hope to read more about willow and giana and Nick. so amazing. now I'm all caught up reviewing all 20 chapters. love each one.

Bravo! I wasn't expecting this to happen now, and if I'm honest wasn't expecting it to ever happen at all. I should have been. It's like Parker to want to overlook obstacles and go straight for what she wants in the moment and not care about the consequences. She did that on the series, attacking Raines and not caring that she could be killed for it, throwing out the background check on Thomas, the almost kiss with Jarod, and many other instances. Did Jarod know where she was going with her concerns and just wanted to hear her say the words or was he oblivious while she was confessing? The title of this story is Oblivion and it seems to be more about Project Oblivion and how people are also oblivious about many other things and I love that. It's reminiscent of how episode titles related to the Centre side of the show and also related to Jarod's side of the show. I'm intrigued and very curious to know how this will play out. Stunning writing. You've perfected your craft and I'm grateful that you share with us. Ciao!

It keeps getting better and better and I keep wanting more and more!

Did not see that coming!! Please write faster.

Say they will be together please.

You keep the figurative pages turning like no one else.

This is beautiful. What I love most about your stories is how much soul and heart they have in them. It's so sad when a series has no soul and what I loved most about the tv series is all of the soul and heart in the episodes and characters.  It's the same feeling when I read you Mirage. Thank you.

Exquisite, Mirage. This story is tight and still has the same tight grip that attracted me to it. I love how well this is written, how sharp the characterisations are, and all of the usual pro author attractions. More than those things I love your knack for subverting tropes and societal expectations, the way you take your pen-sword to the social norms, these psychological deep dive studies into the human mind. You show no fear when you explore mental illness and you excel in the creation and character development of your own original characters as well as the ones we already know. Parker tapped Jarod's foul toss out of the entire park by shutting down what we've seen him do on our screen too many times. He helped Kyle, Ethan, and has excused his own crimes but wants to hold Lyle to different standards. He does play favorites. She's one of his most favorites. Falling in love with her has made it possible for him to excuse so many bad things she's done. I think he's his own most favorite though, and I love Jarod, so, this is coming from me, ultra fangirl. I'd still hit that. Please continue when you can. Thank you for all you've already shared with us.

Holy wows. Willow is amazing 🤩 . I love how sweet she is with Jarod and wise too. Lyle is lots like my cousin during mania phases of bipolar, it was really hard to deal with him. Jarods dislike of Lyle is so on poin and I like how you cover so much so well with seemless transition. This is so addictive. Please post more soon and please please update your other stories too.