OMG! I love this. You really eased into the Jarod and Parker aspect of this and did it so well. I was hoping they would talk about the past and reconcile and at least be friends. They are still in love. After all that time. Of course they are!! Thank you. I'm so grateful. You keep the series alive. It means so much to me. I'm literally crying all over myself.
Reviewer: Renee Collins Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 09/04/22 07:51 pm
Top notch mate!! Your prose is clear and exquisite and this is like watching the dvds all over again. I'm enjoying the personal growth, how Miss Parker admits that she didn't leave him because she fell out of love with him and shouldn't be surprised that she still loves him. They just sublty admit their enduring love for each other, and I think that's probably the most beautiful thing in the world. That comraderie they have continues. I don't dare call you a romantic, because I know you're not a shipper and that you believe the two can function fine on their own and alone but Mirage this is really touching to read and seems to epitomize Jarod's belief that life is a gift and that love is always worth the pain. You always go deep. You're not afraid of going deep and being honest. I'm blown away here. More, please?
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/22 07:26 pm
Oooh. She has been shutting herself down hasn't she? Cos she's afraid she'll kill him? This chapter was the everything falling into place very loudly chapter and some of the mystery unfolds and I'm glad you're not like Steve and Craig cos Ima get old one day and we never know when it's our last day and I don't think we should wasting time dragging fans along to wait for more answers and then new answers and... I already forgot some of their questions so I'm glad you're here with the continuity or I'd lose my mind. Jarod is really sweet doubting his ability to ask her to give them another try after everything she went through and still has no real memory of. It's all reallly complex and you don't mind getting into the psychological aspects of the characters. You have amazing insights. More please. I'm forever impressed.
Author's Response:
I don't know. Probably.
It's just fanfic. I believe there were probably intentions to give every fan what they wanted. I think we should blame people who weren't fans. Yes, I'm kidding. Let's just play nice and be grateful for what we do have.
Jarod is kind of sweet in this one-- eventually.
I don't think it's amazing. It's just-- fanfic. Thanks for the generous review.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/22 10:50 pm
omg! Neuroreality is trying to be a thing right now and I think Jarod would have created it decades ago. Love how you. stay true to the series while modernizing it.. such a treat to read you..
Author's Response:
That makes sense I suppose. He's a genius. If there's an entire television series and the genius part is why he was abducted, and if they have to remind us in every single episode that he's a genius, then, yeah, he absolutely should have conceived all sorts of ideas and inventions that could be twisted and used in horrific ways to traumatize and kill people. He's genius and madness (and some good ol' righteous rage).
The reviews are the real treats. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Joni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/22 07:09 pm
Top shelf writing and storytelling here. You are a treasure. This, like all your work, is like a next episode. Congratulations And thank you for sharing your talent with us .
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/22 04:46 pm
oh my shipper heart! When Jarod cries after learning that something he thought up was used to make parker distrust him and that pushed her from him,..oh sobs. they were used by the centre to hurt each other it is true. this is the episode I needed and could easily be an episode it meshes do perfectly, and it's just like watching them. awe 😘 forever. more please.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/22 05:29 am
