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Title: Chapter 10

Thank you. Thank you for updating. Thank you for saying what I've always felt is true. Lyle is also a victim of the Centre. Jarod helped Kyle because that his blood. He helped Ethan because that's his blood. He doesn't see that Lyle and Kyle and Ethan were all raised by Raines and he never had any sympathy for Lyle at all. I'm glad Parker laid out the truth the way she did but not in a cheesy way. She still doesn't trust Lyle or Jarod or anyone and I don't blame her. Jarod would still have his doubts no matter what Lyle said. But at least the truth has been said. I feel sorry for Lyle. I used to always feel so bad for him. He didn't have the love Jarod did. He didn't have Sydney. Raines just wanted people to do his evil deeds for him. Sydney wanted to mold Jarod for greatness and knew he'd have to show respect and be kind to do that. You nailed it of course. Thank you. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/20 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 10

Woot. I was watching the VP debate over here in the US while reaading this ...and it's like Parker and Jarod are having their own debate and MP always wipes the floor with Jarod's a$$ because she's bad ass just like Vice President Harris is.

So give us more and thanks for keeping me sane this past 400 years ... it's only been about 4 but GD it feels like 400. Then covid happen and I really thought I'd lose my sh!t. I have clung to your writing. Know that and never think you don't make a difference. You do. I'm still here. SO thank you. More please.. when you can. I know life is .. sucky and busy sometimes.

Reviewer: Melinda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/10/20 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 10

STOKED! I've been checking to see and finally!!! You've updated.

I love the characterizations and dialog and your transitions. Everybody says that stuff about you tho. You also made this really plausible. If Willie had been the only one to disappear in the past it wouldn't have made sense for Jarod to bring it up but because others Sydney worked with disappeared it does make complete sense. I love this. OOoouugh the tension is so much between those two. I love Lyle's reaction to Jarod grinning. Lyle was happier when Jarod didn't grin at her threats lol. Perfect. I need more.

I'd share you on twitter, too, but I'm shadow suspended or something and because of corona they are so super slow about reading my email and unsuspending. So sorry about that!!

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/10/20 09:28 pm
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