That's really Sydney's mum and pop and last name is Mikhail. Verrry good Mirage. So you do know how many psychiatrists it takes to change a lightbulb. You understood the assignment. Brilliantly done.
Reviewer: lisa Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/03/23 04:08 am
Mirage Mirage Mirage. I think you've created the most disturbed character in the history of characters. I'm completely intrigued.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/21 04:17 am
How are you able to write so many high quality stories at once? I can't even put my thoughts together enough to write one story. You must sit and write for hours? It sounds so hard. I'm glad you do it. What on earth would I do without my pretender fix? I'd lose my mind.. that's what. I need my people. The pretender people are my people. Thank you as always for sharing your talents with us.
Author's Response:
Hi. I don't sit and write for hours. I'm afraid I don't have that kind of time to work with. I have minutes to devote to scribbling. The most difficult bits of writing are trying to find the time to scribble my thoughts and trying to find time to update. Ah, I feel you; I love The Pretender people, too. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Melinda Signed [Report This]Date: 26/05/20 09:52 pm
Please say you're going to add more soon even if you just updated. I really love this.
Author's Response:
Hi. I will continue to update-- not immediately, probably. Thank you for reading and reviewing- and for understanding.
Reviewer: Gwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/05/20 07:52 pm
Man I'm feeling it hard for Sydney right now. Please write faster.
Author's Response:
I'm trying to set aside writing time. There's not enough time. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/20 08:45 pm
Bluebird and MK ultra. More Centre secrets and it's all so plausible. This is a really tight story and well written and the chapters are so short but that's ok. You didn't over do with the details. You know how much to give, how much detail to add. I'm so afraid for Sydney. shuddering over here. More soon?
Author's Response:
I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Chloe.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 13/05/20 02:33 am
I had no idea Sydney and Jacob's parents were named Greta and Jean Mikhail. Are they really or did you give them names for this story? Either way honey I love it. It's terrifying and Jarod's being his scary self too and I can't believe he didn't show Miss P that side of him more often. I want MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Hi. Yes, unless Sydney was lying to the evil monster-doctor, those are the names of his parents. We learned about Sydney's parents and some of his past in the Hazards episode (season two?) if memory serves. I'm probably wrong about the episode title. Ha. Jarod. I think he revealed the darkness to Parker often enough. You saw that homicidal glare in IOTH. He should be more careful with that. You shall have more. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Leese.
Reviewer: Leese Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/05/20 05:14 pm
I have always expected something like this to happen to Sydney. His crimes were always whitewashed. I guess he didn't kidnap Jarod but you make me realize that he's just as guilty. I know he would have been killed by the Centre or reassigned or brainwashed but he's still guilty. I know he treated Jarod as well as he could but he still denied him love and he's still guilty. Sydney is guilty. This guy thinks Sydney is Jacob and Jacob did kidnap Jarod and knew all along and until the end when he gets killed he probably did a lot of other bad stuff to Jarod. This is scarily plausible. Even if Sydney dies in this I will like it and continue reading. I want you to know that. It's so professionally written. I mean... really. I can't even with you. I've read books that I paid for that were required reading for uni and they weren't even close to this good. You should publish something. Really.
Reviewer: Zelda Parker Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/05/20 01:56 pm
I'm so excited for more. Exquisite as always Mirage.
Reviewer: MlleParker Signed [Report This]Date: 11/05/20 09:56 pm
Sooo I googled and what he injected Syd with is LSD and morphine. That's not a fun trip. I love the details of Syd's spin out of reality and declining condition where he's now lost the use of English and is speaking in French I took a few years of it and understand enough to understand. I'm hooked. This is the last chapter so far please add another one and hook a sister up you know.
Reviewer: Jodi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/20 12:21 am
I've been reading this and decided to leave a review and that's rare for me. This is profound and not at all what I expected of fanfic. You're a stand out author and I don't say that lightly. It's been a pleasure to read this. I'm eager to read more.
Reviewer: Richard McKinley Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/05/20 09:36 pm
You're building the tension on Sydney's side of the story and on Miss Parker and Jarod's and dang I'm eager to see it all resolved and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Sydney will be ok. You always keep me guessing right up until the end how the story will go and no matter what I guess you always do something completely different that blows my mind. More please and as soon as you can.
Reviewer: Jillian Signed [Report This]Date: 09/05/20 08:52 pm
so not a Sydney fan but i'm worried about the guy. so plausible and scary. i hope you'll add more. really want to know what happens next.
Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/05/20 12:38 am
Wow. Please don't leave me waiting too long for more. I need more.
That is all.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 09/05/20 12:01 am
This is terrifying Mirage I just want you to know. It's brilliantly written. You are wordsmith and an amazing storyteller and narrator. You know the characters and where to put them and how to use them. You do it all wonderfully and describe it and make it all plausible .... and omg I love it but omg that is why it's so terrifying and I want more. Is Sydney going to live? I know you love Sydney. I hope Jarod will come to his *@!&ing senses and help Parker find Sydney before it's too late. My adrenaline is like... boom. More. Soon. OMG.
Reviewer: Xena Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/20 04:17 am
Fast update! This is scary and exciting... a horror novel Mirage! Thank you so much.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 07/05/20 11:07 pm
