After all of the bickering and threats  Jarod tells her to lock the door. That's true love right there. I didn't catch that the first go around. THat's proof he loves her. Oh, Mirage. You always write something special and you write it exceptionally....just spectacular.

More. Please.

I'm on stay-at-home-holiday and I gotta say that I would have done that a lot less often in the past if I'd known I'd be staying at home to stay well and avoid dying in a pandemic because of maskholes for a friggin' year and into the unknown future.

I checked in here just to see if maybe you were writing and here you are writing. OMG Mirage what would I do without you? I can't say enough good things about your stories, how tightly woven to brilliance they are and your writing voice that assures me you've got this.

I can't find anything to complain about. I can stop reading and will be reviewing more of your stories and omg I'm so glad there are more stories from you.

Thanks for being you.

I applaud you.

More of this!

Please update soon!!

Amazingly written. So professional. I hope Syd is ok. More, please, please, please?

Thank you for this! Thank you for still being here. Thank you for not having Sydney saved at the dreaded "last minute" trope. I hope he's ok but the story is the story and I love it and it's plausible. It's an amazing ride, Mirage. Give me more!!

I have a question about Michael T. Weiss, but first let me say that I'm impressed. I have no tips or suggestions. You've got this and you know what you're doing and where to put the characters. It's a dark one though. I guess that makes sense because the Centre was dark and there were going to lobotomize Kyle on the series so. I have no complaints and look forward to reading more. My question is do you think Michael resembles Keana Reeves? I think he does. They look so much alike. You probably get these questions all the time but I still have to ask. I don't know anyone  who knows this series and have no one to chat with about it. Keep writing. My addiction needs to be fed.

So many visuals here. The entire story is like being right there with them. It's like watching the dvds only this will have an ending. You write like the professionals and really need to be on the Pretender team.

It's all stunning Mirage.

"When did you decide to care if I mind? You break in, threaten-" Parker fell silent with alarming abruptness. The rage dissolved with the same suddenness it had erupted from her. "Jarod," she whispered tremulously, "what are we going to do?"

I can't get enough. Pretender perfection. More please?

Oh doh. I just looked at your profile and saw you have other works and you've completed tons of them. I don't have to ask you to keep writing. Sorry. Sometimes I'm a faithless heathen but I have begun reading way too many fics that never got finished and I hate being left hanging .. I say that after being left hanging by Sickle and Mitchel for forever.

Is Sydney gonna be ok?

Please update soon.

Oh, let Jarod and Miss Parker get together!

Tell me more about that weekend. I need the dirty details.

It's always a pleasure Mirage. I gasped in horror, giggled in amusement, shook my head in agreement with Jarod and grinned way too much. You know these characters and where to put them and do it brilliantly.

More please?

Thank you for updating, and it's an amazing update. I haven't seen these characters MORE in character since IOTH aired. I know I have said that before about your writing, but this time you surpassed yourself in excellence and professionalism. It's not an insult either. It means you're even better now than you were before and that means you just keep on getting better and when I think I can't be more impressed you blow me completely away. I don't know how you do it but I'm so glad you do it. I hope you will always write for us. Congrats!

Love Jen!