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Title: Chapter 1

Blue flickering lights! Jarod's in trouble now. Brilliant descriptions and plotting.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/03/23 09:52 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh poor Miuna. I liked her. You killed your darlings!!! I love the secret language Jarod and Parker have, and that she came prepared for war. I like that Lyle came in too. Jarod has to go back to the Centre now. Parker has let Jarod walk away so many times and Sydney is hospitalized? and not there to intervene or even try. Ooh, can't wait. I've always wanted to see Parker and Jarod back in the Centre at the same time both working... or will she go free now that she's returned Jarod? Can't wait!!

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/03/23 10:38 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Its always nice to see Jman get snarky. He did it on the series too and it's impactful coming from him. " tends to do that when it's slammed into a car" lol. So snarky Jarod. Everyone and everything about this chapter and story is on point. Please don't stop here.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/03/23 07:07 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Lyle stopping to say "no offense" to Broots about the cosplay quip IS GENIUS! I love that Broots dressed up as Ziggy! I love that you don't disparage cosplay. You are really young aren't you? You're at least 18 aren't you? I will worry if you're younger considering some of the things you've written.. I guess I worry about you anyway. I worry. It's what I do. Just can't get over Ziggy comment. No one is ever going to top that line. Even Lyle appreciates Bowie, as it should be.

Take a bow Mirage.

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/23 02:44 am
Title: Chapter 2

Those good ol boy deputies in small southern regions hate the ACLU. Miss Parker is all snark here and Jarod is all snark too. I love how they bicker and there's usually no intention to actually hurt the other. It's just the way they cope, them playing their roles. The characters are the characters. I'm going to tell you something right now and it's that you're the only person who writes them the way they were during the tv series. I don't want to read a book where I can't recognize my characters from tv. I want them to be the way they're supposed to be. You keep them alive. I'm grateful to you for that. You also write exquisitely and do grammar well but that's icing on a cake that already tastes perfect without any icing.

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/23 02:09 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm reading from the beginning again probably for the eight time. It never gets old. Your prose is delightful, lyrical, and not a word is wasted. You're a wordsmith and a rockstar. I love this plot and can't get enough.

Reviewer: d_el1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/03/23 02:02 am
Title: Chapter 1

I'm so here for this right now. This could easily be an episode of The Pretender right now. Because we don't have this series on tv I appreciate even more that you share your natural gifts with us. Thank you. The dream doesn't die if we keep it alive.

Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/23 01:40 am
Title: Chapter 3

Woo hoo! This is how it's done. You blow me away again and again.

Reviewer: twisted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/03/23 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 3

Oh, ok you have 3 chapters up. I thought there were only 2. This is exquisite like everything you write. Miuna is only a guest star but I hope you will go back and fill in more through Jarod's mourning process and memories. She's a stella original character and she was seriously honest. People will hate on refugees and anyone who doesn't look, live, worship, and love like them. Truth hurts but it's the truth and needs to be told.

Mind you, young lady, I still want more. Now. *cracks whip* Or else.

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/23 08:40 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Miss Parker makes an appearance.. and what a hell of an appearance it is. She's perfect, huh! She write them so well. Too well maybe? You really have a knack for characterisations, setting up the scene, and maintaining my excitement all throughout the story. Needless to say I want more. Now. Write young lady!

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/23 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Ohh, I wasn't expecting something like this from you. It's plausible and fast paced. He really should have been handcuffed more on the series and had these brushes with cops.

Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/23 08:33 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Ahhh. My heart. You really do an amazing job with all aspects of writing. What I always notice the most is characterizations. That one can make or break a story for me no matter how well written because if I don't recognize the characters, if I don't see and hear Jarod, Lyle, Parker, Sydney I can't read it. You do that brilliantly. The only other time I see them this in character is in the TV series.

For me, it's almost as if some of the plausibility is hinged on the characters' explanations and reactions. The Pretender series on tv had some crazy stuff that stretched plausibility but it was plausible when Sydney or Jarod or Broots explained it in their technical intelligent terms. I love that I always recognize them when you write them. Thank you for that. You make it feel like the series never ended.

Reviewer: Leese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/23 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Just read all 3 chapters and love how fast paced they are. You really know the characters too and how to tell a story. I love dark and rapeyJarod so this won't be my favorite of yours but I'm already reading another of your stories in another tab I've got open that someone recommended for me and oh gods it's getting dark in that one...like damnnnn. Just what I wanted.

Reviewer: Thara Nicole Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/23 02:07 am
Title: Chapter 3

*Squees in lifelong, hardcore, diehard pretender fan*

Jarod getting all huffy like this.. ermagherd love it when he does it on the dvds too."a blind woman can even see" oh lordt! Makes my fangirl heart thump harder.

And shout outs to the motorhead tune. My girl Miuna was a metal head mechanic! Yahhh! Please say there'll be more flashbacks to her and how it all unfolded. I love it. Jarod's going back to the Centre. I can't wait. I always wanted to see him back there while Parker is there, too, long term thing. Make it happen please. Love you!

Reviewer: Sammi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/03/23 12:44 am
Title: Chapter 1

Fabulous as always. There's nothing I can say that hasn't been said. Please keep going.

Reviewer: Jeremy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/23 11:59 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Girl! OMG! I read all three chapters and I want more!! I love Jarod so much and you write him so exactly like him and you do it with all of the characters. But he's my favorite so I don't really care how well the others are written lol. The other characters don't interest me. Miss Parker is such a bitch.. and even her name.. Miss? WTF? Who is she kidding? She's not a queen.. and she only acts tough. Like a dog who snarls and barks and then when you keep getting closer it just pees on itself and starts whimpering... because it's really so scared. I hate her. I'm only interested in Jarod! It's like he's here while I'm reading!! Put more on here!!

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/23 07:57 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Didn't see this coming and wow top notch. Keep it on.

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/23 12:40 am
Title: Chapter 2

Gonna repeat myself here but I love the crime suspense drama and you combine it with The,Pretender spectacularly.

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/23 12:38 am
Title: Chapter 1

Gripping first chapter.

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/03/23 12:35 am
Title: Chapter 3

Masterfully written... completely Gutted on Jarrod's behalf but he is clearly in love with Parker and even admitted it and feels like he cheated on her with Miuna ..ooh but I also love Miuna. I can't wait to see how this plays out to resolve... Jarod back in the Centre.. oh please yes .. and make him stay for a while please???

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/23 12:49 am
Title: Chapter 2

woot! The characters are always so wonderfully fleshed out when you write them including your originals. Big applause for you. I just want more and more and more forever ♾️

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/23 12:44 am
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I have 3 chapters to catch up. This first one really gripped me. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/23 12:41 am
Title: Chapter 3

Ooh so juicy and so noir-ish. I really liked Miuna. Her youth is evident, and she had so much courage and strength. My grandmum is Finnish so I enjoy seeing some of her language. You're really keeping it real and your writing voice is powerful... it's like I can see everything going on. I should be writing my own stuff but I live love yours so damn much I can't stop reading!

Reviewer: Jami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/23 11:37 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I never get tired of reading you!!  You're not formulaic or pigeonholed and you branch out to genrebending and you love taking chances and pushing boundaries which is really what writing is about. That and having something else to say, something that means something, something to take away and learn and you always provide that depth so it's not just entertaining it's also important. There is beauty. You also are obviously educated and open minded and you nail the grammar and know how to transition and keep me hanging on in my chair. I hope you will always write for the fanmily.

Reviewer: Lorraina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/23 08:08 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Forgot to say I love that Miuna is a mechanic and listens to  motorhead...so awesome 😎

Reviewer: Contessa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/23 06:38 pm
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