Ooo everyone talks about your characterisations of Jarod and Miss Parker and they are right BUT no one talks about the miracles you perform with Lyle. The winking at Broots, and encouraging Jarod to attack Mark. Lyle is so smooth and you nail him like you do all of the characters. Have you watched James Denton on Good Witch? It's like he became sweet Jarod 🤣 he's so unlike our Lyle. Funnily Michael T Weiss in so many movies is more like Lyle AND EVEN WORSE than Lyle. It's so funny 🤣 to me.
I love the GI No instead of GI Joe.
This is epic. Jarod in the Centre! Finally!!
Congratulations.
Thank you.
Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed
[Report This]Date: 15/09/23 10:05 pm
Top notch mate! You're a hell of a story teller telling a hell of a story.
Reviewer: Jeremy Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/23 08:26 pm
I love it but hey hey yay what's not to love?!
Your descriptive work is amazing, the prose is rich, the story is brilliantly plotted, Jarod is back inside the Centre, the dialogue is 😎 awesome, the transitions are seamless, the characterisations are pretender perfect, Jarod is back inside the Centre, and ooooh Jarod is back inside the Centre.
Did I mention that Jarod is back inside the Centre????!!!!
More please soon please?
*BOWS TO QUEEN MIRAGE*
Remember not to use a straw if you had wisdom teeth removed. Dry socket is a pain...worse than the usual already severe pain.
Rest rest rest.
Reviewer: Renea Collins Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/23 05:48 am
Exceptional work, Mirage. You keep me entertained and excited.
Take care of yourself. I heard you were having a rough patch with jaw issues and wisdom tooth extraction surgery, and caring for you Significant Person. We'll all be here when you get back or have time to update so take time to rest.
Much love to you ’ ’🌹
Reviewer: Jarod Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/23 03:38 am
Merci! I am excited for more. This direction is what I have wanted.
Merci Thank you!
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/23 10:50 pm
YOU should be writing the "official" novels!! I won't ever stop saying it.
LONG LIVE THE CENTRE
LONG LIVE THE PRETENDER
LONG LIVE MIRAGE
More!
Reviewer: twisted Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/23 10:17 pm
Dear all of the goddesses.
I'm a Lyle gal and opooh he's tastily evil, encouraging Jarod so sweetly to kill Mark with bare hands.
I have a feeling of what the implications will be and how dear old Dr Syd will respond.
Beautifully executed Mirage.
You do the Centre proud. Perfect darkness. I'm in love ’😘😘
Reviewer: Kat Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/09/23 08:26 pm
Your plotting is on point, and you really know the characters. Jarod back at the Centre is so exciting. The way you plotted this is brilliant. That fighting scene is realistic and something I can see Jarod doing.
I want to read more. Please?
Reviewer: Sydney Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/09/23 06:40 am
Impressive as always! I've always wanted to see Jarod back In the Centre while Parker is there, assuming she isn't leaving? She is such a bitch and I can't stand her but I want to see Jarid tormenting her for real in the place where she put him, and I understand that Lyke is probably the only reason Jarod is back. Parker never had the brass to capture Jarod
She is ALL talk on the TV series and always has been.
I hope Jarod pays Parker back for the shit she has put him through.
More please stat!
Reviewer: Revenant Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/23 10:59 pm
OH my goodness I am so excited for this and am so here for this.
Exquisite work.
Congratulations! 🎉‘
Reviewer: valerie_ Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/23 09:47 pm
Woot! That was a most righteous ass whooping Mirage.
Lyle is so Lyle, goading and encouraging Jarod but even Lyle seemed to dislike Mark. It's so weird agreeing with Lyle but when he's right he's right. Jarod is Jarod too. all of the characters are as they should be.
We have seen Jarod get violent before in the Ghosts from the past episode
He beats the crap out of Bartlet the racist. When he gets angry it is like a switch flips.
I can't wait for more. please soon?!
Reviewer: Melinda Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/09/23 05:24 am
Top notch! Looking forward to reading more!!
Reviewer: Jake Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/23 03:16 am
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I rely on these updates I want you to know.
I need them. We can't let the fandom die.
Please keep writing for me always.🙏🙏🙏
I love you .
’’
I think you will hold Jarod a long time in the Centre and I hope I will read it soon.
Reviewer: Archange Signed [Report This]Date: 12/09/23 10:05 pm
amazing as always 😍🤩 and I have come to expect nothing less.
on to serious matters, I read your response to Contessa in the Lucanae reviews...what happened to your jaw if you don't mind my asking...either way take care of yourself.. I know you are care taking of your significant person who is disabled but who will take care of you besides you? You have to rest after surgery, even just wisdom teeth extraction you need to rest.. I wish we all lived closer and could support each other.
Take care of you ok and we'll wait patiently for you to update.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 12/09/23 08:04 pm
Top notch mate. More action packed than usual with loads of excitement.
Reviewer: richie Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/23 10:56 pm
Hey there it's so amazing to have you back here again and with a kicking new update that kicks a$$$
I'm always excited to read your new gifts and never get enough.
More more more !!
Reviewer: lisa Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/23 07:35 pm
Yay, oh wowz, Jarod kicked that sob's ass all over the place. What a painful and appropriate method of tattoo removal!!
So. much depth and texture and ooh richness!
I love this!!
Reviewer: Jami Signed [Report This]Date: 11/09/23 01:51 am
I need more of this right now young lady!.
That fight scene was phenom!
The cast of centre tribunal characters was so on point !
It's like being there when I read you!
Please don't make me wait too long for another update!!
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 10/09/23 08:01 pm
I was hoping Jarod would have his day with at least one of the people involved in Miunas murder.
You exceed my expectations and hopes time and time and time again and you've done it again.
Congrats! 🎉 🎉
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 10/09/23 07:51 pm
"rage with a future" says it all, and I love that moment when Jarod purges the fury, and then... recufss mark and sees the scratches and just....knows. He becomes focused. instead of more blind rage he plans the next revenge to finish Miuna's work...and that's even scarier!!!
You are amazing with the characters. Miss Parker's irritation during the trial ..ooh love it.
You let them be themselves.
Jarod shined so brightly.
Thank you. More please?
Reviewer: Jameason Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/09/23 07:46 pm
So damn addicting! I can't get enough of you!
Write quicker please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺
Reviewer: Lacy Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/09/23 04:03 am
Heeyy!! I thought you were gonna gloss over my review of Lucanua but yay you !!!You really answered and still didn't answer 😂 but I understand what you mean and why you wouldn't want to get up in his face and some fans are rude and entitled. Very well articulated and I love reading your thoughts too and everything you write. You'd be so cool to hang with ...you just vibe with everyone.
I love this chapter. Jarod should have beat that bastard's arse!
I can't wait to read what happens now!!
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/23 11:03 pm
**chef's kiss**
Bravo!
I never mention your fight scenes when I review and I have to say now that I can imagine myself as Jarod and also as Mark. You convey both perspectives brilliantly. Your fight scenes are as brilliant as your romance scenes and say in the life scenes. You inject so much energy, passion, and action into everything you write and that and the plausiblilty and characterizations are always so striking to me. I crave more already.
Until next time Mirage...
Ciao!
Reviewer: Michael Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/23 10:42 pm
Hey there. Thank you for responding to my review and letting us all know how you are, and I wish you were doing better with no jaw issue or need for wisdom teeth removal 😭. I wish your Significant Person was well too. I didn't know he had a disability. I knew you were in a serious long term relationship with a military man. Being his caretaker ...I know the disability must be hard for him but being a caretaker for him and watching him suffer has to be hard for you. It's hard on you both and I wish life was treating you both better. I hate that you both have to go through what you're going through. I want things to get better for you two.
The review and all of this probably seems like nothing now with all you have going on but your work gets me through hard times, so it's my privilege to review you. I love this chapter and that we see the other side of Jared. I love Miuna and I'm so happy Mark is paying.
Stunning as always.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/23 04:34 am
HOORAY! MIRAGe is back in da hooooouse! God I've missed you girl. How you been? Good I hope. This is amazing. Thanks for not going into the rape deets but giving us enough. This is perfect. Jarod is gonna finish what Miuna started in scratching out that stupid tattoo. YES! Security upgrades? You really gonna keep Jarod inside the Centre for a while. Can't wait! Amazing amazing. Thank you thank you thank you!!
Reviewer: Kayla Signed [Report This]Date: 09/09/23 01:52 am
