Oooooh really smooth work. I love that Jarod is taking a nurturing role with her here almost. It seems to me he is. You're consistently smooth and fresh and I don't know how that's possible with a series that had only four seasons and so little real content, so few answers. I'm lucky to have found you.

This might be my new favorite all time story. It's tied with Forces Of Nature and Nemesis. Don't get me wrong here. The reason Forces Of Nature stands out among favorites isn't the darkness itself but that you demonstrate how anyone can become a victim and sometimes it's not the person we'd expect who becomes the victim...and how it's the least person we sometimes expect would be a perpetrator. Jarod is hot, can have any woman, seems "so sweet" and has that "flaw" Alex talked about in TP 2001 and Miss Parker is tough and all badass. You knew what you were doing, the messages are all there, it was subtle but accurate, and you don't gloss over the trauma. Like, just because Jarod is the one raping someone it doesn't mean there won't be trauma. You never ignore any trauma, and I wish more authors.. like if they're going to write about bad shit happening they need to be honest and explore the trauma too, not "poor poor pitiful Jarod" and excuses for why he raped Miss Parker... like it doesn't matter what she has done to him she never deserves rape and authors should explore what she goes through... if it's "poor poor pitiful Jarod lashing out because of what Parker did" then it should also show some pity on Parker for what Jarod did. He's the one that kept leaving clues and staying in the country. I ranted. Sorry. Anyway, I love that you're honest when you write about rape... and I hope it's ok that I'm ranting about rape randomly in a review. Rant over now. I love this story, it's really one of your best.. they all are.. and you do truly know these characters.

Bravo �🎉! You balance plot, adventure, superb storytelling, and momentum beautifully.

😎 awesome I love it. Woot another chapter awaits me!

I could read you forever. This is seriously some awesome writing. The chapters are so short tho but that's my only gripe.

Wow, you're updating quickly and each chapter is crisp, professional, beautifully plotted and you don't let the quality writing interfere with the story telling. The characters are so real and true to the ones I know and love that I just can't even...I think I'm gonna cry 😭. Thank you for doing justice to the series, the characters..and my namesake.

More! I love this. Wow, you're a wordsmith and awesome storyteller.

Hey awesome you updated so fast! phew things got heated really intense with those 2 just like on my DVDs I love it!

Exquisite as always, Mirage.

"Mr. Woozy." "Patchwork" of horrors. Those are references to the Wizard of Oz works, aren't they? I love that you included them, a little nod and homage, and it fit in so subtly and naturally. Now I'm wondering what other Easter eggs I've missed over the years. I also love that you pay homage to canon and provide continuity. You reminded me of the picnic scene that I'd honestly almost forgotten. Little Parker said she hopes the man she loves makes her lightheaded too. Now she's hanging out with Jarod and is experiencing vertigo but her mom is suggesting it's not just the boat causing it. I love your insights into the inner sense and how it works and how Parker is sitting there while Jarod cooks but her mind is engaged elsewhere. Jarod senses she doesn't feel well and that something else is going on and cooks her dry toast without drawing attention to it. I hope she hasn't been impregnated the way Catherine was, and thank you so much for this stand Parker has taken to not forgive and finally realize that her father basically raped Catherine to impregnate her with Ethan. It was always strange that Parker would shrug off something that traumatic and tragic and keep trying to please her father after that ultimate betrayal. This is real character growth and I agree with everything you said about lines being crossed, the taboo of estrangement. It's funny that this is considered a family show but it's centered around a dysfunctional family that is killing Parker. The writing is real and raw and I think maybe you can relate in some way. I can relate too. You really know the characters and where to put them. Please continue.

Ciao!

Wow,  you combine elegance and action beautifully. I wish there was another chapter. Please share more soon. Thank you.

Oh, I love it. Please keep going. You really capture the characters incredibly well.. they're so wonderfully fleshed out, real enough to touch. I want more.

Please keep going.