolls. I'm glad you're exploring this and I love it. I was afraid you were going another direction with this but you surprised me and made this brilliant turn.

I love how Broots that Broots is, even if his the mastermind and was with the government infiltrating the Centre as a tech. He's still Broots. He's still worried. He must feel like he's sending his children away and putting the oldest, Jarod, in charge.

I love how you describe Jarod's concealed feelings. We don't always get to know how he's feeling. He always plays it cool and it's nice that he isn't so cool now and he's made some mistakes and revealed darkness. It's like you saw that in him before some of the others did, and instead of stopping writing the darker Jarod stories you wrote several more darkJarod stories.  I love that about you. 

I think it still alienates some fans because he's so sweet and so Greg Brady on the surface. It's his facade. He talks about Parker's. It takes one to know and that's why. He's hiding too. Jarod is dangerous and I needed to read your perspective to see that myself. It's like the truth is there and we don't want to see it.

Did you know that Michael T. Weiss wanted Jarod to be darker? It's in the special featurettes on the DVD. They said it. They said something about arguing about how dark he would go.

Season 5 would have been darker Jarod. Michael wanted Jarod to get darker.

You gave him what the networks didn't whether you're aware or not. I love it.

So, keep doing what you're doing. We like Jarod any flavor we can get him and you write him in all of the flavors of the rainbow and it's terrific. I love your work. More please?

😭 I love this. It's so beautiful the way Jarod tells her it's her turn to listen. She is his life!!!!!

I love that the safehouse is like concealed among houses where it looks like dozens of families live but it's all an illusion.

A new normal..I look forward to reading more of their new normal.

You have so much of a tragedy going on in your life and I can't tell it from reading this.

It doesn't show at all.

You were born to write this. Please continue when you can.  Remember to check in with us on your life too.💖💖💖

Top notch mate as always.