We are demanding fans! I love that they tasted each other although Jarod barely got a taste before things took a turn. In hindsight reading this is still exciting even though I know what will happen next..still suspense and that's powerful. I know why Parker reacted that. way now but still wish she hadn't... such a masterpiece!!

Please update this and all of your brilliant stories Mirage. Don't be like Steve and Craig and keep us waiting decades. You haven't yet. You always update but I'm beginning to worry. It's been a few weeks. I will try to stay patient. You keep them in character and the dialog is freaking incredible. I appreciate your hard work. More, please?

Top notch. The plotting and writing are terrific as are the characters and dialouge. I can tell you put alot of time and thought into your writing to make execution and transitions seamless and the ease of reading is nothing but good can't rate this anything but all stars. Please write more when you can. You're always missed. It's a crying shame you aren't writing the novels.

Omg I love how they were with each other. So playful and lighthearted. Mirage! You make my heart beat faster. 

Jarod's "I get to watch your face while I drive you completely out of your mind" makes me soooo freaking hot.

You do this perfectly.

More please.

Your writing is vivid and well thought out. I saw no typos, no errors, just the bliss and amazing prose you're known for. I hope you'll post more soon. Your talents are a gift to us and I appreciate everything you do.

Please give me more. Thanks for adding some sex even if not real sex and just oral. OMG. I need more. I guess Im glad syn is ok too. You did make me feel bad for him but he kind of has it coming.

I can't stop reading, can't stop loving this. I need more.

Those positions... are they possible? So like is Jarod ..he must have pushed his hands beneath her butt and lifted and when he shifted her to one arm her butt was like probably on his arm? 

You're skinny aren't you? You're always writing stuff that makes me go..wow, skinny people sex. Like h0w  Parker leans all the way to her knees with her forehead? Is that possible for some women? I'm not a really skinny person.. and I get that you have to write for a skinny person because she's skinny but ...it's motivation for me to lose weight cos skinny people sex is ultra hot ... isn't it, Mirage? I love the story.

So glad Sydney is ok again and I thought he would be. You love him. Please post more soon.

The chapter notes are hilarious lol. The important thing is that Syd is alive but what we want more of is Jarod and Parker. I didn't expect the certain activity but oh my god I'm so glad you included it. I have to say that Jarod has been sufficiently dark just being the guy I remember from the series and you've done an exceptional job of fleshing out all of the characters and not filling this with details. You left me wanting info that you'll probally provide in due time. THere are story arcs and not everything can happen at once so I get that. You didn't give me too much certainly. You didn't start out too slowly but you also didn't give everything away too soon. I saw no typos or grammatical errors and I just love this. You're a gift to the fandom and to writing. Congratulations and thank you.

Bravo! I love how you open in an emergency room waiting and then show the doubt Jarod begins to feel and why. You explain things perfectly and don't get bogged down in the details. It's a fine line and you are a high wire walker I guess because you don't cross the line into too many details.

I like how you gave us details of the weekend, and transitioned beautifully between scenes, present and past. Nick found them at a pretty low point after both of them were remembering the past and suffering from the Centre's crimes. and still upset about Sydne. That was an excellent choice that allowed Nick to think they were just upset for Sydney and nothing else was going on there.

You've implied all along that there has been a deep relationship between Sydney and his family, Parker let it slip to Jarod that Nicholas knew about Parker and Sydney's closeless, because they're all close. Michele gave Parker love and comfort and they are really familiar with each other and Parker is used to letting them fuss over her because she didn't object and wasn't strong enough at the time, and then Sydney said everyone he loves is in the same room so that means Jarod has been seeing Sydney, Michele, and Nicholas too. But they kept the gatherings separate. I want to know more about those relationships and if Sydney thought Parker avoided Jarod because of the Centre or some other reason. Did they like have two separate birthday parties and stuff, one for Jarod to attend and one for Parker to attend, or, what? You said 6 faces so that means Broots and Debbie were there? Does that mean gatherings involved Broots and Debbie, too? I want to know more about the relationships and how deep they all are.

Gotta say, the "certain activity" was amazing and I'm glad the people you let read this asked for dirty details but this wasn't dirty. It was nice and loving, it was really sweet and tastefully written and you stun me Mirage. I like that Parker instigated the oral sex and I love their funny conversations, and flirting. It's amazing. I also like that the weekend of oral sex followed years of communication and bonding and Jarod trying to understand her, and he's Jarod so yeah, he does put a positive spin on everything. He's so hopeful.

So brilliant job as always and thanks for being you and being here and ... just thanks. :)

Oh holy mother of... GIRL! You're the best. The best. Thank you so much for this. I was expecting any kind of sex because the story is amazing without it but those two went and had the best hottest kind of sex ORAL and holy wow had to grab the hubby and come back to this. So satisfying Mirage. Thank you.

OMG. Just omg. I can't get enough of this.

Hot hot hot and hot.

I can't help but to see Michael T. Weiss and Andrea here, doing this. You're awesome.

More!!

Ohhhhh! So wow. Had to change my panties. That was hot and hot. I love the way you write, how professional it is and how well plotted and written. You added oral sex to appease fans, how cool is that, and I can't tell where you added anything because it's so seamless, like it had belonged there, all the transitions were smooth. Something DID happen, but not sex sex, just oral, but that's amazing. I need more. More details. More sex. WOW. Just freaking wow. I love how chelly and Nick takes care of Parker and I need more of that too. So intense and rich. Powerful Mirage. More, I beg you.