This is just as intense and emotional the second time around as the first. So powerful.
Reviewer: lisa Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/03/23 02:15 am
Oooh so you went there and you went all the way.
I love you for that.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/21 04:46 am
I needed like an entire minute to sit and process that one. Very intense and powerful writing Mirage. Your command of the language and these characters is impressive as hell. The intensity between Lyle and Parker stunned me. She is not suicidal. She was testing him I think and showing him she isn't scared. I think she wants him to fight. She's a ballsy woman, has always been. But I'm still on the edge of my seat with my bottom jaw on table here. You remind us all of Jarod's creepiness and even I feel his eyes on them from here but I hope he isn't watching. I want him to move forward with Parker and I don't know how she can do that feeling this freaked out by him. I'm freaked out by him too and now when I watch an episode I always, say, "yep, Mirage was right. He's being stalky and weird." I didn't see it when I was younger. But it was right in my face the entire time. I thought he was good and the others were all bad. Now I think Jarod is kind of bad. Like Dexter and Lucifer in some ways. I need more of this either way. You're like crack cocaine and meth and oxy. But more addictive.
Reviewer: Monica_Bitch Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/21 01:00 am
Wow I'm blown away by your writing. I love all of Parker's internal dialog. My GOD you capture her and all of these characters brilliantly and your descriptive work is stunning. I can see everything and everyone. You keep me coming back. I'm stoked that Lyle is getting some help even if it's not what he thinks of as help. I will read this chapter again and again. It's all beautiful and amazingly well written. Please don't ever stop writing. More!!!
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/21 01:36 am
Mirage, Mirage, I can never get enough of your writing. I'm eternally impressed and cannot wait to see where you'll take us next.
Congrats!
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 11/08/21 04:34 am
So... the art? The way you talk about art? Is that part related to a certain actor's art? I'm really curious.
You ARE an author. When I'd rather read your fanfic and pay you $$$s for it than read the official novels... there is no doubt that you're an author. I crave the next part already. Thanks for sharing and congratulations!
Reviewer: Jerry Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/08/21 10:48 pm
I love the visual descriptive work and.. everything else. Amazed. I'm so amazed. More please?
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 02/08/21 08:35 pm
Oh my GODD! I love this.You totally rule!
More!!
Reviewer: Angie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/21 04:24 pm
I'm in love with your writing. You built the tension and horror up in this chapter and the anxieties and guilt Parker was already feeling would be made so much worse by the silence of that building and the art was evoking emotions, too, and then Lyle added to all of that by talking about Jarod watching and it's common knowledge to all fans that Jarod stalked her, followed her, watched her on the tv series and then he knew she didn't want the police involved in this story and also on tv and that's why she went to get LYle out of hospital in this novel and then later Jarod even told her he had camera inside the Centre because she had stopped chasing him. I think it would be unnerving and really uncomfortable to feel like you're being watched. ON top of all those emotions Lyle began pleading with her for help and crying. I think her tears are called for. She's really vulnerable also after nearly losing Sydney and with Jarod being in her life again and also after learning about the aversion therapy and torture she went through. She probably thought she could save Ray too but Lyle killed him and it's so much pain and so many different emotions. I think she still loves Jarod anyway probably. It's so hard for them always. It's so emotional and vivid. I could read you forever. Please keep wrriting.
Reviewer: Miss Angel Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/07/21 08:27 pm
SQUEE! Oh, wows, Mirage you went there and I'm so thrilled. That was a super intense moment between the twins...just omg! Lyle saw it in her face that Parker could empathetize with him and I love that he offered to free her. Maybe he thinks now he can try to be strong and get through because his sister is doing the same?? I love it. Your writng is hella professional and the characters are always in character. It's all so intriguing. I love the mystery of the painter always painting a blank white canvas on a blank white canvas, and yay Lyle respected those pronouns. You are a rock star! More please?
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 30/07/21 07:45 pm
