Date: 21/12/23 05:38 am
I'd share you on Twitter but I've left that cesspool of racism and sexism. This is so worth of sharing. You broke from the pack right at the beginning and always went against the grain and it's no sure you're still crushing it and taking directions I've never even imagined. I'm glad you're imagining these directions and writing them and so grateful to you for sharing them with me. Much love to you!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/22 03:10 am
Oh, can't wait for more of this. It's lightning fast and brilliant.
Reviewer: Monica Signed [Report This]Date: 07/11/22 08:58 pm
Gotta respond to you response to my other review first. Yeah, I'm lick the sweat off him hardcore and I know you catch hell for...wait he is a kidney thief... you're right about that. I forgot my question... you're really good at deflecting and evading. No there was no nudity..ok I will change the subject back to the review.. I Love this chapter and all of them. You really capture the characters perfectly and you're...you know you're an awesome author. More please!
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 05/11/22 04:27 am
I can't help hoping for a happy ending for them and hope that you'll write the novels. Thank you for continuing to breathe life into this series. ๐’— Congratulations on another fantastic story that has kept my attention and you always leave me craving more.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/22 09:47 pm
Timed perfectly with Halloween and what could be more scary than what you've written? Not much. I can't wait for Jarod to do what he does best. Revenge. This time with Miss Parker at his side I hope.
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed [Report This]Date: 01/11/22 05:33 am
Explosive writing! Powerful like always.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/22 11:42 pm
I love that he still knows her so well and the character growth and oh my Goddesses all of it. More please ๐
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 31/10/22 03:44 am
Congratulations ๐ ๐‘! Oh, I love this. Please continue!!
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 10:43 pm
Perfectly executed. This is top notch, mate! Cheers!
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 04:41 pm
Before the review also wanted to follow up about something else from your response to my review of chapter 2. A nicer neighborhood? So you like the actor. It's the 'ageing like wine' truism am I right? So on to my review of chapter 4 omg I hope Jarod blows it up and wouldn't mind if lyle got his just desserts either. I would creep myself out trying to write horror like this and you pulled a Hitchcock by not letting us see/read what Broots saw and what Jarod and Miss P saw through Broots' eyes but we know Lyle disemboweled Haliah in a way that would enable him to conceal incisions ..the 2 bottom orifices? Yeeeikes! It's so like Lyle. More soon please?
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 06:03 am
I hope Jarod blows it to bits.. shame Lyle won't die too. You know how to grab my attention and hold it and keep me excited for more and you really know what you're doing. Keep doing it.
Reviewer: Kayla Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 03:25 am
Jarod should totally blow up Lyles house! I can't wait to see what happens next. It's like waiting for the next episode of The Pretender.... actually it's exactly like that! That's how freaking amazing you are!!
Reviewer: Cal Signed [Report This]Date: 30/10/22 12:38 am
You know Jarod will want to blow up something of Lyle's instead of any other options. Does this mean Broots is going to have a fake death in the explosion? I can't wait for more. Thank you to the moon and back for sharing your gifts with us. ๐’
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 10:53 pm
That's definitely Lyle's work and oh so much horror and sorrow. No wonder Broots is losing it. I love that Jarod wants to be explosive ๐งจ with it! Oh my God are Jarod and Miss Parker AKA me finally gonna do a thing together to bring down the baddie?? !!!! Bank was as close as we ever got to seeing that but I want to see it with snacks ..some new thing Jarod hasn't tried that Miss Parker also hasn't tried...??!! And sex?? They should do that too! More?! I'm so excited ๐!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 10:21 pm
Ooh. You delivered on Halloween ๐ like Poe or Lovecraft but with some Stephen King and Anne Rice mixed in. So stunning the way you describe the scene, Jarod joining Broots and Haliah and being there...wow. Broots and Jarod both wantibg to reject the girl is dead. The way you say what happened and where the incision is without saying it. You are the best. Jarod loved blowing up Lyles car he would want to blow up his house too More!
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 05:53 am
Holy wows! I love it. I love all of it. You are the best and the one I always come back to. Your stories are so engaging and have this mood and energy that feels the same as it feels when I watch the DVDs, that feeling of home, only you've given them character growth and are progressing them along through the story. Please continue. I can't get enough.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed [Report This]Date: 29/10/22 04:04 am