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Title: Chapter 2

Broots is the normal one of the lot and I can see this happening because he's already said he was having a breakdown back in TP2001. Too much weird, too much bad. Too much is too much. He's bound to break. Because he's the normal one of the lot. I love the direction, your characterisations are always spot on. Chapter 3 here I come!

 Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/23 05:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

I can never get enough of your writing.

 Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/11/22 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I love your story telling, writing style, and momentum, and you have perfected the art of writing..

 Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/22 09:42 pm
Title: Chapter 2

All treats this Halloween 🎃! Top notch.

 Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/10/22 11:35 pm
Title: Chapter 2

More! I love it.

 Reviewer: Kayla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/22 03:18 am
Title: Chapter 2

I've got catching up to do. You surprised me updating so quickly! I love this! More!

 Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/22 12:28 am
Title: Chapter 2

Top notch Mirage! You nail the characters and are a hell of a story teller.



Author's Response:

Thanks, King Of Pain

 Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/22 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 2

You're on the few authors I keep coming back to, one of the few talented, and stories like this are why. Will there be romance in this eventually? Either way, I want more.



Author's Response:

Ooh, I don't know about romance. Mm. We shall see.

Thanks for the r&r, twisted.

 Reviewer: twisted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/22 02:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this is a fast moving and fantastic adventure, and your prose is crystal clear. Congratulations!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks, James.

 Reviewer: James Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/22 09:26 pm
Title: Chapter 2

It's actually plausible that Broots would suffer this way. He kept saying he was having a breakdown in one of those movies, and we know how protective he is of Debbie and children in general. It's also plausible that the Centre would want to protect its assetts by wiping the memory of employees on their way out. Brilliantly plotted. You have another chapter already waiting for us. This one's really clicking along. Thank you for sharing your natural gifts.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jake.

 Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/10/22 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for updating quickly and for continuing to write for us. My God you're good. Every word so well placed and the story so brilliantly told. I'm amazed. Thank you for also replying to my reviews. You're the best!



Author's Response:

That's rather generous. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Renea.

 Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/10/22 09:55 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, I love it. More please?



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R.

 Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/22 11:40 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, powerful writing and storytelling. Your prose is beautiful and I haz an envy..big time How do you do it? It's magical how I forget I'm reading. I want more. NOW!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Xena.

 Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/10/22 02:26 am
Title: Chapter 2

Exquisite! I'm craving more. I think facial hair Jarod is so exotic...which jarod do you find most 🥵” hot sexy?? Please continue this. 🙏



Author's Response:
Pardon? Sexy--- what? Huh? I don't even know what you're-----

Jarod in all his infinite madness playing piano and murmuring something along the lines of, "-the top notes. I went deeper, searched for the soul." 

I suppose you can say the scene struck a minor and unexpected, but absolutely percussive and resonant, chord.

It's weird, I know. You couldn't have been expecting normal from me.

Anyway, fortunately, another man had just vomited on the keys, and that sorta mitigated the impact.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jillian.

 

 

 Reviewer: Jillian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/22 08:16 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh yes another chapter already and it's brilliant 😃😊 😎. I hope you know how grateful I am to you for writing and sharing your talents and gifts with us! 🎁 ’—’ You're keeping the dream alive for me. It's funny how I used to be afraid of your stories but it's true what Jarod said during the TV series "life is a mirage and the thing you're most afraid of can end up saving your life" ... you probably don't remember the email I sent you...and staying up all night replying to me so I wouldn't be alone



Author's Response:

I remember, and I'm glad life's being kinder to you these days. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jen.

 Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/10/22 05:16 pm
Title: Chapter 2

This is plausible and remarkably plotted and written. The characters are so meaty, so real, true to form. You're amazing. If you ever want to settle in a write an epic please do it. I could read you all day and night forever.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jarod.

 Reviewer: Jarod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/10/22 02:22 am
Title: Chapter 2

Reads like a train and I love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the R&R.

 Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/10/22 07:55 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Woot woot! More please?



Author's Response:

Of course. Thanks for the r&r, TheDarkAngel

 Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/10/22 05:19 am
Title: Chapter 2

Ohh uh-huh I love it. You do justice to my namesake... and to my tormentor. Thanks for entertaining me. What would I do without you to keep them all alive?



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks, The Miss Parker

 Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/22 10:34 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Well, well, well, we meet again. You're a wordsmith, Mirage, and a virtuoso. What else is there to say? Please update again soon.

 Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/22 08:29 pm
Title: Chapter 2

ooh wow 😊 fast update and an amazing one at that!  Will there be romance or smut? Can't wait to read more either way!

 Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/22 06:00 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Impressive as hell as always. Dare I ask for more?

 Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/10/22 12:57 am
Title: Chapter 2

This is what I'm talking about! I didn't expect another update so quickly.Am in love ’. More!

 Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/10/22 03:51 am
Title: Chapter 2

Amazing 🤩!  I love how Jarod suspected her and how he spoke up to keep from leaving, and how true to the characters you are. You have amazing talent and I'm thankful that you share it with us.

 Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/22 10:19 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Expungement. Me too. What Jarod said. My first instinct was to think that Parker could kill Lyle but that's not in character for her. She's only pulled the trigger in self defense. Removing Broots from the Centre is the best option here. I'm curious about and looking forward to the Jarod-Parker collaboation.

Your prose is beautiful, lyrical. The story is well plotted and written. The characters are stunning. It's like being there, seeing their faces, hearing their voices. It's magic. I eagerly await chapter three.

Ciao!

 Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/22 02:46 am
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