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Title: Chapter 21

I'm late to the party. Oops. Oh, Mirage, each piece you write is irresistible and satisfying. I read you compulsively. The characters... how do you write them so in character? I can't get enough. The topic is important and controversial and so original. You're tackling it gracefully.

Reviewer: Sammi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/23 08:51 pm
Title: Chapter 21

OMG it's so funny 🤣 how I was like 'ermagherdt Jarod and Parker just wedded' and then after reading on and seeing it's Syd and Michele's wedding I was like 'I would be ok with Jarod and Parker getting married actually...wish they were ' and did you know that would be the reaction? Shock that they married and then disappointment that they didn't marry? We are a strange bunch of pretender fans to sail this ship no matter what and you seem to know that and understand the nuances....even tho you aren't a shipper at all.

Stunned, pleased, amazed, and grateful as always with your work I keep wanting more and more of you.

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/23 06:09 pm
Title: Chapter 21

You capture all of the characters perfectly. Love Parker's "THE most unpleasant" comment and the descriptive work. Beautiful work. More please?

Reviewer: Sydney Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/07/23 04:48 am
Title: Chapter 21

Is the other shoe about to drop? Or will they continue being happy? I want to find out.

Beautifully written. I was just about to go to Twitter to tweet about you but here you are, and I'm glad you haven't abandoned us.

 

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/07/23 12:29 am
Title: Chapter 21

for a minute I thought mp and Jarod were getting married and was like wtf but it wasn't and then I was like oh no I wish they had gotten married..I love the way parker told Jarod she wanted to be together with him 😂 happy crying here. Te scene descriptionsvand all the thoughts are brilliant too. oh I love it This is amazing like everything you do. More!!

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/07/23 10:33 pm
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