no that didn't work lol. I've asked every Pretender fan just about lol. Let me see if I can the image here just in case you are scared to click on links.OMG yes I got it! Do you know where this is located? Is it in the US? Thank you!! It is weirdly pretender related so don't worry or anything.
[Report This]Date: 01/04/24 11:03 pm
I think I figured how to post an image here using the link. Will try to see if the image will show up here. .
Date: 01/04/24 11:00 pm
So glad to see the update!! You write them both so well that I hear their voices when I read. This is all so intriguing and I'm so excited to read what's coming up next!
Reviewer: greyphoenix Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/24 08:52 am
Top notch mate!
Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed [Report This]Date: 04/03/24 12:04 am
Oomph! Chapter 1 is wild out of the gate. The most Jarod and Parker that I've ever seen Jarod and Parker since TV. So happy that I had 6 chapters to indulge in.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Signed [Report This]Date: 21/12/23 05:20 am
Are you trying to spoil me? Because THIS is how you spoil me!
Yes, GOD please let their brains shut up. Their bodies have got this. I know that Broots is at stake and that's the only reason I didn't get upset when Parker became aware and slammed on the brakes. It was really subtle. The comedy is golden my dear. That last line slamming it all home. Ta! Happy hols to you sweet girl. Please don't ever stop writing.
Reviewer: Revenant Signed [Report This]Date: 21/12/23 03:37 am
That should have read pretender family... sorry
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 28/01/23 07:53 pm
Just checking in. It's been a minute since I have heard from you. I hope you're doing wonderfully and having a happy new year. Getting concerned though. Let someone know you're ok.... even if you can't write for us anymore. Just say hi please. Be well.
Ciao,
Michael.
Author's Response:
Hi. I had some priorities that couldn't be back-burnered. Stay well. Thanks.
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/23 04:51 am
I love this so much 💞! Uhh huh. I don't know where you are or why your Twitter no longer exists or what has happened but I hope you're alright and I hope you will come back. At least say you're alright please.... 😠😢
Author's Response:
I made the mistake of signing in to twitter for the first time in-- a while, and seeing some things. What happens here should stay here. I never wanted my scribblings to be shared anywhere else. I deactivated twitter. I didn't have time for it anyway. Thanks.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 09/01/23 05:28 am
Hey I hope you're ok and are happy. Hope you had a happy Xmas and will have a terrific year. You deserve it all. Please update this and all your stories when you can... if you need self-care do it.. We'll wait. Thank you for being you.
Author's Response:
I had some priorities that couldn't be back-burnered. Honestly, this whole entire adulting thing sucks, but at least I can legally procure wine, and I get to decide for myself who I spend time with, so it still beats the fuck out of being a child (yeppers, I just bright-sided/toxic positivity-ed the hell out of myself). All of that said, I think it's awesome how normalized mental health days and self-care are among fandomly. You are all fucking awesome. Love to you all.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 31/12/22 10:42 pm
OMG where are you? Are you ok? You have to be ok. And you have to show your selfies with Michael T. Weiss.. the ones I have a feeling that you have taken with him but won't talk about? Are you embarrased about it or something? Like.. you didn't try to kiss him or anything did you? Because I AM THE ONE who does things like that. SO if you did it's cool. No s hame in my game. Even if you like just did it now... now when he's old. SO um anyway. If you got selfies show me. I will email now and email you every day until you come back. Please. I love this and all of your stories.. even the holiday one .. and by now everyone should I hate holidays that were hijacked by christians and renamed. Please. I miss you. I miss your writing.
Author's Response:
Wow, Lorraina, y'know, I realize that I'm not "superfangirl" or whatever.
I'm also not a shallow, fickle dick. I'm also not entitled to comment on someone's body, appearance, etc, and I'm absolutely not here for ableist, ageist, sexist, etc, etc, bullshit.
And, no, I didn't "anything" him during any (hypothetical) encounter. That doesn't even sound remotely consensual.
I absolutely must delete your reviews if you continue to talk about real people.
Reviewer: Lorraina Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/12/22 03:28 am
Just read all four chapters! Outstanding work, Mirage. I eagerly await the next chapter.
Reviewer: richie Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/22 11:43 pm
Oh this is too awesome!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 04/11/22 09:40 pm
YOU should be writing the official novels!! I'm always impressed by you.
Author's Response:
I'm happy not writing the novels. It's all good. Thanks, twisted.
Reviewer: twisted Signed [Report This]Date: 22/10/22 02:22 am
You sure know how to get my attention! Action, drama, adventure. These are the things I love most about the series and you excel at those, and plotting, writing, story telling, and characterizations.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks, James.
Reviewer: James Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/22 09:21 pm
Top notch, Mirage. You're a master wordsmith and story teller. The action and intringue really pulls me in. Kill Broots? What? I can't not read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You know I'd never kill Broots. I adore Broots. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jake.
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 20/10/22 02:49 am
Ooohh uh. Dyyyamn. I'm sitting here trying to figure out what I love more about your stories. Is it the stellar story telling, the lyrical prose and writing, or the freaking on-the-nose characterisations? I've never seen the characters behave more like the characters since watching thte characters on the series... I have a paid subscription so I can watch The Pretender and read your stories and now I stare off like... they are the same when you write them. It's scary and I love it. You are my favorite author, the one that keeps me coming back. You keep the series alive for me and I'm grateful. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. Please never stop writing.
Author's Response:
Yeah, scary. That's me. Thanks for reading and for the much-too-generous reivew, Leese.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 19/10/22 07:27 pm
Wow, you just snatch my hand and pull me in. Thank you for all the work you do breathing life into the characters. Thank you so so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed [Report This]Date: 13/10/22 02:18 am
Breathtaking storytelling! You bring the action and plot brilliantly!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Archange
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/22 07:54 pm
I can never get enough of your stories!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Christoph
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 11/10/22 12:54 am
You've outdone yourself again. This is edgy and outstanding work. I'm pleased to see that another chapter has alread been posted.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the r&r
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 08/10/22 02:37 am
O. Ohhh. Wow. You had me hooked with the first sentence. Good stuff here, Mirage.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Miss Parkere
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 07/10/22 08:02 pm
Heyy, so glad you updated so fast and every word is just so well placed and I love this story. You're a wordsmith! Thank you for the encouragement too. I'm going to post some stories here soon and fingers crossed I don't get that scathing review from that actor lol. I guess I'll be ok if I do.
More of this please.
Author's Response:
Yes, post stories. I'll read them all as soon as life slows down a little bit. I wouldn't be concerned about a scathing review. Do what you feel compelled to do, and if someone doesn't like it-- that's a them problem. Not everyone can like everything. You're not going to please everyone, and that's okay. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Sammi Signed [Report This]Date: 07/10/22 06:04 am
I read your response to my review and wanted to edit what I said so I deleted it. This a revision. Oh goodness Mirage. You write gripping first sentences and gripping last sentences and gripping sentences all in between. No dragging. I love it. Edgy, tight, sharp, fresh, perfect. You write masterfully. More please?
Author's Response:
Oh, hi, you must have just deleted and re-reviewed while I was still on reseponding to reviews. Thanks, Contessa.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 06/10/22 09:31 pm
As much as I love love love darkJarod I gotta say I'm in love with the lighter Jarod too. This is an intriguing plot, fresh. I can't get enough. More please?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Leese.
Reviewer: Leese Signed [Report This]Date: 06/10/22 12:33 am
