Wait! It's not true. I am reading it too! And I love it. Actually I have important work to do, but now I am reading and reviewing. It's all about priorities.

I am very grateful that people still write Pretender Fan-Fictions. And yours is great. It is well written and has a very good rhythm. The start of the story catched me immediately. There is a lot of blood, which I like. 

I love that Jarod, who in distress, doesn't react as "all-in-control-another-funny-comment" but shows some decent fear finally (something I missed in the original show, he was a little too perfect). 

You also manage to put some humor in, as Sydney and Broots  appear but yet you keep them in line with their character in the show. 

I also like your summing up comment in the end of the chapter or the paragraph like: "The soup looks good" or „There was so much blood“. So if you don’t mind, I am going to use the link you gave Lise to read on. 

It’s true what they say: Never stop looking. (you might find some treasures.)